a love poem

[izinagi54]

the doves fly high in the sky
just like your eyes
floating like butterflies

through the fields
i must yield by such beauty
it so consuming and worring
to see you lonely

i wrap you in my arms your hair in the wind
as you wine around my body
your smell sweet as honey
you had me at baby

i look towards the moon and i see you
the goddess of night with my hearts light
not even the sea can keep my love from you
for i shall fly like a dove
far above the oceans below
to be on the moon with my beloved

the wolfs bow down to you
as i am with you and forever i'll be near you
just to travel the seas for you

let hell come with highwater
i will slaughter the demons
just to walk together

lady of the moon
- chris

 

[Colonel Armstrong]

aww

 

[Killer Vision]

this 1 is great bro! +rep

 

[Mystical Ruby]

its nice chris! wease:

 

[Jazzy..]

Reading this made my day. <3
I adore how it basically tells a story throughout most of the poem. ~
What's interesting is you didn't rhyme in every stanza! Which grabs my attention if I do say so myself.
This poem was both lovely and sweet!
Job well done. (;

 

[izinagi54]

ryme never makes true poems
telling a story or paying homage makes a poem
as for this 1. 2 minutes

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

Man, you're such a passionate writer. I love your work. I'm still reading your FF btw, but only on chapter 3. I'll give my entire feedback when I get farther

 

[Mayhem]

Nice poem.

 

[KyoshiroSenju]

Awesome poem bro +rep

 

[Red Monster]

SUPER NICE..

 

[Rorasa]

really nice poem Chris, i think this is the best one so far

 

[ezooone]

great job dude..reminds me to someone special in my life.. T_T haha..

 

[miZu31]

Love it chris! Gaaawwshh