Destined Uchiha and the Hell Realm: Chapter 6

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Chapter 6
Before Itachi and Nagato infilitrate Typhon, they make their way to visit a being that could greatly increase being successful in their mission.

Appearing in the form of a flock of crows, Itachi flies miles above the ground like a black comet. Soaring at incredible speeds beside him is Nagato.

Through intense training with Itachi, the powerful Uzumaki has enhanced his ability to control gravity to levels that he was never able to reach in his living days.

As the two travel south through the sky, they spot something large and white that's quickly approaching them.


Nagato: (Is that Deidara's C2?)

A mile ahead, traveling north to Typhon is Kagami. He rides on a piece of "art", a clay dragon that Deidara created for him as a favor. Kagami needed a fast way to get to Typhon, hence he asked Deidara to make him a ride.

The two parties steadily closes the gap between each other as Itachi and Nagato flies south and Kagami's destination is in the north.

Neither Itachi or Nagato knows the identities of Raizen's subordinates, so they think nothing of the incoming man.

By now, they close enough that Nagato's hair sways from the wind the C2 giant wings are creating. Itachi and Nagato didn't plan to engage in conversation with this man whom they don't know, but Kagami stops in front of them. Itachi transitions to his true form, but his lower half is still made up of crows to keep him afloat. Nagato stops and hovers and well.


Kagami: (Red hair...and the rinnegan...) You must be Nagato Uzumaki.

Nagato: Indeed I am...

Kagami stares at Itachi.


Kagami: (Sharingan...an Uchiha. These two must be the duo that resides on Tokusen. The Uchiha and Uzumaki pair
that seemingly no one dares to disturb.) And you must be Itachi Uchiha.

Itachi: Correct...

Kagami: It's truly an honor to meet you both. Heck, my son respects you two even though you betrayed him back then. That says a lot.

Itachi and Nagato glance at each other with meaningful expressions.


Nagato: Your son?...Whom might that be?

Kagami: Obito Uchiha. You may know him as "Tobi".

Itachi and Nagato smirks, glad to hear that Obito no longer lives.

Kagami: Anyway, it's a pity you two choose not to be bothered. Even with myself, Madara, and Obito at Raizen's side, shinobi like you would make an extraordinary addition to our ranks.

Itachi: (The true Madara Uchiha is one of Raizen's men?...This definitely complicates things. Tobi isn't much of a threat, but he isn't weakling either.) So, you are one of Raizen's minions?

Both Itachi and Nagato's eyes narrow with a kind of anger. Kagami suspects something...

Kagami: Wait a second! Why are you two heading south?! Nothing significant is there except-

In a blink of an eye, Itachi weaves the handsigns to perform his Great Fireball Jutsu.
 
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Nice lil cliff hanger there at the end hmmmm I wonder who or what is in the south. Can't wait to find out.
Thanks, dude! Always expect cliffhangers from me.:D
Oh man so great don't quit writing :D, I really like the vocabulary you use and how you sync in with the characters~
DUDE!!! When are you going to write the next chapter, like you get 200 views even though they may not post a lot of people read this~~@@
I wouldn't say I quit, I just took a break. To me it seems like I'm not as talented in writing as I used to be, so I'm not as driven nowadays. Thanks for the great feedback, man. Yeah, most people just read it, then leave the thread. Though, compliments like the ones you guys give me is what gives me confidence. Man, oh man. You don't know how much I appreciate it.xd
 

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Thanks, dude! Always expect cliffhangers from me.:D




I wouldn't say I quit, I just took a break. To me it seems like I'm not as talented in writing as I used to be, so I'm not as driven nowadays. Thanks for the great feedback, man. Yeah, most people just read it, then leave the thread. Though, compliments like the ones you guys give me is what gives me confidence. Man, oh man. You don't know how much I appreciate it.xd
If you keep thinking like that eventually your talent will fade, anyways your writing talent is amazing and don't bring yourself down, your writing skills are getting better and better by the post xd

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