[Romance] A depressed poem

[Scooby Doo]

Moonlight wove dreams in the night,
Snowflakes are dancing outside,
Love’s frozen onto my heart,
Nothing can light its cold hearth.
Summer turned into winter,
There is no more time with her,
Trees are naked, rivers dry,
My soul’s empty, deserts cry,
Streams of tears fill an ocean,
Memories are now ancient.
Why does the past hurt so much,
Why buried ghosts don’t get lost,
Why is the pain so real,
Why did you disappear…​

 

[The7thHokage]

Thats pretty good, mate, but it is truly gloomy u_u

Lighten up, if thats the problem, you will find another one !

 

[Jin]

WHY h:h:h: ?
P.S
I like it very much, but it's very gloomy

 

[Cunning Linguist]

Don't cry Scooby. You can move one. Just focus on yourself for a little while and you'll find someone new without even trying

 

[YokoKurama]

<div class="bbWrapper">Very depressing. I love it! Nice job!</div>

 

[Scooby Doo]

Thats pretty good, mate, but it is truly gloomy u_u

Lighten up, if thats the problem, you will find another one !

WHY h:h:h: ?
P.S
I like it very much, but it's very gloomy

Don't cry Scooby. You can move one. Just focus on yourself for a little while and you'll find someone new without even trying

Thanks guys I'll try I'm venting out with these poems

 

[The7thHokage]

Thanks guys I'll try I'm venting out with these poems

Venting out with poems is better than senseless self-harm, at least.

Dont worry, you can, and you will find a better person ^^

 

[Scooby Doo]

Venting out with poems is better than senseless self-harm, at least.

Dont worry, if you can, and you will find a better person ^^

Thank you!

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

It's a good poem but too depressing .

 

[Scooby Doo]

It's a good poem but too depressing .

Thanks and I know, it was intended to be depressing. Hence the title

 

[Goetia]

Relate-able, I like it.

 

[Scooby Doo]

Relate-able, I like it.

Thanks for reading

 

[Hakairyoku]

I know everyone's already said this, but I agree with them. Very good, but very sad. <3

 

[Scooby Doo]

I know everyone's already said this, but I agree with them. Very good, but very sad. <3

Haha thank you!