LeafSpirit 20
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As some of you guys might know, my mayor in college is creative writting, my dream is to finish school here in the united states and move to japan and try my luck working in a story of a manga. I am currently working on a new series, but some people which I trust completley told me not to publish it yet for copyright reasons.. But I decided to work on a fan fic of sai, the untold story of him.. It is still not completed, and I will keep updating it as I progresse through it, I hope you like it!! And I would love feedback!! Thanks guys...
Lets reverse the intense story of Naruto Uzumaki, and lets go back in time 12 years from the current story made of laughs and tears, and tell the untold story of a boy with no emotions, known as sai in this current day.. A story with tears in it too, but no laughs...
Outisde of the layers of the hidden mist village, 12 years ago.. A leaf is blown away by a dusty wind, a wind of destiny, a wind of mystery and sorrow where a secret dealing is taking place...
Otku: So your finally here, hidden leaf ninja, This is it Ias.. our final deal, you hand over the documents, and secret scrolls of your precious hidden leaf, and ill hand over the scrolls of the hidden mist, just like we planned, together, with you convincing the whole anbu black ops, and me and my secret ninja of the mist by our side, and the help of some sobornates of mine from the hidden rain, well take over your hidden leaf, and my hidden mist village to our please and work with the hidden rain to take over all the nations!! ( Crazy Laughter)
Ias: Here it is, as promised..
Otku: Very well done.. I know see why your head captain of the anbu black ops..
Ias, head of the elite anbu black ops, looked around, and noticed about 9 of Otkus mean very well hidden, two hidden in a left tree, three hidden in a bush, and about 4 scattered around beneath ground..
Ias: I see you still dont completely trust me, Otku, I can see you brought some men along.. Even if this deal were to go wrong, you are extremely strong in your own, for a reason your second choice of becoming the leader of the hidden mist..
Otku: I dont care for this village, I just want power, just like you, and my men, theyre just insurance..
Very well... Said Ias as he whistled and 4 anbu operatives apeared out of nowhere, and started attacking the hidden mist shinobi, and defeating them with ease.. Ias, taking out the mayority of the lot..
Ias: As you can see Otku, Im not a treacherous scum like you, im not the type to backstab my precious village..
Otku, having killed all of Ias anbu partners on his own, confronted Ias.. In a battle that lasted 30 minutes, that was a very closed one, but in the end Ias was victorious.. Badly wounded, Ias returned to the hidden leaf proud of himself of killing Otku and his men, but sad about his comrades death, but he was now acostumed to that.. Having stepped one foot on the hidden leaf, he collapsed on the floor and passed out...
As Ias opened his eyes, his blurry vision adjusted in what looked like a hospital, and the figures of the hokage himself, saritobi, along with his future wife akemi, and his 5 year old child, Ai, which means love and affection.. The third Hokage and Ias started talking about how he got injured, But Ias just lied to the hokage telling him it was because of an S ranked mission.. He didnt want to get the old man worried about the fact that he was working undercover and had figure out one of the strongest shinobi of the mist and his men were ploting an attack on the hiden leaf, and Ias acted out to find out the exact evil plan, and terminate the enemy threat.. As Otku was working alone with his crew, there was no need for an all out war against the hidden mist.. as Otku was working alone..
Lets reverse the intense story of Naruto Uzumaki, and lets go back in time 12 years from the current story made of laughs and tears, and tell the untold story of a boy with no emotions, known as sai in this current day.. A story with tears in it too, but no laughs...
Outisde of the layers of the hidden mist village, 12 years ago.. A leaf is blown away by a dusty wind, a wind of destiny, a wind of mystery and sorrow where a secret dealing is taking place...
Otku: So your finally here, hidden leaf ninja, This is it Ias.. our final deal, you hand over the documents, and secret scrolls of your precious hidden leaf, and ill hand over the scrolls of the hidden mist, just like we planned, together, with you convincing the whole anbu black ops, and me and my secret ninja of the mist by our side, and the help of some sobornates of mine from the hidden rain, well take over your hidden leaf, and my hidden mist village to our please and work with the hidden rain to take over all the nations!! ( Crazy Laughter)
Ias: Here it is, as promised..
Otku: Very well done.. I know see why your head captain of the anbu black ops..
Ias, head of the elite anbu black ops, looked around, and noticed about 9 of Otkus mean very well hidden, two hidden in a left tree, three hidden in a bush, and about 4 scattered around beneath ground..
Ias: I see you still dont completely trust me, Otku, I can see you brought some men along.. Even if this deal were to go wrong, you are extremely strong in your own, for a reason your second choice of becoming the leader of the hidden mist..
Otku: I dont care for this village, I just want power, just like you, and my men, theyre just insurance..
Very well... Said Ias as he whistled and 4 anbu operatives apeared out of nowhere, and started attacking the hidden mist shinobi, and defeating them with ease.. Ias, taking out the mayority of the lot..
Ias: As you can see Otku, Im not a treacherous scum like you, im not the type to backstab my precious village..
Otku, having killed all of Ias anbu partners on his own, confronted Ias.. In a battle that lasted 30 minutes, that was a very closed one, but in the end Ias was victorious.. Badly wounded, Ias returned to the hidden leaf proud of himself of killing Otku and his men, but sad about his comrades death, but he was now acostumed to that.. Having stepped one foot on the hidden leaf, he collapsed on the floor and passed out...
As Ias opened his eyes, his blurry vision adjusted in what looked like a hospital, and the figures of the hokage himself, saritobi, along with his future wife akemi, and his 5 year old child, Ai, which means love and affection.. The third Hokage and Ias started talking about how he got injured, But Ias just lied to the hokage telling him it was because of an S ranked mission.. He didnt want to get the old man worried about the fact that he was working undercover and had figure out one of the strongest shinobi of the mist and his men were ploting an attack on the hiden leaf, and Ias acted out to find out the exact evil plan, and terminate the enemy threat.. As Otku was working alone with his crew, there was no need for an all out war against the hidden mist.. as Otku was working alone..
