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nice list xd I feel as though obito can be included in the kirigakure one though

zabuza would lose easily but imagine this xd mei using her corrosive mist in silent killing so she'll surround her opponents in the deadly mist and so when they are weakened she'll use silent killing to take them out

I thought it was pretty good xd just work on dialogue and plot progression

nicely done this is the best i've seen in awhile xd everything seems very likely and the action for one chapter was there

yeah if you want to read chapters and understand it through information online then it'll probably take around 12 days, but if you want to read it straight through then more like 5-6 days XD

I'm guessing he was not at full power xd like imagine after a long day of kicking butt being low on chakra and have a ready to go force come at you in the middle of the night xd he most likely used the infinite explosion jutsu to take them all out

that would be sick if sasuke got those powers xd I hope naruto gets a beast avatar for his chakra body

slowing down time would be sick xd And it's op enough to be godly (so6p or kaguya level) but not op enough to be like he can't lose a fight nice prediction anyways; keep making them XD

I think now that sasuke has kaguya's eye he can control the shinju or at least now he can rain Kirin from the sky which would be op as hell xd Any predictions on what type of powers sasuke will get?

great prediction xd this should happen next week nice job

I like this prediction xd it gives us a more in depth look into the feelings of the sons and what not, which I think has to happen to better understand the parallels in the characters

i know what u mean xd i hope he at least is general of the forces after the war ends but if he has a good heart again then he can be a leader of a nice genin squad. My thinking was that he'd become hokage while naruto became sage who kept peace all over

pretty good prediction just the story telling aspect needs to be a bit better near the ending but really nice overall xd

yeah if all of the forces and shinobi of konoha were in part 1 and the akatsuki decided to attack akatsuki would most likely lose but i see them winning only if they use the civilians as an advantage (the fight would have to be taken somewhere else to go all out)

nice list but 3rd raikage should be included xd

Obito, Naruto, Sasuke and Kakashi/ Guy xd shikamaru isn't needed anymore since they already found the weakness

it's really rough story writing but I like the plot line of this story xd

great prediction xd if it' gai's last fight it should last a while but this is gonna be sick

i like the cliffhanger so much xd good job overall

he shouldnt be able to do this he needs senjutsu too though xd so he can recover from it; he's only buying naruto and sasuke and the world time to get back on their feet