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I hope you guys are enjoying the story! Please tell me what you think; your feedback is appreciated! Chapter 25: The Servant, and the Two of Three. Keotsu looked up. He gasped. An Eclipse. An omen of a great battle. He felt something cool against his cheek. He saw the grey clouds form. An...

Okay, I'm ready to learn the jutsu.

Okay, as some of you may or may not know, the Conflicker worm is around right now, so companies like Microsoft are advising to watch for viruses and other things. Well, I'd rather not my laptop be hacked, so I run a virus scan every night before bed, and I don't get any viruses, but I keep...

Thanks for your support guys. Book 1 is drawing to an end with these next few chapters. Please tell me what you think, I like to hear your feedback. Chapter 24: The Test Continues! As Mingus rushed towards the swordsmen, he shot bone pellets into the openings of his sword, stopping all the...

Terrain: Plain, wide river running through it, forest perimeter. Rules: No subs body flicker 1 time only B and below. 2 elements. I'll be using wind and water.

Tell me what you think please! Your feed back is appreciated! Chapter 23: The Test Begins! As Keotsu approached the village gate, he wondered what kina of abilities the swordsmen would have. He hadn?t seen another shin obi that really used a sword, except himself. He saw the proctors standing...

Terrain: Forest Islane (stretches 4 miles inland) 500 yards of beach all the way around, and middle of ocean. Rules: No subs Body flicker can be used once. 2 elements B and Below. I'll be using wind and water. (Health: 800 Chakra: 850)

Rules: B and Below. 2 elements No "subs" Body flicker can only be used 2. Terrain: An opening (approx. 1/2 mile diameter) in side a forest, with a lake (approx. 1/4 mile diameter) with the outer perimeter of the entire plain a forest. I'll be using Wind and Water. Who goes first?

Sorry it took so long, but I was working on a school report. Please tell me what you think! Chapter 22: A difficult Assignment! Keotsu walked over to the desk, where they told him to draw a number. “A17?” asked Keotsu. “Yes, go to group A, numbers 17 through 20.” said the receptionist. As...

Thank you guys for the support, here is the start of the chunin exams, 6 months after Orochimaru?s attack on the village. Hope you enjoy! Chapter 21: A new challenge and new friends Keotsu was walking back from the store, finally getting some guitar strings and groceries, among other things...

Thanks to everyone's support, I've gotten Dusking Eclipse to chapter 20, way more than I thought it would survive to. From me to my readers: Thank you for your support of the story. Please tell me what you think! I appreciate your feedback! Chapter 20: See ya, for now... Keotsu, Rena, and...

Tell me what you think please! I like to know what you guys think of the story! Also, tell me what color you like for the title, because I'm running out of ideas for each chapter. So: Blue Red Green Silver Gray Goldenrod or Gold or another. Thank you! (Please choose 2) Chapter 19...

Yes, I know there is another thread like this, but I'm still in the dark about this... Versuvio made (from what I understand) a new way for NarutoBase Members to download the anime and manga. I always watch them straight from the site, which by what I understand is called streaming, but what...

Okay, before people start getting mad, I plan to add more NB members to the story, but I want to make them relate to the story not just fillers. Tell me what you think; your feedback is important! Chapter 18: One of Three Keotsu Keotsu awoke with a lurch and next thing he knew, his head was...

Chapter 17, I think you will experince the Guru's full amount of power and hatred here, and his dedication to getting Keotsu. Tell me what you think, and know that your comments are appreciated. Chapter 17: The Meteor and the Unbeatable Enemy. "Solar,...lunar...and eclipse?" said Keotsu. "Yes...

*Sets up a grill and drops a cooler full of many different beverages. Starts to cook and turns on a stereo.* Now we just need people...

Here is chapter 16! Tell me what you think or things you would like to know. Your comments are important! Chapter 16: I've got to be stronger... Keotsu stood across from Naruto, both boys smiling and bandaged up. As they shook hands Keotsu said, "It was nice to meet you. I hope sometime, we...

This is just a suggestion. In the Narutobase Community section, we have subdivisions for video games, to idle chatter. This might be able to go with the Manga/comics section, and I'm gonna sound geeky by this, but could we not make a new one for the discussion of actual books? Ex. Brisingr and...

Thank you for you support up to this point, and hopefully beyond. With your help, this will become the longest running fan fiction in two chapters, surpassing the great fan fiction by Hiruzen Sarutobi: The Myobokuzan Chronicles. Please tell me what you think of the story or ask me questions...

Okay, I already know the first two water jutsu.