Itachi Chronicles-Part 1

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Chapter 2 :
Chapter 3 :
Chapter 4 :
Chapter 5 :
Chapter 6 :

1st of all:i am awfully sorry if this fanfic sucks...bigtime
I KNOW, i repeat i KNOW this is not gonna happen, yet i'd like this alternative
If this does not bother any1 else i'll come with other chapters xD

His story was coming to an end​
Yet this is where his story begins​

Prologue…

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Woah!!!
*Itachi suddenly awakes screaming out loud*
Itachi:*thinks*:where the hell am i ?
Voice:Oh, you’re finally awake, Itachi-kun…
Itachi:*thinks*:who the hell…
Itachi:Mangekyou Sharing…ehhh ?
The person in the shadow turns around to Itachi revealing himself
Kabuto:You don’t have Sharingan anymore.
Itachi:Kabuto ? What the hell is going on ?
Kabuto:…You were going blind…I replaced your Sharingan with some regular eyes
Itachi:…What happened ?
Kabuto:’sigh’, sasuke defeated you…errr…actually you passed out because of your illness…he didn’t actually knocked you out
Itachi:How did I get here ?
Kabuto:well,…
*door opens , and an Akatsuki person makes his appearance
Itachi : Zetsu ?
Zetsu:Oh, Itachi, glad to see you’re alright …
Itachi:What are you doing here
Kabuto:He was watching your fight with Sasuke-kun…He grabbed your body and brought you to me immediately
Itachi:Why did he bring me here ?
Kabuto:Because of my orders(Kabuto smiles)
Itachi:Orders…?
Zetsu(2nd voice):It’s a long story…and it’s the last thig to concern you
Itachi:What happened to Akatsuki ?
Zetsu:Well the only members left are me, Tobi, Kisame , the Leader and his girl…also, your brother and a little group of pricks joined us
Itachi:Sasuke ?!?
Zetsu (2nd voice,with a low voice):yeah..And now our leader is after the only biju left, the kyuubi…But I disguised and went to konoha…but there was nothing left,but the 5 great hokage faces, and the battlefield
Itachi:…?!?
Zetsu:The Kyubi is fighting our leader …
Itachi*thinks*:Naruto ,eh ?
Zetsu(2nd voice):…Madara got Sasuke
Itachi:What ?!?
Zetsu:…
Itachi(turns to kabuto):What are you up to ?
Kabuto:I wanna destroy the Akatsuki…and you will help me.You want to kill Madara don’t you ?
Itachi:Kabuto…we’re going… *cough* *cough*
Kabuto:Easy…the medicine I gave you is temporary
Itachi:We gotta hurry .
Kabuto: Oh?...Up to see your little brother ?
Itachi:No…first things first.We’re going…to Konoha


Things will get clear in the next chapter...how did kabuto heal itachi, and why does zetsu work for kabuto
 
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o.o Wow, nice plot. But, do be careful on sewing up all the loose ends later on or it might just lead to nowhere.

Anyways, great job here. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. =]
 

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o.o Wow, nice plot. But, do be careful on sewing up all the loose ends later on or it might just lead to nowhere.

Anyways, great job here. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. =]
yeah my greatest fear is to screw up writing something stupid xD but i have some ideas and i'm not gonna let them go xD
 
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