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cool! i like talented people like you!
Haha thanks, but I'm still getting grips with stuff and I took heavy inspiration on these siggys :p
But I'm even more undecided xd Hahaha that's why I left it to your criteria xd Take your time :)
Btw...I like the effects on your current avy ;)
Okay :p Well I guess that's a hint ;)
 

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First off. Nice to see new styles being developed! Like that.. Keep going >_O


CnC(for signature one)

Right so.

You can't really disagree, the background is very empty. Hell is there even a background? It looks like a black abyss with some C4D's around. A lil to random, and empty.

You've developed two focals and two flows. Belive me when i say i find it confusing to focus my eyes at one point on this signature. No, i have to look on the text, the render, the white lines and the overall rounded flow that surrounds the render.

The lines are unnecessary and just creates a focal in itself. Plus it doesn't go with any flow, it creates a new one. That is confusing.. On bigger canvas works it is acceptable ot move around the flow on different directions.. Not so much here. If the lines would've followed the flow, they'd surround the render in a circle kind of way. I'd say take them away, they are to powerful in the canvas.

I really respect the colours, since Itachi is always combined in black and red(well almost everytime..). Problem with them, is that you need to adjust the render's hue to make it fit even more. Looks a lil aggressive as the colours are almost attacking the render.

The lightsource is visible, but kinda weird. It'd be a perfect event to make a rounded lightsource here, to follow the rounded flow. Instead of travelling in a line like that.

As the background or whatever you want to call it, is pitch black. A vignette, surrounding the render would be very nice, as it'd blend in even deeper.

Text needs to be replaced. It's created an extra focal up in the corner.. No, put it on top of the render, on a place fitting. I'd say on his chest, a lil' to the right.

No depth. Fix that.


That's all i'll say about signature one. As this comment will give CnC on two signatures, i'll keep myself short on both..


CnC(for signature two)

Hmm.. Good colour use again i'd say, but here it's even better. Because of the lively background. Good job.

I'd again say that the lightsource however, has been affecting it all weird. I'd say a rounded one again, right above her head would've been great. Instead of that glassy line..

What you not did do as good as in signature one here however is the blending. Looks like there's three layers, bg, render and the light source.. Only exception is the bright abstract line that goes on her right(left in viewer perspective) shoulder.

Text again, needs to be replaced as it has again created an own focal. Not good.

Here i can't grasp any flow as the bg stands out almost as much as the render, creating a very discrete focal(not talkingabout the text, but the render). I can't follow any flow. So i have to scan the whole image desperately trying to find one, even there is no..

Conclusion..

Good job on colours!

No depth(in neither of the signatures) work on that!

The light sources are there, but they are not optimal for either the signatures.

Blending!

Text placement! Keep it as close as you can to the render! Not in a corner that makes it create a focal itself!
When i say place it over the render, i obviously don't mean to put it right on the renders face O_O

Also i'd like to add that the focal needs to stand out a bit more. But that kinda falls in with blending so..

Anyway, that's about it.
 

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First off. Nice to see new styles being developed! Like that.. Keep going >_O


CnC(for signature one)

Right so.

You can't really disagree, the background is very empty. Hell is there even a background? It looks like a black abyss with some C4D's around. A lil to random, and empty.

You've developed two focals and two flows. Belive me when i say i find it confusing to focus my eyes at one point on this signature. No, i have to look on the text, the render, the white lines and the overall rounded flow that surrounds the render.

The lines are unnecessary and just creates a focal in itself. Plus it doesn't go with any flow, it creates a new one. That is confusing.. On bigger canvas works it is acceptable ot move around the flow on different directions.. Not so much here. If the lines would've followed the flow, they'd surround the render in a circle kind of way. I'd say take them away, they are to powerful in the canvas.

I really respect the colours, since Itachi is always combined in black and red(well almost everytime..). Problem with them, is that you need to adjust the render's hue to make it fit even more. Looks a lil aggressive as the colours are almost attacking the render.

The lightsource is visible, but kinda weird. It'd be a perfect event to make a rounded lightsource here, to follow the rounded flow. Instead of travelling in a line like that.

As the background or whatever you want to call it, is pitch black. A vignette, surrounding the render would be very nice, as it'd blend in even deeper.

Text needs to be replaced. It's created an extra focal up in the corner.. No, put it on top of the render, on a place fitting. I'd say on his chest, a lil' to the right.

No depth. Fix that.


That's all i'll say about signature one. As this comment will give CnC on two signatures, i'll keep myself short on both..


CnC(for signature two)

Hmm.. Good colour use again i'd say, but here it's even better. Because of the lively background. Good job.

I'd again say that the lightsource however, has been affecting it all weird. I'd say a rounded one again, right above her head would've been great. Instead of that glassy line..

What you not did do as good as in signature one here however is the blending. Looks like there's three layers, bg, render and the light source.. Only exception is the bright abstract line that goes on her right(left in viewer perspective) shoulder.

Text again, needs to be replaced as it has again created an own focal. Not good.

Here i can't grasp any flow as the bg stands out almost as much as the render, creating a very discrete focal(not talkingabout the text, but the render). I can't follow any flow. So i have to scan the whole image desperately trying to find one, even there is no..

Conclusion..

Good job on colours!

No depth(in neither of the signatures) work on that!

The light sources are there, but they are not optimal for either the signatures.

Blending!

Text placement! Keep it as close as you can to the render! Not in a corner that makes it create a focal itself!
When i say place it over the render, i obviously don't mean to put it right on the renders face O_O

Also i'd like to add that the focal needs to stand out a bit more. But that kinda falls in with blending so..

Anyway, that's about it.
Thanks, :) I'll take all that. Into account, can't ignore your CnC :p
Nice sigs
thanks :)
 
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