A Naruto Cristmas

[Magnus Dragomar]

In Konoha town,
not a ninja did stir,
except from Jiraiya,
With his sexy girls,
He had no shame,
having *** on Santa's day,
except for when tsunade,
made him pay,
she kicked his ass good,
all day and night,
Until santa said,
hey, tsunade don't do that,
Tsunade went into a rage,
she stuffed the presents up the wrong way,
sasuke jumped out and declared he was gay,
and all lived happily on cristmas day.

 

[lost N love]

uh needs more details

 

[Magnus Dragomar]

it's meant to be a short poem, I could of made it longer.

 

[Magnus Dragomar]

your just mad because sasuke is gay

 

[lost N love]

it could be worked on...... Not to be rude man i like it but it needs to be worked on.

 

[Sinister]

Nice poem. but ya kinda used the same ending sounds over and over again. but it is still nice

 

[Magnus Dragomar]

it was meant to rhyme

 

[lost N love]

and i am gay. -.-....... thats why i have sasuke up.....

 

[Effie]

Kay then

 

[Musashibo]

haha lol it was pretty funny.

 

[rinnegan sage]

rotflol xd

 

[Adachi]

I'm pure poem writer...O_O At least you could have capitalized some stuff...
And spelled Christmas right...O_O

Ah well, forgive me for my rudeness. Literature so happens to be a major subject of mine...anyhow, the last part where Sasuke declared he was gay...and the ironic ending...epic dude, epic. xd

 

[Passion]

NIce.

 

[Toad Sage]

Nice poem. but ya kinda used the same ending sounds over and over again. but it is still nice

This.