[♆ Sanada Yukimura - Crimson Demon of War ♆] Teno Vs Omega

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As soon as Ragna begins sinking in the water he realizes he won’t be able to fight effectively as he would have to focus on staying afloat. Channeling his Futon chakra into his fist he struck the surface punching downward to launch himself towards solid ground to his right. As he was flying to the right he realized many lightning based needles from his body that would shoot at Hakumen’s armor to render it useless.

(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

(Raiton: Hakai Mecha)- Lightning release: Destruction of Mecha
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will perform one hand seal and release from their body a surge of lightning bolts no more then the size of normal senbons. These lightning bolts however are extremely unique, they do not aim for the user but more so attempt to attach itself towards any metal or conductive material to lightning (Metal, Paper, fabric, etc) that are non-chakra infused. The lightning will tear through these material's with ease completely negating them in use. This however is limited in mobility, this technique can only be used with constructs it affects by destroying them as they are out on the battlefield and not in the opponents pouch.

Note: Can only be taught by Excālibur

Landing on the ground he created a large lid; but, not big enough to get him caught into the the attack. The lid would smash down on Hakumen crushing him.

(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After doing the Snake handseal and slamming his hands on the ground, he user creates a portal above the target, high in the sky from which a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid drops and falls on the target, trapping it underneath. The lid can be hollow or solid, depending on if the user wants to deal damage to the enemy or not. Because of its size, to safely used, the lid has to be created at least mid range from the user otherwise he will also be caught inside. The biggest lid can dwarf a boss summon like Nagato's Dog or Gamabunta.

"If you're getting serious then perhaps I will as well; that sword will be leaving with me. You will die soon."
 

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Soon as hakumen sees you launch out of the water, he waste no time in creating 1 large hand made of water behind you to grab you. as it grabs you it quickly drags you under the water once more very forcefully

Water: Giant Hand (suiton:kyojin hando)
Type:Attack/Supplemantry
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60(+5 with lightning)
Description:The user creates a giant hand out of water that can be hard for a punch or sharp to act as a claw it can also be used to grab the enemy. Can be mixed with lightning tecniuqes to make it stronger.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan

Right as that happen, Hakumen resurfaces but with water covering his body in an armor formation. As that happens he causes the rain to be infused with chakra allowing him to sense you through the rain. He then no longer stands stiff but stands as he was enjoying the fight

(Suiton: Suiton aian ryuushi) Water Style: Water Ion Particle
Type: Defense
Rank:A
Range: Short
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:last for 3 turns and can be used only 3 times per battle this jutsu makes a layer of water particles in the surfess of the body that is able to deflect any Water,Fire,Wind elemental attacks up to C rank the chakra will be taken fron that jutsu and be added to andys next jutsu with any of his jutsus that he uses goes up by 1 rank the armor lasts for 3 turns

(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.

You are a special one to even have made it this far. Nobody has made me pull out my combo book. If you somehow manage to survive then observe whats about to happen very well.
 

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Ragna hears the rush of water behind him as the formation of the hand would be anything but silent. Ragna turns around and sees the hand of Water coming to grab him, so he twirled around and he waved his hand controlling the air creating multiple blades of wind into a scythe that clashes with the Suiton jutsu canceling it and as he completes his turn he smoothly lands as I would be able to land by now. Once he lands he exhales three giant fireballs into the sky creating stormy weather conditions. (At this point Hakumen either used his particle armor and is now resurfacing/resurfaced or what not. To stop the fireballs from reaching the sky you wouldn’t be able to use the Rain Tiger Will jutsu.) Ragna could see he was getting serious and enjoying the fight. He became excited, honored, yet nervous. One of them was going to lose this fight soon. Waving his hands he strenthen the flames by adding a wave of wind behind it to ensure they reach their mark.

“I hope you’re ready…”

(Futon: Shinkūzan no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Vacuum Slash technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user waves his hand and creates multiple blades of wind, emerging to a single scythe of sharp air. The scythe was powerful enough to stop Susanno's movements, but wasn't able to break trough its defence.

( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

(Fūton: Kaze Shingai) - Wind Release: Wind Terror
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user unleashes a wave of wind that slashes at the opponent by swinging their hand or hands.
 
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Your move is very sketchy. The fact you turned around and waved your hand before my water hand could grab you is debatable Also the fact that I stop your wind technique half way you wouldnt be on land, you would be several meters from it. Also If Im causing it to rain, your fire being B rank would weaken so it wouldnt be able to emit the thunder clouds. Either way Im trynna teach you while being serious so im not tripping. Just remember that. But Ima go with your move. Btw, We will need to start counting chakra soon.

Another thing, and Im going to be honest here. You should have used your 3rd jutsu to attack me. Never let an opponent who is stronger than you get an edge over you. Even if its a simple D rank jutsu. Either way. Lets do this. ^_^




Hakumen looking at the fireball launch into the sky, he slowly tilt his head down slowly as he resurfaces onto the water surface. He then sees you send wind behind the fire to reach the sky. Hakumen knew he didnt know what or how to react to such a strong opponent. As Hakumen took all this in he lifted his finger up while he began to talk

Games are over. Your first mistake was your last mistake

As he puts his finger up, he channels chakra into his finger pointing right at you. As that happen you would be caught in the genjutsu where you would see a pink beam heading towards you turning you into chocolate. Due to my water armor being active and the rain filled with chakra. The water armor would absorb the chakra from the rain to increase the rank of the genjutsu, now making the genjutsu S rank as you are now immobilize being a choclate in your mind

(Genjutsu: okashi sen) Illusionary Technique: Candy Beam
Type:Attack
Rank: A =S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User points at the opponent which places a genjutsu on them which makes it seem as if a pink beam of energy is fired from the user's finger at lightning fast speed which transforms the opponent into a candy version of themselves, paralyzing them since food can't move.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi
-3 times per battle.

Once you are trapped inside the genjutsu, Hakumen Takes his huge scythe from his back while manipulating his chakra inside the rain from above. He then causes 1 rain drop to condense as sharp as a blade while he runs in your direction. The rain drop will fall in a straight line in attempting to slash through your skull. due to the water ion particle armor, the rain slash offensive properties is increased

(Hitoshirenu Ame Sai) - Hidden Rain Slash
Rank: C = B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 = 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra to condense a single raindrop into a more solid form. The raindrop becomes as sharp as a blade. The disadvantage to this jutsu is that the raindrop falls in a straight line.

Once thats done, He quickly channel mass amounts of chakra into the scythe causing it to create a crescent shape. As the form is made from the scythe he quickly does a 360 turn releasing the chakra from the scythe in a very thin shape of chakra that is very hard to see with the normal eye. This would be shot towards your mid section in attempt to cut you in half. Once again due to the water ion particle armor absorbing the chakra from the rain the technique chakra is increased. Once done, Hakumen speaks the word S Rank. Due to crimson demon powers it restricts you from using S rank jutsus in your next turn. If everything happens according to plan, you would have a rain dagger through your skull with your body cut in half

(Dracova no shinigami āto: Majin Hanto) Reaper Art Of Dracova: Genie Hunt
Type:Attack
Rank:S =SS
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80 =100
Description: This is one of the 3 main techniques of the Reaper art this being the second. By circulating mass amounts of chakra through the sycthe. This technique resembles a massive halberd-like blade, expanding to 3 meters wide and 2 meters long. This technique is very dangerous to use with others around in a 5meter diameter. The user will swing the sycthe in a 360 degree angle towards the opponent increasing the cutting capability to its fullest degree. As the scythe is swung it will release chakra as a powerful thin line that cuts through anything in a 5meter radius with ease, easily able to cut through human flesh with extreme ease and earth (A rank). The line of chakra is so thin that it can barely be seen by the normal human eye.

Note: Can only be used twice with a two turn break in between usages.
Note: Cant use reaper arts , kenjutsu, nor taijutsu for 2 turns
 

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Ragna suddenly saw a pink beam that turned him into…chocolate. Realizing that this moust be the work of genjutsu as he could visualize himself as chocolate but could not smell it nor did he believe that he had chocolate release Ragna bit off his tongue breaking him out of the genjutsu. Before he could attack he was unaware of the raindrop falling down to his skull.

NOTE: I thought about running toward you causing it to miss but I honestly had no good reason to suddenly change tactics so that’s metagame went with this instead as I’ll lkely die but its not metagame T_T,

He feels a sharp pain make contact with his head at which point he immediately transforms his body into a liquefied state replacing its solidity with water. The rain drop falls through after its initial penetration and even cracks the ground.

I used this cuz Ive seen others use this same jutsu on me when I have used this to aim from behind at their Achilles and as soon as they feel the sharp pain they were able to transform so that’s where Im getting this from.

(Senbon Kusa)-Grass Senbon
Type:Atack
Rank: D
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:10
Damage:20
Description:The user sends his chakra into the grass near him and hardens it.After that the user would be able to fire the hardened grass from the ground like senbons at the oponent.
~Note:Can be only used on terrains with short grass

The near invisible blade would be fired off however due to the rain Ragna could see the rain being pushed away by the force of the slash and used that to make out a crude image of the attack remaining in this form for he allowed it to pass through him and reverted back. His mouth was bleeding and the area of his skull that got hit gave him tremendous pain as it was likely injured and blood was running down his face Ragna then focused his Doton chakra underneath Hakumen and caused several pillars of earth to erupt through long range.

(Go ahead and ask a sensei to check this. LMAO, I know it’s coming this was only non metagaming move I had. Another question since you used to be Mandalore head...I was going to make Ragna Mandalore but I was told I couldnt have HA with it??? Since you used rain am I allowed to have smoke with Mandalore???)

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.

(If I live will calculate chakra later. >_>)
 
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As discussed your counter wouldnt work. But for the sake of the story line, Hakumen doesnt go along with his genie hunt attack but the rain drop to your skull. Just enough to pierce it



Hakumen takes notice of the guy on the ground. This guy wasnt yet at a level to be his rival but his potential was beyond comparison. He deactivate his armor and walk over to the unconscious man who is now bleeding through his skull. Due to his sensing sword he knows the man is still alive, but just barely. He takes out a bandage and bandaged the guy head and stands over his body as if he was protecting him till he was out cold. As he senses the guy chakra slightly rejuvenating he sits down next to him as he woke up and began to talk

Where does your loyalty lie? Such motive for power yet you lack the jutsus. But your determination is beyond the scoop even you can understand. I decided to spare your life cause such shinobi as you deserves to make it to the top
 

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The last thing Ragna remembered was….rain and blood. He woke up sweating and with a tremendous headace. He could barely move much and then saw Hakumen next to him at that point he remembered that he lost and was nervous. He had no idea why he would be here…alive. Listening to Hakumen he answered his question.
“My loyalties? My loyalties lie with myself. I won’t do anything to betray my own ideals and turn into something Im not. That said those who I value as friends and comrads will always have my support as I long as I breathe. I suppose I owe you…again for teaching me yet another painful lesson."
 
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