a minato what if shippuden chapter 6

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ok ima try to finsih this in this chapter so i can get into writeing something better ( like a ninja war)

Minato: i see the six tails and that clan need help well we will send squad seven.

kakashi: sensei i think it would be best to send tenzo in my place for this mission.

minato: fine bring him in...\

later...

tenzo: yes hokage sama

minato: i am assining you to a mission with my sons squad you are best for the missiuon since you have the first hokages cells here are the details, this is not an anbus mission take of your mask and also your name will be yamato.

yamato: under stood hokage sama

naruto: i wonderwhat mission we are getting.

sasuke:...

sakura: naruto calm down would ya.

yamato: hello sqaud seven.

naruto: huh who are you?

yamato: i will be taking over as squad sevens captin till further notice today i will be leading you on your mission...

one filler arc later...

naruto is standing next to utakaka. pain approchs

utkaka: whos there?



pain: the six tails utakaka of the mist and the nine tails naruto uzumaki of the leaf village allow me to capture you your death shall lead to peace.

naruto: your crazy if you thinkwe're just gonna let you take us!

pain: you do not listen then i have no choiuce but to fight you.

naruto: lets go!

naruto makes a rasengan and charges forward the perta path garbs naruto from behind and starts sucking his chakra.

naruto: ( its absorbing my chakra)

naruto starts gathering sage chakra. utakaka tries to free naruto useing his bubble relase but the chakra is aborbed pains animal path summon a gaint rhino utkakaka jumps over it and makes hand seals he then blows into his bubble blower and a gaint bubble filled with acid slime inside goes forward at it the bubble pops and the acid hits the rhino it poofs away the. narutos sage chakra forces the path to turn to stone naruto breaks free.

mean while...

kakazu: we finally arrived in the land of fire.

hidan: you could have told me we where after the nine tails now can you give me back my head!

kakazu throws hidans head at his body they both fall hidan reattachs his head some how and stands up kakashi asuma and shikamaru appear in front of them.

kakashi: the akatsuki.

asuma: we're under orders to restrin or destoy you.

hidan: did you hear that kakazu they are gonna destroy us!

kakazu takes off his cloak and the fire beast mak thing comes out and shoots a fire ball at kakashi kakashi jumps back and forms a water rasengan in his hand and a wind rasengan in the other ( a small version of it nbot the big shuriken one) and slams them together a gaint wave of water over takes the fire and continues at them hidan pushs his swrd under ground it come sup from under ground and warps around asuma he pulls on the swords string thing and asuma falls to the ground hidan then throws five kunai at him shikamaru makes a shadow wall out of his shadow and it blocks it he then frees asuma with his shadows. kakazu spits out mud towards kakashis water/wind combo he then relases a fire jutsu at it making it a lava vs water and wind tech the water and lava clash and it hardens into a black rock volcanic fumes come from it.

kakashi: now mangekyo sharingan!

the rock in front of kakashi suddenly disappears in an instand and reappears on top of kakazu.

kakashi: i transported the rock ontop of him.

kakashi garbs his eye in pain the ms deactiveates.

shikamau: asuma!

kakshi looks over to see asuma on the ground dieing he rushs over

hidan: you did in kakazu thanks now jasin can punish him

ghost kakazu: i'm in the after life and guess what there is no jasin!

hidan: get out of my head you b**** i've had enough of you.

shikamaru quickly has his shadow from around hidan like a cackon he then squzzes his shadow crushing hidans body to the point that he can't stand he then completly destroys his body down to the last atom.

mean while...

utakaka: my body

naruto: stand up utakaka.

naruto is on the ground and so is utkaka.

pain: its over you two are coming with me bansho tenin.

the two go flying into pain he garbs them utkaka blows into his bubble blower and pain drops him by mistake.

utkaka: ( i swore to myself i would never use your power but i have no choice please lend me your chakra)

chakra tails begin mto surround utkakata 3 tails can be seen his chakra cloack intead of bing bubbley is slimey he jumps forward at the deva path and punchs it in the face naruto goes flying back a couple feet and lands in the woods.

utkaka: thank you for every thing. ( please forgive me i can't teach you after all and just when i decided to be your master to)

pain: the six tails is coming out then?

he appears behind pain and knees him in the gut he then blows out a large amount of bubbles from his mouth the bubbles become one big bubble and falls on himself and pain water begins to fill the bubble filling it entirely the water becomes stickly pain can no longer move.the six tails appears ( the tailed beast itself) it relases a tailed beast bomb at pain it hits right on destroying the bubble in the process utkaka falls to the ground panting.

pain: that was a close call but in the end you can't defeat god.



naruto appears behind pain with a one tailed chakra shord and punchs him him in the back of the head pain back flips and lands on his feet faceing naruto naruto charges forward and tries to punch pain pain blocks each punchs the chakra shrod arm branchs off and swipes pain in the side of the head he uses shira tensei the arm goes flying off and naruto goes flying back pain appears behind him and garbs his head he slams naruto into the ground and then throws him into a tree naruto goes 5 tails ( no sleketon yet) and appears over pain in mil seconds his arms extend and swipe pain far into the woods ( 50 feet) the arm extends again and garbs pain then it slams him into the ground a bunchs of times pain uses shira tensei again and punchs the gro8und causeing water to come up a large wave of water comes towards naruto naruto roars and the wave goes back at pain pain uses shira tensei again the water stops and lands around him pain then appears behind naruto narutos chakra tail hits him in the side of the head he hits anotehr tail which garbs alot of him pain punchs naruto in the face as he turn around to use a tailed beast bomb it fires in the direction of a city the attack goes off killing many people naruto head buts pain and lets go of him he goes flying back again.pain charges at naruto utakaka appears behind pain and punchs him in the back ( he has on tail cloack active) he goes flying into naruto who punchs him upwards naruto and utkaka chrage a tailed beast bomb and fire it at pain

pain: almighty push.

what happens to the village in the manga happens to the terrin and slams naruto and utkakaka into the ground aswell as send their tailed beast bombs back at them selfs. naruto goes into seven tails mode and utkaka goes into 5 tails. they both get up the arm of the nine tails garbs pain and slams him inbto the ground.

pain: noother choice they are to strong. plantary devastion.

pain throws the black orb into the sky and all thye objects go flying into the sky naruto and utkaka end up in there naruto goes eight tails and breakds out breatheing fire and roar sending a shock wava at pain which sends him into a rock behind him utakaka breaks out aswell they both form tailed beast bombs.

yamato: what in the world?

sasuke: whats going on the force of that battle is so strong.

sakura: i'm to scard to go its already deadluy standing here as it is.

the tailed beast bombs go off pain manges to dodge in time.

minato telports to yamato.

minato: wheres naruto?

yamato points to the battle

minato: crap naruto please let me make it in time.

minato starts dashing towards naruto location.
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nagato: their power its unbilevable

konan: don't exert your self nagato you can't take much more.

nagato: the sage of six paths fought the ten tails all by himself and won capaerd to that this is nothing.

minato jumps ontop of the gaint rock in which naruto is stuck in.

naruto: ROAR!

minato: ( he's in so much pain naruto i'm sorry it toke me so long to get here but don't worry daddys here now) uzumaki sealing style chakra reverse seal.

minato places his hand on naruto and utkaka their chakra goes back inside of them and they return to normal minato garbs them and land son the ground.

minato: naruto ( he looks awful what happened?)

pain: the fourth hokage i persume

minato: you must be the bastar* who did this to my son?

pain: do you hate me?

minato: yes i do but jiraya sensei said hate only breads more hate which makes a never ending chain.

pain: but look at it again after all i've done can ypou really forgive me can you tryuly belive in master jiryas words now?

minato: matser jirya?

pain: i to once learned jutsu from him.

tears flow from minatos eyes when seeing narutos burned face.

pain: i held back the best i could he is the jinchuriki he is not dead i need him alive.

minato: i don't want to hear this any more.

pain: you can not defeat a god hand over the nine tails it will bring peace.

naruto tries to stand.

minato: no naruto stay down.

naruto: thats not the real pain the real one is sending chakra signals to him thats nothing moire then a dead body being controled i want to talk to him.

team seven appear.

pain: no matter how many you bring the results will never change no one can defeat god.

minato: i've had enough of you.

minato appears above pain and rasengans his back into the ground defeating him.

minato: for a god you went down fast.

naruto is no longer where he was any way one talk no jutsu to nagato later...

nagato: i think i'll put my trust in you naruto uzumaki gedo art of rinne rebirth ( he revives a bunch of nobodys konan talks to naruto blah blah blah )

later...

utkaka: thank you for every thing i can now teach my puppil and i will return to the mist village.

naruto: i'm glad :)

minato: naruto when we get home your grounded for a month.

naruto; WHAT!?

minato: you could have died today in that fight plus you disppeared from me to talk to a stranger who wnated to take you.

naruto: AH!

mean while...

bee: bro

A: bee double larint!

kisame: water style explodeing shark w...

kismaes head is taken off and is later to be revaled a zetsu clone next time madara declres war
 
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Great job dude, playing the music as you reach it and reading with it on is epic. Thanks for sending me the link. Can't wait for the next one.
 

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great job i really think it was 10/10 this time
;D i am dying for the next one

when i read this
this was in my mind
yamato: what in the world?

sasuke: whats going on the force of that battle is so strong.

sakura: i'm to scard to go its already deadluy standing here as it is.

Yamato: imma call lord hokag

Minato: *is watching spongebob* lol patrick got hit by a coconut
*checks celly for txt* crap ill go after this is over(20 min later)

minato telports to yamato.

minato: what?.....Commercials were really long.... wheres naruto?

yamato points to the battle

minato: crap naruto please let me make it in time.

minato starts dashing towards naruto location.
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nagato: their power its unbilevable

konan: don't exert your self nagato you can't take much more.

nagato: the sage of six paths fought the ten tails all by himself and won capaerd to that this is nothing.

minato jumps ontop of the gaint rock in which naruto is stuck in.

naruto: ROAR!

minato: ( he's in so much pain naruto i'm sorry it took me so long to get here but don't worry daddys here now) HOKAGE arts: Hug fest no jutsu:pwease:
 
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