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[Stark]

I have a crapload more, I'll post them on other occasions, how'd I do?

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Two Kakashi ones I tried to do ( -Kami-'s Render)

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[Trúth]

They're not bad. I'll take this one if you don't mind

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[Shinato]

You may want to tone down the opacity of the scan lines and look into adding a border. (Besides that, the resize on the first ones look good, but the one on Kakashi looks a bit strange.) ​

 

[SasukeUchiha910]

Very nice, keep at it bro.

 

[Stark]

They're not bad. I'll take this one if you don't mind

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Sure, glad you like it.

You may want to tone down the opacity of the scan lines and look into adding a border. (Besides that, the resize on the first ones look good, but the one on Kakashi looks a bit strange.) ​

Thanks for the feedback

Very nice, keep at it bro.

Thanks

 

[-Punk-]

They're nice , nothing fancy & like someone said above about the scanlines , they can be tricky .

 

[Titania Erza]

It looks pretty good for your first try, however I will be harsh on the critics so that you know exactly what you could improve on.

First one looks horrible (not your fault), the image itself isn't good and without the needed edits it looks LQ. The second one looks great, although you could have added some more focus to the vocal. The third one is mehhh, too many sharp edges. Also if you are new to scanlines, use diagonal scanlines since those are the easiest to work with. Also play around with the opacity/fill% and use a soft eraser at the parts where the main vocal point is.

 

[Lana Del Taka]

Dat Lana Del Rey <3_<3

I wish i had premium;_;

 

[Kagerou]

Nice job father. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

 

[Netferarri]

Good job bro, keep at it.

 

[DaileyM]

omg the Rita & Lana ones are my faves. < 33 you did great. especially for your first time.

can you make me a 150x200 Lana one x

 

[Stark]

They're nice , nothing fancy & like someone said above about the scanlines , they can be tricky .

Thanks

It looks pretty good for your first try, however I will be harsh on the critics so that you know exactly what you could improve on.

First one looks horrible (not your fault), the image itself isn't good and without the needed edits it looks LQ. The second one looks great, although you could have added some more focus to the vocal. The third one is mehhh, too many sharp edges. Also if you are new to scanlines, use diagonal scanlines since those are the easiest to work with. Also play around with the opacity/fill% and use a soft eraser at the parts where the main vocal point is.

Much appreciated feedback

Dat Lana Del Rey <3_<3

I wish i had premium;_;

Lol glad you like em'

Nice job father. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Thank you son

Good job bro, keep at it.

Thanks

omg the Rita & Lana ones are my faves. < 33 you did great. especially for your first time.

can you make me a 150x200 Lana one x

Thanks gurl, & aight I'll pm it to you

 

[loj]

Looks AMAZING! Great work!

 

[Osmon]

The first . . . i know her i just cant remember her name ;-; it's from my country but cant remember this *****'s name ;-; Lol