I am, and what I see you as

[AlexUchina]

Different
Strange
An outsider

No emotions are shown
I have to trust
I don't have to talk

You need patience
You need to listen
You need to trust

Talk behind me
Ill find out
hang by a thread

Two talked
stabbed my back
I don't trust

Imay not talk
I may not show
I may not trust

You need to be a friend
A true one
that I will open up to

 

[thesurvivor]

wait isnt this suppose to rhyme or no?

 

[-Punk-]

your'e an a role girl .... but put a smile on that face

 

[gas83091]

another one? booo make em' rhyme

 

[Dreckerplayer]

You don't trust yourself, is that it?

"I am, and what I see you as"

 

[Sage of Nature Creation]

I still am not sure what this is supposed to be?

 

[Saikyokami]

just should to tell you this should be uner Poetry Good poem thogh

 

[Urda]

Why does it feel like your talking or giving me advice? Xd Still Simple.

 

[Uchiha Kisuke]

im not feeling it ................... liked the other one better tho

 

[Punk Hazard]

This was pretty meh.

 

[shanee]

wait isnt this suppose to rhyme or no?

not all poems rhyme. im fact, i like the ones that dont rhyme more than the ones that do.

 

[Kages]

Cool

 

[Awkward Linguist]

Madara Approves.

 

[gas83091]

not all poems rhyme. im fact, i like the ones that dont rhyme more than the ones that do.

naw, their boring if they don't rhyme :|

 

[NOemotions]

Oh so it continues if this is your doing.. it's pretty good actually. i'm gonna copy some lyrics here that was similar somehow

" Best off cruel intentions
Bounding what they fail to mention
No truth.
All pretention raise your hand to give attention

You'd give it
We'd take it
You'd build it
We'd break it
You silently erase it
You'd feel it
We'd fake it "

 

[gas83091]

Oh so it continues if this is your doing.. it's pretty good actually. i'm gonna copy some lyrics here that was similar somehow

" Best off cruel intentions
Bounding what they fail to mention
No truth.
All pretention raise your hand to give attention

You'd give it
We'd take it
You'd build it
We'd break it
You silently erase it
You'd feel it
We'd fake it "

now this one is awesome it rhymes!!!

 

[thesurvivor]

Oh so it continues if this is your doing.. it's pretty good actually. i'm gonna copy some lyrics here that was similar somehow

" Best off cruel intentions
Bounding what they fail to mention
No truth.
All pretention raise your hand to give attention

You'd give it
We'd take it
You'd build it
We'd break it
You silently erase it
You'd feel it
We'd fake it "

this is actually pretty good nice job