Mugen Ryukyu
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chapter 1 the beginning
during the great war between the leaf and the nine tails beast there were a lot of casualtys and there were a lot of devastated families but one family which was the hatake family had lost a son themselfs but they moved on from this great depression because they still had one son to protect and that son became a legend. but with every negative there is a positive. and in the lightning country a young man was found batter and hurt and induced in a coma but a year later he awoke but with no memory but a family took him in and this is hes story
5 weeks after coma
phoenix: *breathing heavily* last time we meet u beat but this time its different
toko:*breathing heavily* yea right what is so different this time punk
phoenix:this fzzfzzzfzzzz chidori *dashes at toko*
toko: that move again how many times are u going to use that *does a spin to the left then catches pheonixs arm then flips him* why dont u try again punk
phoenix: ahhhhh u did it again ahhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhh
toko: calm down punk u will never hit me with that lame move not with these eyes *sharigan*
phoenix: *gets up does 4 backflips* ahhhhhhhhahhhhh shut up fzfzfzfzfzffffzfzfzfzffzfzfffzzzzzfzfzfzfzfzfzzzzfzfzfzfzfzfzzfzf chidori *dashes at toko*
toko:this move again *traces with my eyes* what the heck hes movements are harder to read and i cant see where he is gonna move next crap looks like im gonna have to bet on it *spins to the right* aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
phoenix: crap i only scraped him but next time for sure
toko: crap i cant let him do that move again got to end this quick *appears behind phoenix* *fist of rage does multiple punches to phoenixs back*
phoenix: ahhhahahhhhhhhhhahah crap not again *falls to the ground then passes out *
toko: u did good punk but not good enough
5 hours later
phoenix: ahh *holds head* i got to get home *walks home really tired and hurt*
mom: my baby what happened to u
phoenix: i was fighting toko again
mom: *gets a first aid kite* u got to say away from that boy what did i say
phoenix: come on mom im a shinobi i have to take
mom: u aint no shinobi because shinobi dont take beatens like that now go gets some rest
phoenix: fine *walks to bed then goes asleep*
2 hours later
phoenix: *wakes up by a loud noise* * walks to his door and sees his mom and dad fighting*
mom: u know that ur son got in a fight with toko again
dad: and did he teach toko a lesson
mom: no he lost
dad: dang that boy always picking fights but then ends up losing
mom: do u hear urself talk he got hurt and u dont care
dad: not really i would care if he won
mom: * starts to cry* and why dont u care u monster
dad: because he is not my real son our son left home 2 years ago and this boy is just a fluke
mom: screw u u monster *keeps crying*
dad: who cares now get some rest honey
phoenix: *starts to cry* he hates me *goes back to bed* and cries himself asleep
next morning
mom: phoenix honey come get breakfast
phoenix: *comes out of his room*
mom: honey what are those
phoenix: my bags im leaving
mom: *starts to cry* why why son why
phoenix: cause remember im not ur real son so im going on a journey because i dont remember my childhood years so im going to find myself
mom: if u have to do this then go ahead
phoenix: fine *walks out* then *stops like he saw a ghost*
toko: so kid i heard that u were leaving
phoenix: yup let me guess u want one last fight
toko: exactly bring it punk
phoenix: i dont have time so i will end this quick *drops bag* fzffzfzfzfzffzfzzfzfzfzfzfzzfz chidori *dashes at toko*
toko: chidori i was practicing on how to dodge it * slides at phoenixs feet then pulls out a kunai and slashes at his neck*
phoenix: does *a flip and moves head back* aahhhhhhhhhhhhahaha falls to ground
toko: hahahahhahahah i got ur eye die punk
phoenix: ahhhhhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhhhhaahahahhhaahhahhahahahahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
toko: *appears in front of phoenix* *fist of rage ultimate 180 punchesssssss*
phoenix:ahahaha * blocks every punch with one hand then catches last punch then crushes tokos hand* who is the punk now
toko: what is that chakra around u i have only heard the legends it the ssseal of the white fang chakra the white chakra flow ahaaaaaaaa
phoenix: shut up fzffzfffzffzzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzffzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfz
young lighttttttttttttt
toko: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh falls to the ground
phoenix: *wakes up* whoa what was that
toko: broooooo *says it almost dying
phoenix: what happened to u did i do this did i
toko: yes but dont worry about it here take this to make up for that eye *gives phoenix one of his sharigan eyes* use it well * dies*
phoenix:noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
phoenix: *picks up bags* time to find myself and find out what this curse is i will do the dead man walk*
to be continued
next one past foes
during the great war between the leaf and the nine tails beast there were a lot of casualtys and there were a lot of devastated families but one family which was the hatake family had lost a son themselfs but they moved on from this great depression because they still had one son to protect and that son became a legend. but with every negative there is a positive. and in the lightning country a young man was found batter and hurt and induced in a coma but a year later he awoke but with no memory but a family took him in and this is hes story
5 weeks after coma
phoenix: *breathing heavily* last time we meet u beat but this time its different
toko:*breathing heavily* yea right what is so different this time punk
phoenix:this fzzfzzzfzzzz chidori *dashes at toko*
toko: that move again how many times are u going to use that *does a spin to the left then catches pheonixs arm then flips him* why dont u try again punk
phoenix: ahhhhh u did it again ahhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhh
toko: calm down punk u will never hit me with that lame move not with these eyes *sharigan*
phoenix: *gets up does 4 backflips* ahhhhhhhhahhhhh shut up fzfzfzfzfzffffzfzfzfzffzfzfffzzzzzfzfzfzfzfzfzzzzfzfzfzfzfzfzzfzf chidori *dashes at toko*
toko:this move again *traces with my eyes* what the heck hes movements are harder to read and i cant see where he is gonna move next crap looks like im gonna have to bet on it *spins to the right* aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
phoenix: crap i only scraped him but next time for sure
toko: crap i cant let him do that move again got to end this quick *appears behind phoenix* *fist of rage does multiple punches to phoenixs back*
phoenix: ahhhahahhhhhhhhhahah crap not again *falls to the ground then passes out *
toko: u did good punk but not good enough
5 hours later
phoenix: ahh *holds head* i got to get home *walks home really tired and hurt*
mom: my baby what happened to u
phoenix: i was fighting toko again
mom: *gets a first aid kite* u got to say away from that boy what did i say
phoenix: come on mom im a shinobi i have to take
mom: u aint no shinobi because shinobi dont take beatens like that now go gets some rest
phoenix: fine *walks to bed then goes asleep*
2 hours later
phoenix: *wakes up by a loud noise* * walks to his door and sees his mom and dad fighting*
mom: u know that ur son got in a fight with toko again
dad: and did he teach toko a lesson
mom: no he lost
dad: dang that boy always picking fights but then ends up losing
mom: do u hear urself talk he got hurt and u dont care
dad: not really i would care if he won
mom: * starts to cry* and why dont u care u monster
dad: because he is not my real son our son left home 2 years ago and this boy is just a fluke
mom: screw u u monster *keeps crying*
dad: who cares now get some rest honey
phoenix: *starts to cry* he hates me *goes back to bed* and cries himself asleep
next morning
mom: phoenix honey come get breakfast
phoenix: *comes out of his room*
mom: honey what are those
phoenix: my bags im leaving
mom: *starts to cry* why why son why
phoenix: cause remember im not ur real son so im going on a journey because i dont remember my childhood years so im going to find myself
mom: if u have to do this then go ahead
phoenix: fine *walks out* then *stops like he saw a ghost*
toko: so kid i heard that u were leaving
phoenix: yup let me guess u want one last fight
toko: exactly bring it punk
phoenix: i dont have time so i will end this quick *drops bag* fzffzfzfzfzffzfzzfzfzfzfzfzzfz chidori *dashes at toko*
toko: chidori i was practicing on how to dodge it * slides at phoenixs feet then pulls out a kunai and slashes at his neck*
phoenix: does *a flip and moves head back* aahhhhhhhhhhhhahaha falls to ground
toko: hahahahhahahah i got ur eye die punk
phoenix: ahhhhhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhhhhaahahahhhaahhahhahahahahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
toko: *appears in front of phoenix* *fist of rage ultimate 180 punchesssssss*
phoenix:ahahaha * blocks every punch with one hand then catches last punch then crushes tokos hand* who is the punk now
toko: what is that chakra around u i have only heard the legends it the ssseal of the white fang chakra the white chakra flow ahaaaaaaaa
phoenix: shut up fzffzfffzffzzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzffzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfzfzfzfzffzfzfzfz
young lighttttttttttttt
toko: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh falls to the ground
phoenix: *wakes up* whoa what was that
toko: broooooo *says it almost dying
phoenix: what happened to u did i do this did i
toko: yes but dont worry about it here take this to make up for that eye *gives phoenix one of his sharigan eyes* use it well * dies*
phoenix:noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
phoenix: *picks up bags* time to find myself and find out what this curse is i will do the dead man walk*
to be continued
next one past foes
