✵ √alen's ℬook of ℘oetry II ✵

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Poetry is something people take for
granted. A poet is a writer expressing his
true feelings about something his passion
and his devotion. About pain or pleasure it
does not matter but when a poet sit's and
writes he is pouring out his heart to the
world. Poets tell us their story through a
poem but it is given on a card that gets
thrown away no one appreciates the poet yet
he tells us his deepest secrets and his true
love and we just ignore the poetry. The
poets words are the song of his heart so
when you look at poetry see if the song
sings to your heart before you throw the
card away. Because the poem you throw away
may be a poem written about you.

Her Smile


Her smile oh so bright,
Fills the room with brilliant light.
A smile that brought many delight,
So strong it could stop a fight.
A smile that could fly a kite,
Even in the dark of night.
Her smile oh so bright,
Noone could reproduce try all their might.
A smile that shines so bright,
It puts a smile on everyone in sight.

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Her Tears

Her tears fell on me
Like rain drops fall on the leaves of a tree
On a january night
Her strained voice was filled with fright
She said this breakup is killing me
Ever since I caught him flirting
Now i'm really hurting
I need a friend to be there for me
Who can feel my pain and confort me
And I knew I could always lean on you
She hugged me tight,it just seemed so right
The moons glare
Brought out the highlights in her hair
And her eyes
Glistened like the stars in the skies
She had just lost the love of her life
He walked out on her
Leaving her sad and blue
I conforted her, and told her
I would always be there for her

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Tracing

You pull me down
And hold me near
Your arms around me
Destroy my fear
They circle my body
Your hands tracing my curves
Your strength sheltering me
Calming my nerves
I roll into relaxation
With you holding me tight
When your beside me
I can sleep through the night
Now is the time
I feel safe and secure
Lost in this love
So deep and pure

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I feel that the utmost compliment is to have someone to remember the titles of your poems. However, the supreme compliment is to have someone recite your poem.​
 

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a hiku for you

Valen's words get him friends zoned
Smile, tears, tracing
Given to the girl, friend zone

Smile
A smile, so simple, so easy to excite
A young mans mind enough to recite
His feeling on paper, paper, to be typed
A dark room will come to light
Because of his words, feelings ignite.
Lips so soft, voice so polite
Mimicking her smile, so tense and upright
Her curves on her face hit me so soft, pillow fight
Our smile should join as one so we can finally reunite.
Still, a better love story than twilight

Edit: i was gonna do all 3 but im to lazy. :/
 
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a hiku for you

Valen's words get him friends zoned
Smile, tears, tracing
Given to the girl, friend zone

Smile
A smile, so simple, so easy to excite
A young mans mind enough to recite
His feeling on paper, paper, to be typed
A dark room will come to light
Because of his words, feelings ignite.
Lips so soft, voice so polite
Mimicking her smile, so tense and upright
Her curves on her face hit me so soft, pillow fight
Our smile should join as one so we can finally reunite.
Still, a better love story than twilight
Very well..

It looks like you understood

I'm much of a scepticus, that's why I compare ''Relationships'' to ''Tracing''

Following along, with no real plan of action, just going with the motions

But I'm amazed you came up with these few lines so quickly, phenomenal..​

It seems my mind is out of ink for now.​
 
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Very well..

It looks like you understood

I'm much of a scepticus, that's why I compare ''Relationships'' to ''Tracing''

Following along, with no real plan of action, just going with the motions

But I'm amazed you came up with these few lines so quickly, phenomenal..

It seems my mind is out of ink for now.​
haha i used to write parodies songs so a girl that i liked back in high school (2 years ago) and i ended up giving it to her and it put me in the friendzone. so i have had some practice on this. haha : ) if you re-read my hiku, it probably makes a little more sense this time. : )
 

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haha i used to write parodies songs so a girl that i liked back in high school (2 years ago) and i ended up giving it to her and it put me in the friendzone. so i have had some practice on this. haha : ) if you re-read my hiku, it probably makes a little more sense this time. : )
It is time for you to pick up the pen again

*Warning: It is addicting o_o​
 
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