[692] Sasuke Page 9 colour.

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Note's: The shirt is actually white, you can see the left shoulder, I dunno if I did it correctly, but majority is grey because of the "shaded" effect on the blank manga panel. So... yeah... :sweat: I would have done it without the speech bubble, but I just couldn't make it look right. :( Rinnegan is normal colour because of the last colour cover that contradicted the red of the "Official colour chapter".

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* Paint Tool Sai
* Photoshop

Hopefully you all like it! Thanks! :)
 

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Eh... that's okay.

I would've kept in the cel shading and the darkened areas, instead of erasing them and using that soft fuzzy spray tool.
 

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This is going to be constructive criticism, like the painting and stuff are done really well. but I felt the way you added the colour makes Sasuke look a lot less menacing. but it is REALLY well done :)
 

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I will try to be fair about this. I understand you tried to do this well and I can appreciate your effort.

There is no way I could do something like this. But on the other hand, criticism is necessary in order to understand one's mistakes and to improve. So, do not take it personally, take it as an advice and an opportunity to improve.

I think colors are somehow wrong and his skin is somewhat weird.
This picture the way it is colored and the way colors are used does not give you a feeling of either Anime or Manga. It feels like a fanart, which it is in a way.
Your choice about making Rinnegan is yours. But I believe it would've been better red.
I think you shuld have used shading more similar to the one in Manga.
And the biggest problem I have with your picture is that it does not convey the feeling of darkness, which was present in the Manga.

There are also good things about this picture, other than your choice of colors, the way you colored it was really good.

That said, I am not an expert. This is just my opinion. I hope you do not mind criticism. And do not let criticism decrease your confidence.

This was a great try. And I believe you can greatly improve it or any other picture. Keep doing it and well done.
 

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I will try to be fair about this. I understand you tried to do this well and I can appreciate your effort.

There is no way I could do something like this. But on the other hand, criticism is necessary in order to understand one's mistakes and to improve. So, do not take it personally, take it as an advice and an opportunity to improve.

I think colors are somehow wrong and his skin is somewhat weird.

I couldn't find a good official manga colour of Sasuke for the correct pallet. So I made a choice to use the colour of a different fan art as opposed to the Anime.

This picture the way it is colored and the way colors are used does not give you a feeling of either Anime or Manga. It feels like a fanart, which it is in a way.

It's not really meant to imitate the Manga or Anime in the style re-guard.

Your choice about making Rinnegan is yours. But I believe it would've been better red.

It was a hard choice when there was two contradicting coloured images, both labelled "official". I can always change it. But, until the anime we won't know the colours, and even then they may not be "correct".

I think you shuld have used shading more similar to the one in Manga.

So you prefer "solid" shading? That's cool, I was tossing up which style of shading to use, and chose this one for how smooth it is.

And the biggest problem I have with your picture is that it does not convey the feeling of darkness, which was present in the Manga.

I agree, perhaps if I had merely removed the white from the Manga image and coloured it keeping all of the original line instead of just making my own line art and colouring it.

There are also good things about this picture, other than your choice of colors, the way you colored it was really good.

That said, I am not an expert. This is just my opinion. I hope you do not mind criticism. And do not let criticism decrease your confidence.

This was a great try. And I believe you can greatly improve it or any other picture. Keep doing it and well done.
Thanks for the compliments, and criticism. Answers are in the quote, bolded.
 
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