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[Dreamhunter]

Like my sister (ikikouchiha9668) I wanted to try this out. I am a guy and I am doing this poem. Got a problem? Don't read ahead.

Becoming who you truly are inside. To believe in yourself and find out your dreams with a dedicated heart.
Equaling the world in rights for people. Everyone deserves a chance.
Loving everyone you see. Not the marry me love. But family love.
Independent in this world can get you far, just remember to be there for others.
Embrace the prblems in life and conquer them
Verify that love is more important than yourself.
Enjoy life and its roller coasters. Don't drive too fast.

Tell me what you think and give me other words to write about! Thanks~​

 

[Merita]

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Loved the poem ^^

 

[~Slendy~]

cool poem :y

 

[shanee]

you got big shoes to fill if you wanna catch up to you sis hahah but i liked the poem i used to wrote poetry about this girl hahah good times

 

[shanee]

i personally think that poems that dont necessarily rhyme are the best.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Nice poem.

 

[Ldude]

I only like rhyming poems. But good try, I suppose. You spelled "problems" wrong, unless you meant to say "orblems." The idea of life having roller coasters is very unoriginal though.
Keep practicing. ^_^

 

[Paintry4]

Overall its good., but ur poem is like shakesphere poem.words are misplaced.

 

[soyeongun]

To believe in yourself and find out your dreams with a dedicated heart.
To put up at least decent threads and refrain yourself from trolling.

Nice poem. Welcome to NB!

 

[Ldude]

Overall its good., but ur poem is like shakesphere poem.words are misplaced.

That's called syntax. It's not an error, it's a style.

 

[whytaco]

It kind of sounds like something naruto would say so I guess you past the test. It a good poem but could be better so try.

 

[SSW Imp]

Good poem, I liked it