天弥, Hemō

[xElm0]

Basic Information
Name: Hemō
Nickname: The Fire God
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Clan: N/A

Looks:

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Personality: Calm & Serious.

Village Info.
Village of Birth:
Village of Alliance:

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: Speed
Elements: Lightning
Your ninjutsu:

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(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
History:

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Hemō was born on Naruto World Wat II his perents left him and he was a rich guy that always wanted to be a great ninja he ask a guy that is known as Bisha to be his master and he say when you get till genin then they start training and start to be friends. Hemo was really happy now he want to join force with Iwa and he did join now his 12 and know ninjutsu
now theres war

Other

Picture:

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Theme Song and Background Music: N/A

Battles

Won: N/A
Lost: N/A

 

[Mugiwara]

History:

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Hemō was orphaned during the Second Great Shinobi World War, and, thus, he started fending for himself, stealing food from others. He later encountered Naruto, also an orphan, and the two began to work together to survive. After this, Naruto brought another orphan, Nagato, and his dog, Chibi, into the group. At first, Yahiko was upset that she was bringing more people, but he later accepted Nagato into his gang. Angered by how unfair the world was to them, Hemō declared he would become a god to end the fighting.

The three eventually encountered Kakashi, who looked after them and taught them basic ninjutsu. At one point, Nagato saved Hemō after an Iwagakure chūnin attacked them. Afterwards, Hemō vowed to become strong enough to protect Konan, Nagato, and eventually all of Amegakure.

You need to change the History, as it conflicts with the current story line... You can't just change the whole story line like that.

 

[Caliburn]

You need to change the History, as it conflicts with the current story line... You can't just change the whole story line like that.

Indeed.

You're messing with the entire Naruto-plot, not to mention it you just copy-pasted yahiko's past from Narutopedia and only edited it half. You mention Hemo, Nagato, Yahiko, Konan and Naruto and you refer to Naruto as a she... Remove the entire history as it's completely wrong and write something else + delete that your specialty is speed as it's your first bio and you don't have any specialties yet.

 

[RokuNR]

You need to change the History, as it conflicts with the current story line... You can't just change the whole story line like that.

Indeed.

You're messing with the entire Naruto-plot, not to mention it you just copy-pasted yahiko's past from Narutopedia and only edited it half. You mention Hemo, Nagato, Yahiko, Konan and Naruto and you refer to Naruto as a she... Remove the entire history as it's completely wrong and write something else + delete that your speciality is speed as it's your first bio and you don't have any specialties yet.

Stole the words from my mouth >_>'
In a less blunt manner, at the very least xd

 

[xElm0]

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[xElm0]

Bump..

 

[Caliburn]

Ok WTH you're a genin, you don't have any specialties and certainly not speed. Remove that and what have you done to your history X_X

Hemō was born on Naruto World Wat II his perents left him and he was a rich guy that always wanted to be a great ninja he ask a guy that is known as Bisha to be his master and he say when you get till genin then they start training and start to be friends. Hemo was really happy now he want to join force with Iwa and he did join now his 12 and know ninjutsu
now theres war

Placing aside all the grammatical errors and messed up construction of your sentences, it makes no sense whatsoever. There is no World War in the Narutoverse, they call it the First/Second/Third/Fourth Great Shinobi War. Also you get abandoned by your parents when you were a baby and then you say something about a rich guy ...what? Then you say something of Bisha and...what?

You jump from one thing to another without making them fit into each other. That you can't write something original is understandable, but at least write something that makes sense.