[CFS] ∾ Antatchaburu no hazumi ↜↝ Impetus of Untouchable ∾

[Panthalassa]

For the other two, the biggest questions I have are regarding usage.

Round 1, I post this technique, creating a Cloak. Does it stay indefinately, until blocked? Either of them?
If I have a B rank lightning redirect, does it redirect all C ranks? Or does it take out durability from the technique?
For the last, it's a damage technique, does it give out damage throughout it's existance? 20 damage per freestyle punch?
Do they stack?

 

[System001]

Wow, this is actually pretty cool. I didn't know what you'd do with the CFS as I myself was lost for ideas when I looked at it, but you're really starting to make something of it.

First basically turns on sticky time.

Second allows you to redirect unfocused electrical current.

Third allows you to slice.

 

[Akasha]

@las question; just against unfocused lightening.

@pantha; 1. Yes
2. You take out durability
3. It gives out damage only once, 40 damage points, when the contact has been made

 

[Panthalassa]

No questions then!

 

[Erzo]

One got approved wooo~

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Aberunasu no seitoku ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Arvernus's Innate
Type: Supplementary / Defensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10 (2 chakra points per each turn to keep it active)
Damage: N/A
Description: A basic technique within the style whereas user would release chakra from their pores as they apply processes of both nature and shape manipulation causing for the chakra to congregate into sticky adhesive like molecules that would surface the body as a cloak. However, they wouldn't quite be visible to the normal eye making them quite hard as to be distinguished. The sticky molecules will easily glue onto anything with which they come in contact with. On one side the layer of molecules could aid user when using them offensively, leaving trails of sticky molecules when performing a taijutsu based offense and hence disabling opponent's parts of the body within reason. On the other, it can also be used so to decrease the power of offense which is coming their way. The sticky molecules would act as protection in a way, where-as an offense has to firstly go through them before getting to the body of the user, keeping in mind that they would stick to anything with which they come in contact with and that is not made out of chakra from the user. This technique remains enveloping users body, and is capable of reducing 5 damage from incoming katon tai-ninjutsu-based techniques, and 10 from Taijtusu based techniques which don't require chakra or 5 in case they require chakra usage. It would last so as long as the user keep sacrificing chakra for the technique.


Describe, ask questions and so forth~

Creates a cloak of sticky water molecules which stick to things you strike, leaving a trail. Or it could be used as a layer of protection, wherein the opponent must go through the cloak before being able to hit your body.
No question atm.

Also guys, two more techniques got approved!

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Ambisagrus `rikoiru ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Ambisagrus' Recoil
Type: Supplementary / Defensive
Rank: C - S
Range: Short
Chakra: 15 - 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Utilizing the basic principles of Impetus of Untouchable user will cause for sticky liquid which is surfacing the body as the cloak to start spinning rapidly on molecular level. The rotatory movement won't be evident to others due to stage at which it is happening however it would create like a current which will have redirecting capabilities. Any type of unfocused electricity which is coming in the user's way will be redirected and blasted out either towards the ground or short range area. User can either use a pre-existing cloak for performance of this technique or commence performance of this technique with creation of a dense cloak around their body or body-part. The A ranked version of this technique can be used twice per battle whereas the S ranked only once. When using the C ranked version, user will only be able to redirect the electricity towards the ground, however with higher ranked versions of this technique they will be able to cause for electricity, which was initially coming their way, to blast out in short range causing the damage equivalent to the rank of the technique which was initially coming. In addition, user can re-direct techniques which are same rank as this one (due to the nature of this technique and creating like a current), however keeping in mind that the cloak which was enveloping their body would get destroyed. Keeping the cloak present would require from the user to use a technique which is one rank higher from that of lighting (or its variations based off electricity).

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Garona no hōboku ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Agrona's Graze
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Sister technique of Ambisagrus' Recoil, which also utilizes the basic principles of Impetus of Untouchable. Just like the previously mentioned technique, user will cause for the sticky liquid which is surfacing the body as a cloak to start spinning rapidly on a molecular level. In addition the rotatory movement won't be evident to other due to the stage at which it is happening and user will be able to change direction at which the molecules rotate. Causing some to rotate towards the left and others towards the right. Such rotation will grant cutting capability to the molecules and hence pierce through everything they come in contact with before glueing onto them. The rotation however would be stopped with the contact being made, but being able to change the direction of rotation would allow for considerable damage being made (the wounds created could be compared to the bone-deep abrasions). This cutting would happen due to like a flux being created from the rotation. The first contact with the molecules would disable them to continue on moving, but glue onto what they came in contact with. User can either use pre-existing cloak to perform this technique or commence the activation of this technique with creation of the cloak. The change in direction at which molecules move will happen passively for a brief period once they were stired by something so to increase their potency before gluing onto the same figure. Due to the nature of this technique, it can be combined with others from the style. Once activated it will last so as long as the contact hasn't been made.

No questions then!

@ First: Creates a molecular spin which can re-direct unfocused Lightning, really cool o-o
No questions


Second: Similar to the first, but spins in the opposite direction too, allowing this jutsu pretty damn deep cutting ability. I like the fact they can all be used from an existing cloak, or can make one on the spot. Plus remains active until actually used without need of certain amount of chakra per turn.
No questions.

Also, sorry for lateness x.x

 

[Akasha]

Lovely, you've learnt them!

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

One got approved wooo~

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Aberunasu no seitoku ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Arvernus's Innate
The basic technique, a sort of catalyst for the other techniques as well. We made this up together.

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Ambisagrus `rikoiru ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Ambisagrus' Recoil
I see you made this a thing, nice it got approved. Now I can both use Hair, and this CFS to redirect lightning. xd Gewd, gewd. I get it.

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Garona no hōboku ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Agrona's Graze
Neat. Basically I will ef up an incoming Tai attack, simualtaneously as damaging them, I'm also redirecting their blow.

 

[Akasha]

Two new techniques guys

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Anextiomarus no ījisu ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Aegis of Anextiomarus
Type: Supplementary / Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Utilizing the basic principles of Impetus of Untouchable user will release adhesive liquid from a desired spot on their body. This is used to render damage of incoming blunt damage/taijutsu based techniques, depending on the nature of the technique in question useless. Before the actual contact has been made, the user will through mental willingness expell a portion from one of their limbs or through a weapon, almost like a globue outwards to envelop the incoming object (body parts gradually slowing it down to the point it never came to touch the user but it would; It would be almost like a feather touch. A secondary application of this technique comes in play when user has been previously covered within the layer of the custom fighting style - It could be done passively the moment that an object (weapon of opponent or their body part) comes in contact with the already existing layer of molecules surrounding specific portion of users body. This technique can only be used three times per battle.

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Andorasute no fukutsū ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Andraste's Bellyache
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Andraste's Bellyache is an offensive type of technique, however with sort of a supplementary use. It can be performed as a separate technique or in combination with another one used beforehand. Its supplementary use can be seen once the body of opponent has been covered with the sticky liquid, and when used as such its activation would be very quickly as covering of their body if it wasn't previously covered. The sticky liquid which initially pinned certain part of the body would start to strain the same, causing for considerable amount of damage being made on that body part. The damage would be seen in breaking of connective tissue - muscles, tendons and bones. On the other hand this technique can be used when user is making offense upon their target. The molecules would upsurge from user's body to that of opponent, pinning it down and straining the surfaced area. This technique can only be used twice per battle and never in consequent turns.

 

[Panthalassa]

Two new techniques guys

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Anextiomarus no ījisu ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Aegis of Anextiomarus
Type: Supplementary / Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Utilizing the basic principles of Impetus of Untouchable user will release adhesive liquid from a desired spot on their body. This is used to render damage of incoming blunt damage/taijutsu based techniques, depending on the nature of the technique in question useless. Before the actual contact has been made, the user will through mental willingness expell a portion from one of their limbs or through a weapon, almost like a globue outwards to envelop the incoming object (body parts gradually slowing it down to the point it never came to touch the user but it would; It would be almost like a feather touch. A secondary application of this technique comes in play when user has been previously covered within the layer of the custom fighting style - It could be done passively the moment that an object (weapon of opponent or their body part) comes in contact with the already existing layer of molecules surrounding specific portion of users body. This technique can only be used three times per battle.

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Andorasute no fukutsū ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Andraste's Bellyache
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Andraste's Bellyache is an offensive type of technique, however with sort of a supplementary use. It can be performed as a separate technique or in combination with another one used beforehand. Its supplementary use can be seen once the body of opponent has been covered with the sticky liquid, and when used as such its activation would be very quickly as covering of their body if it wasn't previously covered. The sticky liquid which initially pinned certain part of the body would start to strain the same, causing for considerable amount of damage being made on that body part. The damage would be seen in breaking of connective tissue - muscles, tendons and bones. On the other hand this technique can be used when user is making offense upon their target. The molecules would upsurge from user's body to that of opponent, pinning it down and straining the surfaced area. This technique can only be used twice per battle and never in consequent turns.

The only question I have is for the first, how much damage can we neutralize? As in, how fast or how strong does the projectile/taijutsu have to be to counter this? Is this considered Water for Elem S&W, so it would be able to counter projectiles of like S rank Fire, etc. As for taijutsu, would taijutsu be weaker than this, except the Leaf Dragon God tech?
How does it fare against EIG, depends on the gate?

 

[Erzo]

Two new techniques guys

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Anextiomarus no ījisu ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Aegis of Anextiomarus
Type: Supplementary / Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Utilizing the basic principles of Impetus of Untouchable user will release adhesive liquid from a desired spot on their body. This is used to render damage of incoming blunt damage/taijutsu based techniques, depending on the nature of the technique in question useless. Before the actual contact has been made, the user will through mental willingness expell a portion from one of their limbs or through a weapon, almost like a globue outwards to envelop the incoming object (body parts gradually slowing it down to the point it never came to touch the user but it would; It would be almost like a feather touch. A secondary application of this technique comes in play when user has been previously covered within the layer of the custom fighting style - It could be done passively the moment that an object (weapon of opponent or their body part) comes in contact with the already existing layer of molecules surrounding specific portion of users body. This technique can only be used three times per battle.

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Andorasute no fukutsū ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Andraste's Bellyache
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Andraste's Bellyache is an offensive type of technique, however with sort of a supplementary use. It can be performed as a separate technique or in combination with another one used beforehand. Its supplementary use can be seen once the body of opponent has been covered with the sticky liquid, and when used as such its activation would be very quickly as covering of their body if it wasn't previously covered. The sticky liquid which initially pinned certain part of the body would start to strain the same, causing for considerable amount of damage being made on that body part. The damage would be seen in breaking of connective tissue - muscles, tendons and bones. On the other hand this technique can be used when user is making offense upon their target. The molecules would upsurge from user's body to that of opponent, pinning it down and straining the surfaced area. This technique can only be used twice per battle and never in consequent turns.

Nice techs.

With the first, how much damage can I take without being affected?
Second tech is really cool, would make other-wise harmless sticky liquid on the opponents body into something much more dangerous.

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

I think we made the first one together. Well, we brainstormed it. Nicely written. I believe it can tackle A-rank, and S-rank Tai and Fire, considering Elemental upperhand. Thoughts?

Second one is cool. So, it sorta ''implodes'' on the area it sticks to?

 

[Detective L]

Two new techniques guys

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Anextiomarus no ījisu ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Aegis of Anextiomarus
Type: Supplementary / Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Utilizing the basic principles of Impetus of Untouchable user will release adhesive liquid from a desired spot on their body. This is used to render damage of incoming blunt damage/taijutsu based techniques, depending on the nature of the technique in question useless. Before the actual contact has been made, the user will through mental willingness expell a portion from one of their limbs or through a weapon, almost like a globue outwards to envelop the incoming object (body parts gradually slowing it down to the point it never came to touch the user but it would; It would be almost like a feather touch. A secondary application of this technique comes in play when user has been previously covered within the layer of the custom fighting style - It could be done passively the moment that an object (weapon of opponent or their body part) comes in contact with the already existing layer of molecules surrounding specific portion of users body. This technique can only be used three times per battle.

Antatchaburu no enchanto ≈ Andorasute no fukutsū ∾ The Enchant of Untouchable ≈ Andraste's Bellyache
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Andraste's Bellyache is an offensive type of technique, however with sort of a supplementary use. It can be performed as a separate technique or in combination with another one used beforehand. Its supplementary use can be seen once the body of opponent has been covered with the sticky liquid, and when used as such its activation would be very quickly as covering of their body if it wasn't previously covered. The sticky liquid which initially pinned certain part of the body would start to strain the same, causing for considerable amount of damage being made on that body part. The damage would be seen in breaking of connective tissue - muscles, tendons and bones. On the other hand this technique can be used when user is making offense upon their target. The molecules would upsurge from user's body to that of opponent, pinning it down and straining the surfaced area. This technique can only be used twice per battle and never in consequent turns.

First technique renders impact of a hit, null. This is done through causing some adhesive liquid to expel from ones body, toward the incoming object.

Second technique, either used in combination or alone. This technique aims to damage the opponent where sticky water has landed before, or can be covered at the time, and causes damage to the muscles, tendons and bones. Can be used to pin down opponents.

 

[Akasha]

First technique renders impact of a hit, null. This is done through causing some adhesive liquid to expel from ones body, toward the incoming object.

Second technique, either used in combination or alone. This technique aims to damage the opponent where sticky water has landed before, or can be covered at the time, and causes damage to the muscles, tendons and bones. Can be used to pin down opponents.

Lovely!