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  1. Red-Robin

    [CC] Radiant Training \ Zhongli - Red-Robin

    That's good to know on both accounts, as I could very easily see how they might be interpreted as such, so I'm glad I thought to ask now rather than try to get too liberal with their applications later on down the road and run into it as a conflict. Thank you for the clarification on both. No...
  2. Red-Robin

    [YY] "Finding the Balance": Yang Edition

    That's fair. With reference to the Genjutsu bit, I wasn't thinking that they -as in the tigers- could or couldn't be put under a Genjutsu, but rather that if you the user is put into one, they could possibly break you free from it, in the "pseudo-sentience" concept encapsulated the notion of a...
  3. Red-Robin

    Ururuga, the Dragon Spector

    Looking good so far. One small issue that needs to be addressed is the number of unique abilities you have. At present, you have three: Arali (KG/KT), Yamanaka (HA) and Dark Release (AE). Unfortunately, despite the unique precedence of how Arali are regarded as a racial function rather than...
  4. Red-Robin

    [Approved] Seven

    Always lovely to see Seven on the move. One point I wanted to address is that you currently have three unique abilities selected for this bio: Poison Ninjutsu (AN), Red Kama (Mode) as well as being a Djinn (Custom Clan). Custom Clans are more or less treated as a KG/HA with relation to the fact...
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    [NW] Faye Katsuryoku

    Looking good so far, just a few things that I'd like to address before moving forward with the bio. Firstly, you have Apex Tracking Specialist as one of your listed specialties, which requires a minimum of 5 in DEX while you yourself only have 4 points put toward DEX with your current build, so...
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    [NW] Zahad, Collector of Kingdoms

    With regard to Chakra Fortification, you're correct that it's fine now. At the time that Imperfect had commented, it would have been an issue relative to how he described it, but recent changes to that specialty has now allowed for it to remain the same, so all good there. As for the Wisdom of...
  7. Red-Robin

    [YY] "Finding the Balance": Yang Edition

    Well as I had already described, I'm not all too sure how to go about utilizing this in an effective way, but if I were to try and imagine some scenarios based on my limited understanding, it would be that pairing this ability with just about any technique/fighting style that is known for...
  8. Red-Robin

    [Rift] Fall Of Chungsu: Horus, Shirou, and Zhongli

    As the beast continues to suffer in the swamp, Shirou would decide it's time to wrap things up. Sensing Kurama's exact position via his sensory, Shirou would manipulate the three headed dog to reach it's full size and change it's shape via another technique, separating it from his shadow in the...
  9. Red-Robin

    [NW] The Chalk Prince and the Dragon

    Looking pretty good so far. One small detail that I wanted to address before moving forward is that you currently have 3 summoning contracts listed, which is a valid limit only if you are Sage rank. Jounin are limited to 2 contracts listed on the bio of said rank. So if there is an award you...
  10. Red-Robin

    [NW] Tokitō Muichirō

    For the most part this is looking good. One small issue involves the specialty "Apex Genjutsu Defense Specialist," in which this specialty requires you to have at least a 5 in your SPIRIT stat, and in the case of this bio you only have 2 allocated to your SPIRIT stat. So you'll need to either...
  11. Red-Robin

    [KG] "Hardest Metal and Thicker Still": Tempering Steel

    There was something about this man that drove a wedge into Velvet's temperament unlike any other. While she wasn't exactly known for her "tame" or "rational" behavior, that was in fact just a part of the animalistic influence of her history that contributed to such behavior, no fault of any one...
  12. Red-Robin

    [YY] "Finding the Balance": Yang Edition

    Sorry for the delayed response. This technique seems quite interesting, but if I'm being honest, it seems kind of unlikely to have a huge amount of success in taking effect in most situations I can think of. Right out of the gate, the technique describes itself as the "pseudo sentient white...
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    Ruins of Chungsu (001)

    After having contemplated on his options for how and when to approach the cosmic tear in reality, Zhongli was invited to join the preexisting team that had seemingly been formed right before they'd enter the rift. With only a momentary hesitation for consideration, Zhongli merely nodded before...
  14. Red-Robin

    [YY] "Finding the Balance": Yang Edition

    W That's good to know, thank you for clarifying. With that said, I'm inclined to believe it does put an ally into a state as it applies damage reduction by 35 or 15 to all physical damage depending on if it was touch or proximity this was used as (1 stat increase) and then any varying bodily...
  15. Red-Robin

    [YY] "Finding the Balance": Yang Edition

    I'm inclined to say no because it doesn't require chakra per turn to sustain it, but if I'm going to be completely honest, I've always been marginally confused as to what a state is when referring to something that differentiates to say, a mode for example, or something that explicitly calls...
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    [NW] Rumi Hyuuga

    So just a couple of things I'm going to point out that needs cleared up, both specifically dealing with your specialties. In both your summarized list and descriptive breakdown of your specialties, you have Apex Speed Resistance as your named specialty, yet in the breakdown, you have it...
  17. Red-Robin

    [CC] Radiant Training \ Zhongli - Red-Robin

    Crown of the Ruler - Munificence of Jeanne In this Augmentation the user will augment their chakra system with Prana to increase the efficiency and scale of their techniques, allowing them to travel further and cover a greater scope. Both the range at which they can be created or manifested and...
  18. Red-Robin

    [YY] "Finding the Balance": Yang Edition

    Are you implying summons are not people too? The audacity... That's a fair point. And with the injection of that much chakra into the user's body/system, would it not double as a form of body surge wherein it flushes the user of all foreign chakra in cases of things like Genjutsu?
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    [KG] "Hardest Metal and Thicker Still": Tempering Steel

    Velvet let out a soft huff as she watched and listened to the Smith begin collecting his things and readying his departure, as though to leave her where she stood. Her eyes narrowed upon the man as she gritted her teeth and clenched her fists in a moment of inner frustration. Rejection was not...
  20. Red-Robin

    [YY] "Finding the Balance": Yang Edition

    I assume you're asking what my interpretation is of the question I had asked, on whether or not the technique can be used on the user themselves. In which case, I would imagine that it ordinarily wouldn't be used on the user themselves based on the fact that it explicitly says that you infuse...
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