6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 2

[Escorpiius]

Yeah, you sure did a good job. Making a sensible plot ain't that easy at all.

I agree, especially for two already tight-plot that Naruto and HP got.

 

[JTjutsumaster]

OMFG this is awsome, even though it is a flashback, I love the Sasuke/Naruto Fight

 

[Escorpiius]

OMFG this is awsome, even though it is a flashback, I love the Sasuke/Naruto Fight

Hey, you sure read fast xd Thanks again and the fight culminates in a Special Chapter found in between Chapter 3, guess it can be called as Chapter 3.5

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Well, that was the best chap yet and it is still in the beginning XD I loved the Sasuke incorporations ^.^ So...this is a trick question..if the manga went down more or less the way you depicted Sasuke changing, would your feelings towards Sasuke change as well? (You do not need to answer if you don’t want to) I liked that you also incorporated Neji as he is one of the many characters who does not get much limelight lol Listen you may misspell here and there but who doesn’t, ne? However, your writing in my opinion is better than mine Next chap will be even better I’m sure of and don’t sweat the battle scenes. I mean I am behind your Fanfic and thus you have already accomplished fighting scenes but with what I saw between Naruto/Sasuke I think you are doing a great job! ^.^​

 

[Escorpiius]

Thanks. Well, it's also the longest I've written till now.
About Sasuke, well, I was never a fan of him but never disliked him also till I really began hating him when he entered the Akatsuki. (despite being an Akatsuki fan)...That's a bit complicated and if my views will change on him, perhaps yes or no.
O-o, I needed Neji in some battle or rather I need the Hyuugas abilities against wizards and since Hinata just had a baby, I went with Neji. Glad you liked it and it's true that he gets few moments to shine.
Well, your English is far better than mine. I'm still a learner while you nearly are pro-level if you ask me especially your exquisite and fabulous vocabulary. For me, there's still much room, even a house, for improvement xd
Well, I hope I don't disappoint you with my next chapters

 

[Shade Dracova]

very nice work

 

[Escorpiius]

very nice work

Thanks...

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Thanks. Well, it's also the longest I've written till now.
About Sasuke, well, I was never a fan of him but never disliked him also till I really began hating him when he entered the Akatsuki. (despite being an Akatsuki fan)...That's a bit complicated and if my views will change on him, perhaps yes or no.
O-o, I needed Neji in some battle or rather I need the Hyuugas abilities against wizards and since Hinata just had a baby, I went with Neji. Glad you liked it and it's true that he gets few moments to shine.
Well, your English is far better than mine. I'm still a learner while you nearly are pro-level if you ask me especially your exquisite and fabulous vocabulary. For me, there's still much room, even a house, for improvement xd
Well, I hope I don't disappoint you with my next chapters

Sorry for replying to this so late -_- Well, I respect how you feel towards Sasuke as it is your opinion and you are entitled to it. I think many people hate him mainly because he is the only character who has taken forever to change back. Everybody else e.g. Gaara, Nagato etc. were turned by Naruto not too long after he was in contact with them and for Sasuke it is different. The path Itachi pushed Sasuke into has seared so deeply into him that it seems also impossible to come back from. Plus he has the occasional lapse in mentality. I was never a a fan of his actions however I understand why as he has had the most corruption/manipulating in the manga-my opinion. Even Naruto who has seen Sasuke grow darker, almost murdered his former teammate, etc. stated that he could be in the same shoes as he. In my honest opinion, I think if Naruto had the interventions that plagued Sasuke ever since the age of seven he too may have profoundly detoured. Yes I really liked the Neji attention and he is my brother’s favorite character lol Listen, I don’t believe my writing is all that great but from what you portrayed with your Fanfic I think is better than me. It is funny how we like each others writing XD I’m sure the following chaps will be far more exceptional than the last ​

 

[Escorpiius]

Sorry for replying to this so late -_- Well, I respect how you feel towards Sasuke as it is your opinion and you are entitled to it. I think many people hate him mainly because he is the only character who has taken forever to change back. Everybody else e.g. Gaara, Nagato etc. were turned by Naruto not too long after he was in contact with them and for Sasuke it is different. The path Itachi pushed Sasuke into has seared so deeply into him that it seems also impossible to come back from. Plus he has the occasional lapse in mentality. I was never a a fan of his actions however I understand why as he has had the most corruption/manipulating in the manga-my opinion. Even Naruto who has seen Sasuke grow darker, almost murdered his former teammate, etc. stated that he could be in the same shoes as he. In my honest opinion, I think if Naruto had the interventions that plagued Sasuke ever since the age of seven he too may have profoundly detoured. Yes I really liked the Neji attention and he is my brother’s favorite character lol Listen, I don’t believe my writing is all that great but from what you portrayed with your Fanfic I think is better than me. It is funny how we like each others writing XD I’m sure the following chaps will be far more exceptional than the last ​

Np ~ I hate him because of his lack of wisdom in understanding Itachi's sacrifice, his ego of being right and his continuous crying over Itachi. U_U That's all. It's nothing concerned with Naruto but I think he and Naruto pretty much suffered the same sufferings. All-in-all, I respect Sasuke's fans but I don't really like him mostly.
I see...Indeed, it's funny but your writing is great. Perhaps, it's because English is your mother-tongue that you don't realize how awesome and neat it is. Thanks once more xd

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Np ~ I hate him because of his lack of wisdom in understanding Itachi's sacrifice, his ego of being right and his continuous crying over Itachi. U_U That's all. It's nothing concerned with Naruto but I think he and Naruto pretty much suffered the same sufferings. All-in-all, I respect Sasuke's fans but I don't really like him mostly.
I see...Indeed, it's funny but your writing is great. Perhaps, it's because English is your mother-tongue that you don't realize how awesome and neat it is. Thanks once more xd

I see...well I respect your opinion. Sasuke originally was only going for the Konoha higher ups which in my opinion is justifiable as Shika/team went after their revenge and felt justified. However, that darkness/unstable mentality/Madara corruption transformed his goal into destroying the entire village. Thanks, I suppose when you check over your own work it seems as though there is always room for improvement or you’re simply not satisfied with the finished product lol​

 

[Escorpiius]

I see...well I respect your opinion. Sasuke originally was only going for the Konoha higher ups which in my opinion is justifiable as Shika/team went after their revenge and felt justified. However, that darkness/unstable mentality/Madara corruption transformed his goal into destroying the entire village. Thanks, I suppose when you check over your own work it seems as though there is always room for improvement or you’re simply not satisfied with the finished product lol​

Yeah, Madara is mostly to blame but Sasuke is not such a fool; so he should not get brainwashed that easily. Also, Shikamaru's revenge is a bit more understandable as he felt helpless while his sensei was killed in front of his eyes. It's not as crystal-clear for Sasuke as he, himself killed his brother. Also, Shikamaru is continuing all of his master's legacy while Sasuke, is even bashing all the creams and sacrifice that Itachi made for Konoha.
Hehe, it seems that you know how I feel exactly with my chapters then. Indeed, I always like some specific parts or lines in my chapters or the way it unfolds but yes, I continuously seek improvement.

 

[Uchiha Minato]

its like im reading a real book nice job man

 

[Escorpiius]

its like im reading a real book nice job man

Wow! That's a great compliment to think of my FF as a novel. xd thanks.
Do read the rest

 

[Lord Snow]

very good

 

[Flash]

It would have been nice if you could have elaborated the flashback you know.......
Well the story is great....I'd love to see how you mix up both the worlds