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ok chapter 13...
minato: in the end orocimaru's dead.
the girl concuoler: then the villages biggest threat is gone we're safe again.
minato: no there is still an even more evil man.
minato rememebrs madara.
danzo: madara right?
minato: that's correct and....
mean while...
naruto: i think that's enough training for now time to go get some ramen.
naruto runs to the ramen shop...
the two akatsuki members are seen in the tea house ( sasori is inside of his puppet)
asuma: kakashi what are you doing here?
kakashi: i'm gettng something to put on a grave. and i'm waiting for some one.
kurenai: is it for obito?
the two akatsuki members placed tir drinks on the table and disppear kakashi nods and asuma and kurenai dash off.
they are now walking down beside the river asuma and kurenai cacth them.
asuma: you two aren't from around here are you? what are you doing in this village?
kisame: this guy annoys me may i kill him?
sasori: just don't keep me waiting.
kisame: they are as good as dead.
kisame slams his sword into the ground he then picks itr up and starts swinging at asuma asuma dodges each one and takes out his weapons he infuses his wind chakra into one and throws it at kisame he blocks it with his sword.
asuma: it's absorbing the chakra in my weapon.
kisme then jumps at asuma and swings his blade down asuma blocks it with his weapons the blade gets down to his arm and kisame ribs his blade back.
kisame: my sword shark skin doesn't slice it cuts you to ribbons!
asuma jumps back with his hand on one arm covering his wound.
a tree starts to surrond sasori.
sasori: a genjutsu that's useless agaisnt me.
kerunai stabs him with a kunai but it does nothing.
kerunai: what!
his tail break the tree and garbs her by the neck and he starts to choke her.
kakashi jumps in and breaks the tail in half with a kunai.
kakashi: that's not his real form!
kakashi garbs kerunai and places her on the ground.
sasori: now that you've broken the tail i guess i have to rebuild it i guess ikt's time to fight you face to face.
sasori get out of hiroku and places him in a scroll.
sasori: now shall i make you my next puppet?
sasori takes out a scroll and smoke appears...
jman: hey short stuff.
naruto: pervy sage!
j man: i have to look for a women called tsunade and i'm taking you with me.
naruto: i don't wanna go i need to train more.
j man: ( really i have already thought you every thing except sage mode) well it's a mission your father wants you to go with me.
naruto: fine
the walk out of the village and go to tankaku town...
kakashi: huff huff ( he almost got me)
sasori: that sharingan must have saved you.
kakashi: you know the longer this macth goes on the easier it is to tell how your moving your puppet.
sasori: ( he's right i better end this) iron sand world desction.
a large amount of iron sand goes intoi the sky like a cloud and starts to rain down on akashi like spikes kakashi manges to dodge most of them the last one manages to cut his shoulder a large piller of it then goes flying at him kakashi puts his arms up to prtect himself ( he can bearly move now that the poisen is insdie of him) the sand cumbles away and the thrid kazekage puppet is flying at him with a sword.
kakashi takes out a kunai and blocks it with that.
kakashi: must be some kind of poisen.
kakashi pushs it back and he fles back wards landing on his knee's
sasori: to be able to still move even with my poisen in him impreesive.
asuma jumps to kakashi's aid kisame appears next to sasori.
kakashi: it's naruto your after isn't it? i know you two are memebrs of the akatsuki.
sasori: kisame we'll be taking him with us but kill the others
kisame rushs it and tries to strike kakashi.
guy: leaf hurricane!
isame: what do we have here?
guy: i'm might guy ( teeth spakles)
kisame: your might guy huh? more like mighty stupid looking guy.
guy: asuma take kakashi to the meds and kurenai to don't worry about me i called in help from the anbu black ops i just have to hold them off.
kisame: you've got guts i'll give you that.
sasori: no kisame we're not here to draw annetion to our selfs for now we retreat.
kisame: ( says the man who put a gaint cloud of irn sand in the sky and this cloaks give away who we are i mean really) ok
the two dash off.
later...
knock knock knock
naruto opens the door.
sasori: your coming with us.
naruto: huh?
kisame: hard to belive this bvrat carrys the nine tailed demon fox inside of him.
naruto: ( how does he know about the fox)
kisame: maybe i should cut off his legs just incase he makes a run for it.
naruto: what! i'm not goiung anywhere with youy two weridos just because you say so. rasengan.
kisame swings his sword abosbing the chakra from the rasengan he then knee's naruto in the gut and places his sword under naruto's gut he then swings his blade and naruto goes crashing into the ground. naruto gets up and starts to gather chakra from the nine tails kisame swings his blade takes the chakra he then elbows naruto in the gut sending him across the hall way and into a wall he lands on his hands and knee's.
naruto: rasen shuriken!
kisame: useless.
naruto dashs forward and ppears in front of him and tries to hit him with the jutsu kisame aborbs the jutsu and garbs naruto's belt he then slams naruto into the ground picks him up spins him and then throws him into the air kisames aims his sword naruto lands on the side of the sword and kisame rips his sword off naruto leaving a large gash across naruto gut naruto lands on the ground.
sasri: finish him i don't like to be kept waiting.
kisame swings his blade down about to hit naruto j man appears and hits kisame in the stomach sending him flying j man's clone then hits him with rasengan from behind making him fly back at jman he kicks kisames head into the ground as he reachs him.
naruto: pervy sage!
naruto's eyes turn to the color of the foxs the gash on his stommach starts to heal.
kisame trips j man he back flips and lands in front of naruto kisame stands up.
jman: i knew it was naruto you where after.
naruto: ( then why didn't you come sooner **** it)
sasori: ( we can't handle him by our selfs.) kisame lets go.
jamn: your not going anywhere!
the ground is now covered in iron sand j man trips and kisame and sasori escape.
jam: darn it they got away.
nothing else important happens they find tsunade she comes back she heals kakashi and lee and all the injuired ninja next time um...
tell me how i did! if you liked press thank you.
minato: in the end orocimaru's dead.
the girl concuoler: then the villages biggest threat is gone we're safe again.
minato: no there is still an even more evil man.
minato rememebrs madara.
danzo: madara right?
minato: that's correct and....
mean while...
naruto: i think that's enough training for now time to go get some ramen.
naruto runs to the ramen shop...
the two akatsuki members are seen in the tea house ( sasori is inside of his puppet)
asuma: kakashi what are you doing here?
kakashi: i'm gettng something to put on a grave. and i'm waiting for some one.
kurenai: is it for obito?
the two akatsuki members placed tir drinks on the table and disppear kakashi nods and asuma and kurenai dash off.
they are now walking down beside the river asuma and kurenai cacth them.
asuma: you two aren't from around here are you? what are you doing in this village?
kisame: this guy annoys me may i kill him?
sasori: just don't keep me waiting.
kisame: they are as good as dead.
kisame slams his sword into the ground he then picks itr up and starts swinging at asuma asuma dodges each one and takes out his weapons he infuses his wind chakra into one and throws it at kisame he blocks it with his sword.
asuma: it's absorbing the chakra in my weapon.
kisme then jumps at asuma and swings his blade down asuma blocks it with his weapons the blade gets down to his arm and kisame ribs his blade back.
kisame: my sword shark skin doesn't slice it cuts you to ribbons!
asuma jumps back with his hand on one arm covering his wound.
a tree starts to surrond sasori.
sasori: a genjutsu that's useless agaisnt me.
kerunai stabs him with a kunai but it does nothing.
kerunai: what!
his tail break the tree and garbs her by the neck and he starts to choke her.
kakashi jumps in and breaks the tail in half with a kunai.
kakashi: that's not his real form!
kakashi garbs kerunai and places her on the ground.
sasori: now that you've broken the tail i guess i have to rebuild it i guess ikt's time to fight you face to face.
sasori get out of hiroku and places him in a scroll.
sasori: now shall i make you my next puppet?
sasori takes out a scroll and smoke appears...
jman: hey short stuff.
naruto: pervy sage!
j man: i have to look for a women called tsunade and i'm taking you with me.
naruto: i don't wanna go i need to train more.
j man: ( really i have already thought you every thing except sage mode) well it's a mission your father wants you to go with me.
naruto: fine
the walk out of the village and go to tankaku town...
kakashi: huff huff ( he almost got me)
sasori: that sharingan must have saved you.
kakashi: you know the longer this macth goes on the easier it is to tell how your moving your puppet.
sasori: ( he's right i better end this) iron sand world desction.
a large amount of iron sand goes intoi the sky like a cloud and starts to rain down on akashi like spikes kakashi manges to dodge most of them the last one manages to cut his shoulder a large piller of it then goes flying at him kakashi puts his arms up to prtect himself ( he can bearly move now that the poisen is insdie of him) the sand cumbles away and the thrid kazekage puppet is flying at him with a sword.
kakashi takes out a kunai and blocks it with that.
kakashi: must be some kind of poisen.
kakashi pushs it back and he fles back wards landing on his knee's
sasori: to be able to still move even with my poisen in him impreesive.
asuma jumps to kakashi's aid kisame appears next to sasori.
kakashi: it's naruto your after isn't it? i know you two are memebrs of the akatsuki.
sasori: kisame we'll be taking him with us but kill the others
kisame rushs it and tries to strike kakashi.
guy: leaf hurricane!
isame: what do we have here?
guy: i'm might guy ( teeth spakles)
kisame: your might guy huh? more like mighty stupid looking guy.
guy: asuma take kakashi to the meds and kurenai to don't worry about me i called in help from the anbu black ops i just have to hold them off.
kisame: you've got guts i'll give you that.
sasori: no kisame we're not here to draw annetion to our selfs for now we retreat.
kisame: ( says the man who put a gaint cloud of irn sand in the sky and this cloaks give away who we are i mean really) ok
the two dash off.
later...
knock knock knock
naruto opens the door.
sasori: your coming with us.
naruto: huh?
kisame: hard to belive this bvrat carrys the nine tailed demon fox inside of him.
naruto: ( how does he know about the fox)
kisame: maybe i should cut off his legs just incase he makes a run for it.
naruto: what! i'm not goiung anywhere with youy two weridos just because you say so. rasengan.
kisame swings his sword abosbing the chakra from the rasengan he then knee's naruto in the gut and places his sword under naruto's gut he then swings his blade and naruto goes crashing into the ground. naruto gets up and starts to gather chakra from the nine tails kisame swings his blade takes the chakra he then elbows naruto in the gut sending him across the hall way and into a wall he lands on his hands and knee's.
naruto: rasen shuriken!
kisame: useless.
naruto dashs forward and ppears in front of him and tries to hit him with the jutsu kisame aborbs the jutsu and garbs naruto's belt he then slams naruto into the ground picks him up spins him and then throws him into the air kisames aims his sword naruto lands on the side of the sword and kisame rips his sword off naruto leaving a large gash across naruto gut naruto lands on the ground.
sasri: finish him i don't like to be kept waiting.
kisame swings his blade down about to hit naruto j man appears and hits kisame in the stomach sending him flying j man's clone then hits him with rasengan from behind making him fly back at jman he kicks kisames head into the ground as he reachs him.
naruto: pervy sage!
naruto's eyes turn to the color of the foxs the gash on his stommach starts to heal.
kisame trips j man he back flips and lands in front of naruto kisame stands up.
jman: i knew it was naruto you where after.
naruto: ( then why didn't you come sooner **** it)
sasori: ( we can't handle him by our selfs.) kisame lets go.
jamn: your not going anywhere!
the ground is now covered in iron sand j man trips and kisame and sasori escape.
jam: darn it they got away.
nothing else important happens they find tsunade she comes back she heals kakashi and lee and all the injuired ninja next time um...
tell me how i did! if you liked press thank you.
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