Destined Uchiha and the Hell Realm: Chapter 5

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Chapter 5
On the highest floor of Typhon, on a balcony overlooking the massive number of recruits that have gathered together for a calling of great significance stands Raizen. Obito stands to his right, as Madara stands to his left. The scene is much like a general addressing his army, except that everyone down below aren't in any type of formation. When the crowd's applause dies down, Raizen begins his speech.

Raizen: My brothers of darkness, a path has been revealed to me! A path that leads to the destruction of the my father, the man who banished us all to this damned realm!

The crowd speaks among each other, in disbelief of Raizen's statement.

Kisame: This guy must think that we are all fools.

Kakuzu: Yeah. If I had any ryo, I'd bet that Raizen is screwing with us.

Sakon: Hey Raizen, you're so fulll of shit!

Ukon: Sakon, you idiot! You and your big mouth! Lord Raizen, he didn't mean that-

Without a single movement, Raizen turns Sakon/Ukon's soul into nothing. This silences the group.


Raizen: Is there anyone else who would like to speak their mind?!

No one responds.

Raizen: Thought so. As I was saying, I now have knowledge of a way to defeat my father! Though, it won't be possible without the help of an army of ruthless, formiddable shinobi, samurai, and warriors like yourselves! Who is my father to decide the fate of our afterlife?! The fool think himself better than us! We shall teach him that even a god-like being like himself can't judge others without consequences!

Obito: (What a hypocrite. He definitely knows how to raise spirits though.)

Raizen: Who's with me!?

The freshly assembled army roars with thundering applause.

Raizen: When the northern volcano erupts (which is in about two days) , we invade the Heaven Realm!
 
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Sakon: Hey Raizen, you're so fool of shit!
Lol best line! Oh yea btw full*

This is gettin good my friend but can ya make it longer?
Thanks. Lol I really need to start double-checking my work.
Okay, I'll make em a little longer. Dude, can you understand the way I make some characters speak? Like "He definitely knows how to raise spirits" means "he knows how to pump people up".
 
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