Shinobi futures part Ten : Naruto Uzumaki

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This was amazing, if Kishi were to actually go with this idea then that would epic as hell.
 

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Thank you!! :D



Thanks for another great comment! Love your feedback! :eek:

hehe, I always wanted NaruHina to happen, so that's why I made it like this!
About their first daughter! No, their daughter has the Uzumaki body of Naruto ^^ the only hyuuga trait is has is Hinatas blue hair ;)
their other two children, are still to be revealed in Hinatas Future! (two sons) and one has the byakugan as you might've guessed in Naruto's future last sentence ;)

exactly like you said it!: they've become friends again, altho they'll never lay eyes on each other again. they've both chosen their paths now ^^

Hard job indeed, it feels good for him to be cheered at and that the people are happy and trust him completely as their Hokage, but ofcourse, after he just killed his best friend (killed or not, he never knows for 100% sure but he has the feeling his alive) it's a bit hard to take! - I implented the son thing painting the hokage heads just to feel a bit nostalgic to Naruto's intro in the first episode/manga ^^ (this is the youngest son with byakugan by the way)

-> about Naruto's children you're right, but it would've been too long!! but i'll tell alot about them in Hinatas future to make that up!!! :D

yeah, Kurama didn't have much to do in their rivalry, he's just there, and he always will be ;) but this fight was between two friends, all he did was lending his chakra, and healing Naruto a bit because he had alot of fractures as well ^^

love your feedback!! :D
Thanks :).

''big bright white eyes'' yeah that is byakugan alright :D.

Looking forward to read Hinata's future :).
 

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Epic! Really your best work so far, and every time I think you cannot get better. I almost cried when you wrote Sasuke held back to die. That was so sad but would fit him. He'd be too proud to show he still has some feelings for Naruto as a friend, he'd beat him senseless then die. So fitting the both of them. Very well done. Poor Naruto, I feel sorry for him. Now I will read the other one.
 

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Epic! Really your best work so far, and every time I think you cannot get better. I almost cried when you wrote Sasuke held back to die. That was so sad but would fit him. He'd be too proud to show he still has some feelings for Naruto as a friend, he'd beat him senseless then die. So fitting the both of them. Very well done. Poor Naruto, I feel sorry for him. Now I will read the other one.

Thank you!!! I'm glad you like it!!
and yes it would fit him indeed!! :eek: he would really beat up Naruto to show him his still 'stronger' and then he'd die.. it's really weird and sad, but that's how he is.. :D
and yeah Naruto will get over it. but even if they'll never see each other again, they'll know that they ended being good friends again ;)
 

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Thank you!!! I'm glad you like it!!
and yes it would fit him indeed!! :eek: he would really beat up Naruto to show him his still 'stronger' and then he'd die.. it's really weird and sad, but that's how he is.. :D
and yeah Naruto will get over it. but even if they'll never see each other again, they'll know that they ended being good friends again ;)
I agree. I'm glad Kishi created these two characters and I'm also glad when we can understand them a little bit. And you're doing a great job on it. :)
 

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I agree. I'm glad Kishi created these two characters and I'm also glad when we can understand them a little bit. And you're doing a great job on it. :)

Thanks! ^^ glad you liked it
 

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Will you be making a thread like this for Hinata? I hope you could.
 

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Will you be making a thread like this for Hinata? I hope you could.

I ofcourse will, I made alot of threads about other characters as well by the way ;)

Hinata's future will come out somewhere soon as well! :p
 

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truthfully, i wasnt expecting narutos part to be all that great. but i was surprised when you added the final battle and found out that sasuke held back. i never liked sasuke but i loved this story!! i loved it!
 

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truthfully, i wasnt expecting narutos part to be all that great. but i was surprised when you added the final battle and found out that sasuke held back. i never liked sasuke but i loved this story!! i loved it!

surprise surprise!! xd haha thanks mate! i'm glad you like it even tho you didn't expected it to be that great! :eek:
 

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Do you remember this speech that Onoki made to Naruto during the fight with Madara?
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Now I know that you make threads on the Shinobi futures for certain characters. But could you please try take these words from Onoki and expand upon them and try to could make a thread about the future of the entire shinobi world?

Even if takes time that would be great.
 

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Do you remember this speech that Onoki made to Naruto during the fight with Madara?
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Now I know that you make threads on the Shinobi futures for certain characters. But could you please try take these words from Onoki and expand upon them and try to could make a thread about the future of the entire shinobi world?

Even if takes time that would be great.

yes I remember. You made an interesting point there mate! I might look in it ^^
at my fanfic there is worldpeace (all the shinobi countries are in an alliance) but ofcourse rogue ninja will always stay to excist..
It should be interesting for me if i can make a future thread about the whole shinobi world in peace with all the villages and kages ^^
thanks for the request! i'll keep it in mind, but it will probably be one of the last ones that i'll make as i have many other characters to do first! ^^
 

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yes I remember. You made an interesting point there mate! I might look in it ^^
at my fanfic there is worldpeace (all the shinobi countries are in an alliance) but ofcourse rogue ninja will always stay to excist..
It should be interesting for me if i can make a future thread about the whole shinobi world in peace with all the villages and kages ^^
thanks for the request! i'll keep it in mind, but it will probably be one of the last ones that i'll make as i have many other characters to do first! ^^

At least I know that you're going to try and make that thread, thanks for listening.
 
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