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[Adachi]

Man, would someone just give me some spar or something to warm me up? At like 1 am in the morning?

Range: Mid
No customs.
No Kai or Sub
KG allowed...
Am I missing anything?

Post your bio and I'll decide which one to use.
I still like 2vs2, but that's too complicated, considering that many of the original RPers have gone off somewhere.

 

[Shinjitsu]

I think there still around, just getting bored of lack of talent round here and constant nubs fighting them and whining so just need to raise the stakes again...

rules are fine. preferably like to say no moves of S Rank cause obviously ...i simply cant defend vs. full stop and would end abit abrupt -_-

and last thing.. if its late there, warning that you might not get majorly far into this as im kind of busy with work stuff as well as doing this so apologies

will use Pride ....BIO is on my signature


Pride stands awaits Tenz. move.. please, after you

 

[Shinjitsu]

(Taijitsu: Hirateuchi) - Bitch Slap

see you.. we shall spar later cause unfortunately i have to run out on a business meet :| but i shall spar you soon!

sweetdreams

 

[Adachi]

One thing...please use proper and clear English when posting...I honestly can't stand grammar mistakes...they eff up fights. (thinks of Ali)
Anyhow, seeing as you say you are busy with things, I shall make a move and go to sleep. However, I will make this move a bit hard to counter, so think to your hardest.
Note that I will change the range to MID. And the area is a just a beach, to keep it simple. I copied my original rules from another post so...Also, I do not have a very clear conception of the current rules (after all, I haven't fought anyone/sparred them for awhile, so feel free to correct me if I get something wrong).
To start off with, I draw out a flash bomb, tossing it across the area towards you so that it explodes in your face as it nears you. As you are busy with the flash bomb, I immediately execute my move:
(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
Using this move, I create four clones. Considering the short time that it takes to create kage bunshins, I may as well assume that you are still blind from the flash bomb. Immediately after I have created my kage bunshin, one uses:
(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.
This attack, however, isn't aimed at you. It's aimed over you. At the exact same moment this occurs, another clone besides that clone uses:
Fuuton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto (Wind Style: Severing Pressure)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the envoronment stormy. These clouds will create These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as a F-5 tornado with slicing wind.
The fire and tornado hit one another in midair and combine, creating a massive tornado that covers most of the terrain around you. This combination is fiery enough to burn the earth around you to lava. While this is happening, a third clone throws a flash bomb all the way to where you are to blind you while I myself toss ten kunais attached with explosive tags at you. (Three from the front and back, two on either side. There are strings attached to all of them).

Just a guidance: It's better to think of Rping as a sort of animation. Think of this happening in your head and find the best combo to counter it.

 

[Adachi]

(Taijitsu: Hirateuchi) - Bitch Slap

see you.. we shall spar later cause unfortunately i have to run out on a business meet :| but i shall spar you soon!

sweetdreams

Well, that is awfully convenient...
Alright man. I expect to see a reply when I wake up tomorrow. Give me a good one, bro....why does that sound wrong?
Must be me. 2:30 a.m. I'm going to knock myself out...

(Btw, this is sparring, so regardless of what happens, if one of us gets injured, we agree to take the other to the hospital, correct? Man, this feels like strategy training all over again...)

 

[Shinjitsu]

lol its alright i promise to give you a "good go" and my english i think you find will be more than adequate! besides.. convenient ? ha.. i posted before your move so the only convenience here is you posting AFTER ive already gone so i cant attack back just yet

ha right well im off for abit ! i shall post as soon as i return and yes.. i will take you to the hospital if needs be

Oh and btw before i run, im an experienced RP Fighter so please dont go thinking that im a random nub new to NB please sure, im still learning the jutsu knowledge and combo techs with them etc but in general, i think you shall find me MORE than adaquate at roleplay fighting you ha.. toodles for now!

 

[Adachi]

lol its alright i promise to give you a "good go" and my english i think you find will be more than adequate! besides.. convenient ? ha.. i posted before your move so the only convenience here is you posting AFTER ive already gone so i cant attack back just yet

ha right well im off for abit ! i shall post as soon as i return and yes.. i will take you to the hospital if needs be

That sentence was...epic failure?
I guess communicating sarcasm over Internet is a fail as usual. Your bitch slap? Oh please, I don't think even Naruto will fall for that one.

Alright man. Now I'm really logging off...

Ah SHIT. Forgot to mention what bio I'm using:

You must be registered for see links

I don't use my wood bio unless for serious purposes...but I enjoy Nara bios all the same. Good luck and good night.

 

[Shinjitsu]

Pride watches as Shiru reaches in his pouch and withdraws the flash bomb before throwing it at him. Pride counters this by reaching into his own pouch, removing & throwing a kunai to counter the oncoming flash bomb.
The kunai hits the flash bomb causing it to explode and potentially blind both fighters.
A split-second before his kunai makes contact and the explosion happens, Pride closes his eyes, avoiding being blinded by the flash, and activates his Byakugan before re-opening his eyes staring down at Shiru Nara. Immediately after closing his eyes, Pride performs the required handseals, so that when he opens his eyes, can immediately perform Gian Yari...

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

Shooting the spear of lightning from his mouth directed at Shiru himself before it splits apart and instead attacks all 4 shadow clones he created straight after throwing his flash bomb, destroying all the clones.
Once all 4 clones are destroyed, Pride again reaches in his pouch and throws 3 smoke bombs, with 2 landing either side of his opponent and 1 inbetween both himself and Shiru, but in front of Shiru - ALL setting off and covering the surrounding area of tenzo in smoke blocking his view of Pride and the battle field.

As soon as the smoke bombs explode and block Shiru's view, Pride takes advantage to use Haisekisho..

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

Spewing out the superheated ash cloud into the exsisting smoke cloud to hide the oncoming attack making it invisible to Shiru's eyes, before it surrounds him. Shiru becomes aware of a possible attack as the ash is superheated so begins to burn his face and skin.
As the cloud envelopes his opponent Pride withdraws an explosively tagged kunai from his pouch, throwing it at the ground just in front of Shiru, exploding and igniting the Haisekisho causing a massive explosion with him trapped in the middle of it.
Once the explosion starts, Pride then uses Kage Bunshin no Jutsu...

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

To create 4 shadow clones, 1 in front, 1 to either side and 1 directly behind of him. Pride crosses his arms as his shadow clones all withdraw and throw 2 explosive kunai each at the feet, either side and above where Shiru was standing, causing more explosions within & on top of the current major explosion caused from igniting Haisekisho.

 

[Adachi]

Pride watches as Shiru reaches in his pouch and withdraws the flash bomb before throwing it at him. Pride counters this by reaching into his own pouch, removing & throwing a kunai to counter the oncoming flash bomb.
The kunai hits the flash bomb causing it to explode and potentially blind both fighters.
A split-second before his kunai makes contact and the explosion happens, Pride closes his eyes, avoiding being blinded by the flash, and activates his Byakugan before re-opening his eyes staring down at Shiru Nara. Immediately after closing his eyes, Pride performs the required handseals, so that when he opens his eyes, can immediately perform Gian Yari...

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

Shooting the spear of lightning from his mouth directed at Shiru himself before it splits apart and instead attacks all 4 shadow clones he created straight after throwing his flash bomb, destroying all the clones.
Once all 4 clones are destroyed, Pride again reaches in his pouch and throws 3 smoke bombs, with 2 landing either side of his opponent and 1 inbetween both himself and Shiru, but in front of Shiru - ALL setting off and covering the surrounding area of tenzo in smoke blocking his view of Pride and the battle field.

As soon as the smoke bombs explode and block Shiru's view, Pride takes advantage to use Haisekisho..

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

Spewing out the superheated ash cloud into the exsisting smoke cloud to hide the oncoming attack making it invisible to Shiru's eyes, before it surrounds him. Shiru becomes aware of a possible attack as the ash is superheated so begins to burn his face and skin.
As the cloud envelopes his opponent Pride withdraws an explosively tagged kunai from his pouch, throwing it at the ground just in front of Shiru, exploding and igniting the Haisekisho causing a massive explosion with him trapped in the middle of it.
Once the explosion starts, Pride then uses Kage Bunshin no Jutsu...

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

To create 4 shadow clones, 1 in front, 1 to either side and 1 directly behind of him. Pride crosses his arms as his shadow clones all withdraw and throw 2 explosive kunai each at the feet, either side and above where Shiru was standing, causing more explosions within & on top of the current major explosion caused from igniting Haisekisho.

Heh. To say the least, I'm rather impressed. Though I did forget the fact that you had a Byakugan...or that honestly didn't concern me much at all.
HOWEVER, you cannot godmode and as part of the battle, you must counteract all my moves. My fire simply cannot disappear into midair...But I'll let it go this time...
Since Kage Bunshin only takes one second to use, you could say that my bunshins itself did not go blind when you exploded the flash bomb. You did say that you exploded it the instant I threw it, so in that moment, I was creating my kage bunshins. As one kage bunshin sees your attack incoming, he uses:
Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
As the wind is aimed in your direction, and that lightning is weak to wind, it destroys your spear in midair as it flies at me (Mid-range does take awhile to reach me after all...) However, since this move is destructive and that your lightning move was of B-Rank, it continues to come at you, whirling at a tremendous speed. I can rightfully say that you never got a chance to execute your second move since you did not use Kage bunshin in the beginning and you are the only target as of the moment. The wind blows away your smoke bombs. As this is happening and you are busy with my wind move, another clone releases:
(Doton: Ganchuro no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Earth Pillar Prison
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu creates a large amount of rock pillars from underground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a prison of earth.
This causes several pillars to rise up behind you and push you towards the wind incoming while other pillars block an escape route behind you. If you were caught in the wind move, then the pillars will trap you as you are tumbling about in the wind move. And as this happens, my third clone uses:
(Doton: Doryu Joheki) - Earth Style: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique raises a large ridge or hill (plateau) from the ground. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.
Raising us above the ground to a high distance (Mid-range in the air) so that I may keep an eye on you within the air.

I'm going to go knock myself out and play some MMO. Reply back if you can, xd

 

[Shinjitsu]

Heh. To say the least, I'm rather impressed. Though I did forget the fact that you had a Byakugan...or that honestly didn't concern me much at all.
HOWEVER, you cannot godmode and as part of the battle, you must counteract all my moves. My fire simply cannot disappear into midair...But I'll let it go this time...
Since Kage Bunshin only takes one second to use, you could say that my bunshins itself did not go blind when you exploded the flash bomb. You did say that you exploded it the instant I threw it, so in that moment, I was creating my kage bunshins. As one kage bunshin sees your attack incoming, he uses:
Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
As the wind is aimed in your direction, and that lightning is weak to wind, it destroys your spear in midair as it flies at me (Mid-range does take awhile to reach me after all...) However, since this move is destructive and that your lightning move was of B-Rank, it continues to come at you, whirling at a tremendous speed. I can rightfully say that you never got a chance to execute your second move since you did not use Kage bunshin in the beginning and you are the only target as of the moment. The wind blows away your smoke bombs. As this is happening and you are busy with my wind move, another clone releases:
(Doton: Ganchuro no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Earth Pillar Prison
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu creates a large amount of rock pillars from underground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a prison of earth.
This causes several pillars to rise up behind you and push you towards the wind incoming while other pillars block an escape route behind you. If you were caught in the wind move, then the pillars will trap you as you are tumbling about in the wind move. And as this happens, my third clone uses:
(Doton: Doryu Joheki) - Earth Style: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique raises a large ridge or hill (plateau) from the ground. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.
Raising us above the ground to a high distance (Mid-range in the air) so that I may keep an eye on you within the air.

I'm going to go knock myself out and play some MMO. Reply back if you can, xd

(welcome back sir sorry i did not 100% think about my first move tbh just posted and went and got on with some work stuff so apologies it wasnt as awesome as should of been, even restricted via lack of justsu atm but lets continue..)

Pride watches as his Gian Yari is destroyed in mid-flight from the oncoming counter attack of Shiru, Atsugai. As he steps back he hears the rumble of earth behind him, and turns his head to see behind him Ganchuro no Jutsu emerging from the ground, forcing him towards the oncomhttp://www.narutobase.net/forums/newreply.php?do=newreply&p=1980639ing Fuuton attack. Looking back to the Atsugai, Pride breathes calmly and reaches in his pouch once again to remove another smoke bomb casually dropping it gently in front of him. The smoke bomb explodes gently covering Pride in a cloud of smoke, blocking his move/s from the watching Shiru Nara. Once out of sight Pride referes to his Ninjutsu and Doton knowledge to use the following...

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

Creating a single clone immediately after the smoke bomb is released before one after the other in quick submission before the smoke clears from the Fuuton attack..

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is similar to the Universal Assimilation Technique. It allows the user to move in and out of rock and earth. This jutsu can be used to avoid certain earth techniques.

Using the Doton jutsu to hide the Shadow Clone inside one of the pillars of Ganchuro no Jutsu, as quick as possible, Pride submerges himself underground, hidden out of view.

Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

The Fuuton: Atsugai hits, blowing the smoke cloud away and smashing into the Ganchuro no Jutsu pillars. Doryu Joheki shortly follows, creating a ridge that is raised into the air, carrying Shiru upon, but clearly no body of Pride.

 

[Adachi]

(welcome back sir sorry i did not 100% think about my first move tbh just posted and went and got on with some work stuff so apologies it wasnt as awesome as should of been, even restricted via lack of justsu atm but lets continue..)

Pride watches as his Gian Yari is destroyed in mid-flight from the oncoming counter attack of Shiru, Atsugai. As he steps back he hears the rumble of earth behind him, and turns his head to see behind him Ganchuro no Jutsu emerging from the ground, forcing him towards the oncomhttp://www.narutobase.net/forums/newreply.php?do=newreply&p=1980639ing Fuuton attack. Looking back to the Atsugai, Pride breathes calmly and reaches in his pouch once again to remove another smoke bomb casually dropping it gently in front of him. The smoke bomb explodes gently covering Pride in a cloud of smoke, blocking his move/s from the watching Shiru Nara. Once out of sight Pride referes to his Ninjutsu and Doton knowledge to use the following...

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

Creating a single clone immediately after the smoke bomb is released before one after the other in quick submission before the smoke clears from the Fuuton attack..

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is similar to the Universal Assimilation Technique. It allows the user to move in and out of rock and earth. This jutsu can be used to avoid certain earth techniques.

Using the Doton jutsu to hide the Shadow Clone inside one of the pillars of Ganchuro no Jutsu, as quick as possible, Pride submerges himself underground, hidden out of view.

Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

The Fuuton: Atsugai hits, blowing the smoke cloud away and smashing into the Ganchuro no Jutsu pillars. Doryu Joheki shortly follows, creating a ridge that is raised into the air, carrying Shiru upon, but clearly no body of Pride.

I skimmed through this and happened to see some errors. I will list them out, and you may correct any if needed. In your first paragraph, you state that you turned to look at the earth pillars as they rose behind you. That is a waste of time since there are two forces pushing you together AT THE EXACT SAME MOMENT. One from the back, one from the front. Wind travels at high speeds, especially Wind Pressure as it states in the description that it's difficult to control, and tremendously fast. Second of all, since this is MID-RANGE, it wouldn't take long for Wind Pressure to reach you and even more so, the earth pushing you forward. And also, naturally, your smoke from the smoke bomb will be blown away due to the force of my wind attack.
Simply put, my attack is too fast for any of yours to be happening in time; your was a three-step process compared to my one-step attack.

Overall, nice description and good detail; you clearly are using imagery for this, but your timing and range still have problems. Especially timing.