Custom Element Jutsu Submissions

Ańbu Juniør said:

(Anburaton: Furuki Kamigami no Ko) Umbra Release: Child of the Old Gods
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50 - 70
Damage: 40 - 80
Description: This technique entails the basic applications of Umbra Release following the performance of the required handseals ( B rank is one hand seal, A rank is 2 and S rank is 3). Child of the Old Gods allows the user to produce violet flames from the body or manifest them in any form they can imagine, anywhere on the battlefield, though it cannot manifest within short range of an opponent unless the user is also within that range. Manifested constructs that are maintained require the expenditure of -20 chakra per turn, but allow the user to perform other actions simultaneously and can last for up to two turns similar to how Stone Golem can be maintained. When the flames are released, the user will choose to apply the reducing or bolstering effects of Umbra Release as outlined in Gateway to Infinity, with the flames damaging only those designated as enemies while harmlessly passing over allies.

Notes:
- At B-rank, this technique can be used five times per battle, three times at A-rank, and twice S-rank.
- No Yin Release, Fire Release, Fuuinjutsu, or Umbra Release techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following two turns.
- The spiritual flames will always damage enemies on contact, regardless of which effects are applied.

Approved - I've removed the middle section as it was repeating the passive of your CE that's approved above. I've changed the hand seals from a note to be in brackets in the text (You had more than you needed to for each rank)

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Ańbu Juniør said:

Resubmitting:
- The increased chakra value in the Umbra techniques comes from the advanced fuuin portion of the CE.
- Adjusted the additional duration and damage dealt per turn from "Feed the Void"

(Anburaton: Konton Sokushin-zai) Umbra Release: Chaos Accelerant
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 50 (+10)
Damage: N/A (+30)
Description: Chaos Accelerant is an infusion of Umbra chakra into another Fire Release, Fuuinjustu, or Yin Release technique during its creation to alter its physical properties similar to Change into Heaven. By using an additional hand seal, the altered technique will adopt the appearance of violet flames and the inherent self-sustaining trait granted by “Feed the Void”. This means that techniques that last multiple turns will have their duration reduced by two (-2) turns unless they absorb a weaker technique. While the user expends 50 chakra, only 10 chakra will be added to the original technique. The infused technique will acquire an additional 30 damage, but will now deal spiritual damage instead of physical and gain Umbra’s strength and weaknesses when interacting with other techniques through their chakra tier, as the damage can only be felt by living entities, including summonings, creations, clones, and Edos.

Due to the “Feed the Void” trait, an enemy technique overpowered by 10 chakra allows the altered technique to sustain itself for one additional turn, dealing 10 spiritual damage per turn to living targets struck as the violet flames continue to burn. If triggered, the self-sustenance of the altered technique increases by one turn and 10 damage at each chakra tier difference. This means techniques overpowered by 20 chakra will last two additional turns and deal 20 damage per turn. This effect caps at a 30 chakra difference, allowing self-sustained techniques to last a maximum of 3 additional turns and dealing 30 damage per turn. Additional damage from the violet flames can be mitigated by removing the flames from the target.

Notes:
- This technique can be used to empower another Umbra Release technique.
- This technique can be performed alongside another Fire-based Ninjutsu, Fuuinjustsu, Yin Release, or Umbra Release technique in the same timeframe.
- This technique can be used up to four times per battle, with a two-turn cooldown between each use.
- No Yin Release, Fire Release, Fuuinjutsu, or Umbra Release techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following two turns.

Declined - I can't allow this level of change to a technique to gain so much damage and effects from a B rank. B ranks generally boost by 15 damage, higher level would be 20. But then A ranks/S ranks would hit that 30 damage buff.

The bolded chakra you made probs need to be a bit clearer. I assume you want it to say "When overpowering a opposing technique by 10 chakra, is sustained for an extra turn. This increases by an addition turn per 10 chakra above to a maximum of 3 turns.

Also I can't allow it to get up to 30 damage per turn. That's wild. Even rot at all ranks does 10 damage per turn.

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Resubmitting: https://animebase.me/threads/custom-element-jutsu-submissions.792312/post-22156972

Ańbu Juniør said:

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(Anburaton/Hiraishin no Jutsu: Shinsei Sori) Umbra Release/Flying Thunder God Technique: Nova Warp
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 70
Damage: 80
Description: This technique combines the use of the violet flames of Umbra Release and Space-time Ninjutsu. The user infuses themselves with the spiritual flames and releases it throughout their body in a surge, but before it can be released outwards, the user teleports to a target marked with the Seal of the Flying Thunder God. Upon appearing, the user immediately unleashes a devastating omnidirectional explosion that deals spiritual damage to enemies while leaving allies unharmed. The sealing properties inherent to Umbra Release allows the explosion to overcome most defenses by absorbing techniques weaker than itself. An enemy technique overpowered by 10 chakra allows this technique to sustain itself for one additional turn, dealing 10 spiritual damage per turn to living targets struck as the violet flames continue to burn. If triggered, the self-sustenance increases by one turn and 10 damage at each chakra tier difference. This means techniques overpowered by 20 chakra will last two additional turns and deal 20 damage per turn. This effect caps at a 30 chakra difference, allowing self-sustained techniques to last a maximum of 3 additional turns and dealing 30 damage per turn. Additional damage from the violet flames can be mitigated by removing the fire from the target.

Notes:
- This technique can be used twice per battle and requires a three-turn cooldown between each use.
-No Yin Release, Fire Release, Fuuinjutsu, Umbra Release, or FTG techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following three turns.

Declined - While I understand the premise, this is a bit much. Cannon wise we have seen Tobirama teleport and slash with a sword. We have seen Minato create a Rasengan then teleport with it. For the sake of balance I'd allow something along those lines but to appear and instantly burst 80/120 damage up to mid range. It's a bit too much. Mix that with the effects that will be applied thanks to Gateway to Infinity. Then on top of that, the pulse can be sustained. It's too much.

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- Reduced the range to short.
- Reworded it a bit so that the pulse isn't sustained, just the lingering flames after the technique hits.
- Link to Gateway to Infinity: X

(Anburaton/Hiraishin no Jutsu: Shinsei Sori) Umbra Release/Flying Thunder God Technique: Nova Warp
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 70
Damage: 80
Description: This technique combines the use of the violet flames of Umbra Release and Space-time Ninjutsu. The user infuses themselves with the spiritual flames and releases it throughout their body in a surge as they teleport to a target marked with the Seal of the Flying Thunder God. Upon appearing, the user immediately unleashes an omnidirectional, short-ranged explosion that deals spiritual damage to enemies while leaving allies unharmed. The sealing properties inherent to Umbra Release allow the explosion to overcome most defenses by absorbing techniques of equal or lower chakra, becoming self-sustaining in the case of the latter to allow any lingering flames after the initial explosion to deal additional damage to living targets as outlined in Gateway to Infinity.

Notes:
- This technique can be used twice per battle and requires a three-turn cooldown between each use.
- No FTG techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following two turns.
- No Yin Release, Fire Release, Fuuinjutsu, Umbra Release, or FTG techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following three turns.


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± Approved, edits made. ±

Resubmitting: https://animebase.me/threads/custom-element-jutsu-submissions.792312/post-22166730

Ańbu Juniør said:

Updating: https://animebase.me/threads/custom-element-jutsu-submission.764501/post-22131601
- Altered damage value per yin/yang update
- Removed the "Feed the Void" portion that was bolded, as the effect is outlined in Gateway to Infinity
- Link to Gateway to Infinity: X

(Anburaton: Tsuihō no Ekō) Umbra Release: Echo of Expulsion
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 60
Damage: 60
Description: Echo of Expulsion is a basic technique that allows the user to draw upon Umbra’s violet flames, surging it throughout the body to cleanse any debilitating afflictions affecting them by consuming the foreign chakra that permeates the body, especially against techniques like powerful Genjutsu, Ronin and Yamanaka abilities, and chakra imbalances caused by Yin and Yang release. It doubles as an offensive technique that deals considerable damage as the surged chakra is released outward. The technique appears as an omnidirectional burst of violet flames that travels up to 10 meters in all directions and carries the reducing or bolstering effects of Umbra Release, as outlined in Gateway to Infinity, damaging only designated enemies while harmlessly passing over allies.

Notes:
- This technique can be used three times per battle, requiring a two-turn cooldown between each use.
- No Yin Release, Fire Release, Fuuinjutsu, or Umbra Release techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following turn.

± Declined, I'm gonna need some handseals for these - and also highlight that clears you of those foreign chakra from equal or lesser ranked techniques within that umbrella, as outlined in your CE. ±

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- Added handseals
- Edited the name slightly
- Highlighted the level of chakra that can be consumed

(Anburaton: Tsuihō no Zankyō) Umbra Release: Echo of Expulsion
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 60
Damage: 60
Description: Echo of Expulsion is a basic technique that, after performing two handseals, allows the user to draw upon Umbra’s violet flames and surge it throughout themselves or inject it into an ally through direct contact to cleanse any debilitating affliction caused by foreign chakra of equal or lesser value by consuming it. It is especially effective against powerful Genjutsu, Ronin and Yamanaka abilities, as well as chakra imbalances caused by Yin and Yang release. This technique also serves as an offensive move, dealing damage as the surged chakra is released outward. The technique appears as an omnidirectional burst of violet flames that travels up to 10 meters in all directions and carries the reducing or bolstering effects of Umbra Release, as outlined in Gateway to Infinity, damaging only designated enemies while harmlessly passing over allies. When injected into an ally, the omnidirectional burst does not occur.

Notes:
- This technique can be used three times per battle, requiring a two-turn cooldown between each use.
- No Yin Release, Fire Release, Fuuinjutsu, or Umbra Release techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following turn.

Resubmitting: https://animebase.me/threads/custom-element-jutsu-submissions.792312/post-22166730

Ańbu Juniør said:

- Increased the Rank from B to A.
- Removed the "Feed the Void" portion that was bolded, as it is outlined in Gatewate to Infinity

(Anburaton: Konton Sokushin-Zai) Umbra Release: Chaos Accelerant
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 60 (+10)
Damage: N/A (+30)
Description: Chaos Accelerant is an infusion of Umbra chakra into Fire Release, Fuuinjustu, Yin Release, or another Umbra technique during its creation to alter its physical properties similar to Change into Heaven. By performing an additional hand seal, the altered technique will adopt the appearance of violet flames and the inherent self-sustaining trait granted by “Feed the Void”. The infused technique will gain an additional +30 damage, but will now deal spiritual damage instead of physical and gain Umbra’s strengths and weaknesses when interacting with other techniques through their chakra tier, as the damage can only be felt by living entities, including summonings, creations, clones, and Edos.

Notes:
- This technique can be performed alongside another Fire-based Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Yin Release, or Umbra Release technique in the same timeframe.
- This technique can be used up to three times per battle, with a two-turn cooldown between each use.
- No Yin Release, Fire Release, Fuuinjutsu, or Umbra Release techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following turn.

± Declined, you're going to have to clear up what kind of Fuuinjutsu this can be infused into, too broad as it stands, same with Yin release techniques. With Fire, it makes sense. How long does this infusion last? Or is it only for that technique that's infused? Because you have the Feed the Void inherent to Umbra, these restrictions need to be clear because its restriction + passive effects of the CE. ±

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- Removed infusion to fuuinjutsu techniques altogether.
- Added that only damage-dealing Yin Release techniques can be infused.

(Anburaton: Konton Sokushin-Zai) Umbra Release: Chaos Accelerant
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 60 (+10)
Damage: N/A (+30)
Description: Chaos Accelerant is an infusion of Umbra chakra into Fire Release, another Umbra Release, or a damage-dealing Yin Release technique during its creation to alter its physical properties similar to Change into Heaven. By performing an additional hand seal, the altered technique will adopt the appearance of violet flames and the inherent self-sustaining trait granted by “Feed the Void”. The infused technique gains an additional +30 damage, but now deals spiritual damage instead of physical, and adopts Umbra’s strengths and weaknesses when interacting with other techniques through their chakra tier. This infusion lasts for as long as the infused technique does..

Notes:
- This technique can be performed alongside another Fire-based Ninjutsu, Yin Release, or Umbra Release technique in the same timeframe.
- This technique can be used up to three times per battle, with a two-turn cooldown between each use.
- No Yin Release, Fire Release, Fuuinjutsu, or Umbra Release techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following turn.

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(Anburaton: Semari Kuru Kyomu) Umbra Release: Encroaching Void
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 60 (-20 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description: Encroaching Void extends the user’s mastery over the violet flames to manipulate the surroundings in their favor. After performing two handseals, the user channels chakra into a surface through his feet or hands, manifesting a twenty-meter layer of violet flames that permeates the terrain. With its Fūinjutsu properties, the flames spread and consume the chakra that sustains Earth Release techniques and other constructs originating from the ground/surface of equal or lesser chakra. Techniques caught within its influence are rendered inert as it consumes their chakra, causing non-solid manifestations to dissipate and solid constructs to crumble into inert, unusable remains. The flames are equally dangerous to enemies who come into contact with them, dealing spiritual damage while leaving allies unharmed. If Encroaching Void absorbs a weaker technique, the flames become self-sustaining due to the effect of Feed The Void

Notes:
- This technique lasts for two turns.
- This technique can be used up to three times per battle, with a two-turn cooldown between each use.
- No Yin Release, Fire Release, Fuuinjutsu, or Umbra Release techniques above A-Rank can be used in the following turn.

Akisha said:

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(Yoton/Sanmiittai Suiton: San Doragon) - Yang/Trinity Water Release: Trinity Dragon
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 60 (200) - 20 per turn
Damage Points: 120
Description: Trinity Dragon is a technique that combines Yang Release with Trinity Water release to create a sentient creation that provides both offense and utility in battle. After performing 3 hand seals, the user will release yang and trinity water chakra to create a dragon the size of Manda, with wingspan of roughly 30 meters.

Like all trinity water techniques, the dragon consists of boiling water, ice and transparent steam all compressed in the perfect balance, though this particular technique is sentient due to the abundance of Yang chakra imbued in it. The dragon comes with a special passive ability. Once it takes flight, the Dragon releases trinity water from its body and wings, effectively creating rain and hail to drop down the battle ground, while also replenishing itself. While this rain/hail combo doesn't do any damage, it provides the user with sources for his trinity water, water, rain and ice jutsu (if the user is Hyouton user)

The over abundance of yang chakra within the rain/hail causes a regenerative effect on the user and trinity water techniques used within the rain/hail, restoring the user 20 HP per turn. Trinity water techniques weakened by a clash regain one rank of strength while within the rain or hail, restoring 20 damage points and 10 chakra to the technique. Because the rain and hail remain tethered to the dragon and infused with the user’s Yang and Trinity Water chakra, opponents cannot use them as a medium for their techniques.

The Dragon can use Trinity Water techniques but can't use techniques of its components, using his body or the "rain" as a medium. Once per battle the Dragon can use his other special ability: "Hailstorm," increasing dramatically the intensity of the trinity water it has been releasing onto the battleground, releasing massive chunks of ice and compressed water that the dragon can control at will, directing them towards the opponent to deal damage (80), leaving small craters bellow and a field covered with ice and water.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle, with two turns between uses once the first use ends.
Note: The creation is made with 200 of the user's chakra and lasts until destroyed or the chakra cost per turn can no longer be paid by the creation.
Note: The user can't use any Yang techniques for 1 turn after creation.
Note: The user can't Trinity water techniques above A rank in the following turn after creation.
Note: "Hailstorm" counts as a jutsu per turn, with 40 chakra cost and 80 damage points. After use, the creation can't use any techniques for two turns and its passive release of trinity water on the battle ground is deactivated for the remainder of the battle.

± Declined, nice technique but needs to be toned down a bit - also, that restriction is filler-ish. Also, we just started training on Yang, at least resubmit this when we done z.z ±

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We almost done with Yang, so I'm resubmitting (pls don't hate me) I assume we'll be finished with the training by the time you check this. xD
-Added more restrictions.
-Downgraded the healing to 15
-Removed the one rank strength regeneration of trinity water techniques. Instead added 10 damage boost to the techniques for 10 chakra cost more.

(Yoton/Sanmiittai Suiton: San Doragon) - Yang/Trinity Water Release: Trinity Dragon
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 60 (200) - 20 per turn
Damage Points: 120
Description: Trinity Dragon is a technique that combines Yang Release with Trinity Water release to create a sentient creation that provides both offense and utility in battle. After performing 3 hand seals, the user will release yang and trinity water chakra to create a dragon the size of Manda, with wingspan of roughly 30 meters.

Like all trinity water techniques, the dragon consists of boiling water, ice and transparent steam all compressed in the perfect balance, though this particular technique is sentient due to the abundance of Yang chakra imbued in it. The dragon comes with a special passive ability. Once it takes flight, the Dragon releases trinity water from its body and wings, effectively creating rain and hail to drop down the battle ground, while also replenishing itself. While this rain/hail combo doesn't do any damage, it provides the user with sources for his trinity water, water, rain and ice jutsu (if the user is Hyouton user)

The over abundance of yang chakra within the rain/hail causes a regenerative effect on the user and a slight boosting effect on trinity water techniques used within the rain/hail, restoring the user 15 HP per turn. Trinity water techniques of the user, used within the rain gain a 10 dmg boost, but also cost 10 chakra more. Because the rain and hail remain tethered to the dragon and infused with the user’s Yang and Trinity Water chakra, opponents cannot use them as a medium for their techniques.

The Dragon can use Trinity Water techniques but can't use techniques of its components, using his body or the "rain" as a medium. Once per battle the Dragon can use his other special ability: "Hailstorm," increasing dramatically the intensity of the trinity water it has been releasing onto the battleground, releasing massive chunks of ice and compressed water that the dragon can control at will, directing them towards the opponent to deal damage (80), leaving small craters bellow and a field covered with ice and water.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle, with two turns between uses once the first use ends.
Note: The creation is made with 200 of the user's chakra and lasts until destroyed or the chakra cost per turn can no longer be paid by the creation.
Note: The user can't use any Yang techniques for 1 turn after creation and the turn after the dragon is destroyed.
Note: The user can't Trinity water, and water techniques above A rank in the following turn after creation.
Note: "Hailstorm" counts as a jutsu per turn, with 40 chakra cost and 80 damage points. After use, the creation can't use any techniques for two turns and its passive release of trinity water on the battle ground is deactivated for the remainder of the battle.


(Sanmiittai Suiton:Kunshu no sōzō) - Trinity Water Release: The Monarch’s Creation
Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: D - S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10 - 40
Damage: 20 - 80
Description: "The Monarch's Creation is the advanced manipulation technique of Trinity Water, allowing the user to create familiars made of trinity water. The familiars are limited only to the user's imagination (within reason) As all trinity water techniques, the familiars consist of highly compressed water with floating ice in the middle and transparent steam coming out of it and they carry the same offensive properties of the element. The familiars take on the characteristics of the chosen form - if a tiger is made - it can run; if a bird is made - it can fly, etc. The user and his familiar share a mental link, allowing the user to give commands to the familiar. The familiars can use Trinity Water techniques up to the rank they are created - i.e A rank familiar can cast Trinity Water techniques up to A rank. If a familiar is created that does not have hands to perform hand seals, it will need to use specific motions to use the jutsu (like slashing, flapping its wings) essentially taking the same amount of time to cast the jutsu as if it was making hand seals. The maximum size of the familiar is 20meters and only one familiar can be active at a time.
Note: The familiar lasts 3 turns.
Note: D and C rank require no hand seals. B rank requires one, A rank - two and S rank - three hand seals.
Note: Can only be used 6 times total. A rank can only be used 3 times and S rank can only be used twice.
Note: When the S rank version is destroyed, the technique can't be used for 2 turns, Trinity Water can't be used the following turn and no water techniques above A rank for one turn.
Note: When B and A rank version are destroyed, the user can't use any trinity water techniques the following turn.