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  1. KeotsuEclipse

    Dusking Eclipse-chapter 3 and extra information

    This is a short chapter so I'm going to try a new format. Tell me what you think of the story and if I should stick with this format or go back to the old one. Thank you! Chapter 3-Interrogation Kakashi used his Sharingan on the boy and put him in a trance like state. "There. He should give...
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    Could some one teach me how this works?

    This looks really interesting. I read the rules, but I am completely confused as to how this works. Would some one be willing to explain this to me? If so, thank you very much.
  3. KeotsuEclipse

    Dusking Eclipse-chapter 2

    Some one tell me if this is even any good. If no one likes it I'm gonna stop wasting time and stop writing it. Chapter 2- Bad greetings. As Keotsu tried to shield himself from the freezing wind, he saw the lights of a town in the distance; he could barely make out the word: Tanzaku. Keotsu...
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    Dusking Eclipse-chapter 1

    Chapter 1-When it all went wrong, and a new beginning. Innkeeper: Did you sleep well? Keotsu: Yes ma'am. Thank you very much for your hospitality. Innkeeper: No not at all. Come back any time! Keotsu opened the door. Keotsu: Alright. Good bye. As he started down the road he began to think...
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    The first's sealing ability.

    Yamato has the first's sealing ability. Sakura asked if he would teach her the technique, but Yamato said he can't because the only reason he could use it was because he had the first DNA. Well the question I have is: Why can't they implant the first's genes into her? Yes, I know Yamato ends up...
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    Dusking Eclipse-Prologue page 3

    WARNING!!: This is a long one,with only a little dialogue. Samuel: Let us end this now! Rodrick: Yes, let us end this useless chit-chat and get on to what we came here to do. The three warriors rushed towards each other and their fist met in a semi-circle and created a shock wave that was...
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    Dusking Eclipse-Prologue page 2

    A beautiful harmonizing noise came from the three. Then slowly they started to lift into the air. Higher and higher until the soldiers on the ground looked like ants and they were level with the mountain tops. Samuel: I will ask again... Stop this trifling. Can you not tell that you have been...
  8. KeotsuEclipse

    Dusking Eclipse-Prologue

    300 years ago, in the foothills of the Blackside Mountains a great battle was waging. On one side of the emplacement marched an army clothed in gold and blue garbs. Embroidered on their chests: Solanios; representing the sun. Opposite the approaching hill marched in an errie line; men and women...
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    Video Markers?

    I haven't been here long so I guess I don't really have much right to complain or make suggestions, but I have a suggestion anyways. I suggest that for when you watch a video/read a manga, etc. that the site have some kind of marker that tells you what the last thing you viewed was. (Like for...
  10. KeotsuEclipse

    Help.

    I am new to the forums and I have a lot of questions so forgive me if I drag on. (If there is a section of the website that can answer the questions would you please tell me? Thank you all for your help in advance.) 1.Senseis (?) and groups. Please explain. 2. In case it didn't, how do you...
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    Tobi-Madara or Kakashi's pal?

    Lots of people think that Tobi is Madara, If you notice Kakashi's sharingan is opposite Tobi's. The story is that when Kakashi's friend died he gave him his sharingan, because Kakashi's eye was (gouged?) out. Kakashi's sharingan is on the left; Tobi's is on the right.
  12. KeotsuEclipse

    Hello!

    Hi!, I'm KeotsoEclipse. I'm in High School (ugh) and I'm an avid video-game player and anime watcher. So... Hi and I hope I can make some friends here!
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