6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 4

[Escorpiius]

I would love to give you a big review, but I'm on the go so it'll be a short one.

Another great chapter, even though I only know the story up till the 5th book/film, I didn't really care for spoilers as this is pretty great reading. From what happened in this chapter it seems that some of the things I've heard doesn't add up, or maybe you just altered somethings from the real story like some people not dying etc? Actually, I don't want to knowxd

Anyways, good story and good dialogues. A little wird that they didn't greet at first, but instead just stood put while Harry and the rest talked. Seemed a little akward to me, but it didn't really matter.

Lol for referring to mexd I'm not that slow

Anyways, keep up the good work, until the next chapter

Never mind

I think you'd might need to read it for better understanding xd Whatsover, I don't think I altered anything apart from introducing Naruto

Thanks...Yeah, this crossed my mind at the last moment but I let it go...Just like that As you said, it didn't matter as long as they did talk

Sorry...See the post of Nikkou in your K2 and you'll know how fast you and I are

I'll try

 

[Michael92]

Never mind

I think you'd might need to read it for better understanding xd Whatsover, I don't think I altered anything apart from introducing Naruto

Thanks...Yeah, this crossed my mind at the last moment but I let it go...Just like that As you said, it didn't matter as long as they did talk

Sorry...See the post of Nikkou in your K2 and you'll know how fast you and I are

I'll try

Okayxd Well from what I read here, it seems that the rumors I've heard didn't add up I'll tell you what, don't say a thing about that pleasexd Just skip pass it and look below

Hehe Well as long as it makes sense, I won't really twist my mind too much over it

Hahaxd

Nice

Anyways, how long until the next one mate?

 

[Escorpiius]

xdxdxd (you say, don't say a word so I'll go with smileys xd)

Yeah, don't twist up your mind
What happened xd You can't really neglect it, right
Well, I'm trying! Hopefully before Friday...I don't want to put a fixed date though as I don't know what works may spring up...

 

[Michael92]

Well, I'm trying! Hopefully before Friday...I don't want to put a fixed date though as I don't know what works may spring up...

Haha, just look at me and how well that's goingxd

 

[Escorpiius]

Haha, just look at me and how well that's goingxd

Haha, brillant example indeed xd
Anyways, to you and all my viewers, I hope that you understand that I'm indeed trying to be as fast as I can this time but school matters more

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chap I especially liked how you depicted Harry & co.’s grand entrance lol They all seemed very much like their novel counter parts (so good job there ;p). I liked the mentioning about Houshi no Jutsu (Spore Jutsu). I don’t know if Professor McGonagall’s death is something of your doing or cannon as I have yet to finish with the book lol I am in the 600 mark so I am almost done but if you could clarify that for me. Don’t worry if it is a spoiler-I don’t mind as I have already ran into many spoilers as I read. This was the result of having to re-look up characters that I did not recall and in doing so spoilers popped up left and right T_T​

 

[Escorpiius]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chap I especially liked how you depicted Harry & co.’s grand entrance lol They all seemed very much like their novel counter parts (so good job there ;p). I liked the mentioning about Houshi no Jutsu (Spore Jutsu). I don’t know if Professor McGonagall’s death is something of your doing or cannon as I have yet to finish with the book lol I am in the 600 mark so I am almost done but if you could clarify that for me. Don’t worry if it is a spoiler-I don’t mind as I have already ran into many spoilers as I read. This was the result of having to re-look up characters that I did not recall and in doing so spoilers popped up left and right T_T​

Hehe xd, O- you think so... I think I'm really really far from the book on all levels...That's really honorable for me if you found me at least nearby it...
The Spore jutsu was the only thing that came to my head as to be mysterious on the eye of wizards.
Well, don't worry, the death of McGonagall is my invention. She was supposedly being-put acting-director after the battle and I decided to put to let her be in those years passed since the novel.
If you wish, there's a time-setting of my FF in Chapter5...

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Hehe xd, O- you think so... I think I'm really really far from the book on all levels...That's really honorable for me if you found me at least nearby it...
The Spore jutsu was the only thing that came to my head as to be mysterious on the eye of wizards.
Well, don't worry, the death of McGonagall is my invention. She was supposedly being-put acting-director after the battle and I decided to put to let her be in those years passed since the novel.
If you wish, there's a time-setting of my FF in Chapter5...

Yes, I think you kept to J.K Rowling’s depictions of Harry Potter as much as possible. I will say that she has much detail/descriptions in her writing. However, I will admit that for me it is my weakest points lol Again good job with the Spore tech and thank you for answering my question about the Professor Glad to here that it was not a spoiler lol Call me naive but I didn’t catch what you meant with your last statement about the "time setting".​

 

[Escorpiius]

Yes, I think you kept to J.K Rowling’s depictions of Harry Potter as much as possible. I will say that she has much detail/descriptions in her writing. However, I will admit that for me it is my weakest points lol Again good job with the Spore tech and thank you for answering my question about the Professor Glad to here that it was not a spoiler lol Call me naive but I didn’t catch what you meant with your last statement about the "time setting".​

Thanks
For your information, Mikey asked for some more ample details of the age diffrence between harry/Naruto ect...So I made a Time Setting about some of the events that occurred in both Naruto and Harry Potter storyline. You should check it out in one of my posts in C5 for better understanding and it's more to situate the age of the characters and the years that passed since some events. It's only a way to make the FF more balanced with the manga/book.

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Thanks
For your information, Mikey asked for some more ample details of the age diffrence between harry/Naruto ect...So I made a Time Setting about some of the events that occurred in both Naruto and Harry Potter storyline. You should check it out in one of my posts in C5 for better understanding and it's more to situate the age of the characters and the years that passed since some events. It's only a way to make the FF more balanced with the manga/book.

Okay well since I am already almost done with the book I suppose I will finish it before continuing from 5 onwards that way I can do it with confidence. I am literally on page 680 and thus not much longer. I hate to have to wait but I will feel better much after the book has been read entirely.​

 

[Escorpiius]

Okay well since I am already almost done with the book I suppose I will finish it before continuing from 5 onwards that way I can do it with confidence. I am literally on page 680 and thus not much longer. I hate to have to wait but I will feel better much after the book has been read entirely.​

Yeah, I think that's a good idea. You should read the Epilogue also, it's quite nice...

 

[MarBellarke]

Wonderful.. another lovely chapter

 

[Flash]

Its way better than expected!!!!
Nice one.......