Guardian of the Rain
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Setting: Hell Realm
Details: This story follows the events of Hokages and the Shinigami Realm, so you'd might want to check that out before reading this if you haven't already.
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Obito shouts in anger, completely infuriated by his second loss to his old sensei, Minato Namikaze. Blood gushes out from his empty eye sockets and left forearm, white ooze flows from his right arm's wrist.
Obito: AAHHH!!
Souls gather around Obito, anxious to see who's causing all the uproar. A man steps out of the crowd to approach the raging Obito. The mysterious soul stands in front of Obito, whom is pathetically kneeling as he wails from the pain of his defeat. The man glares at the other souls, dismissing them. Obviously they fear this person, being that they scrambled off like insects.
Mysterious man: Still a crybaby, huh? You're disgracing your clan and your father.
Being blind and all, Obito is startled by the nearby voice.
Obito: Who the hell are you!?!? What makes you think that you know my father?! You dead fool.
Mysterious man: Because....I am your father.
Obito: !!!! Well, that's of no importance. The last time we've seen each other, I was a child. You're nothing but a distant memory. See yourself out of my presence, now!
Mysterious man: Telling me what to do? Times really have changed...Regardless, I'm attempting to help you, kid. I've been watching you from this loathsome realm ever since I died, so there's no secret of yours that I don't have knowledge of. You can survive without eating, drinking, and what not thanks to that strange white substance, correct?
Obito: .........
Mysterious man: Thought so. Which means that you will rot here for the rest of your natural life unless you accept my assistance, of course.
Obito: ....So be it, old man. What must I do?
Mysterious man: First off....kill yourself.
Obito: ....Shit, seems like that's my best option.
Mysterious man: Trust me, it is. I would've killed your sorry ass myself, but being that you're alive and I'm a soul, I can't touch you. You no longer possess that sharingan of yours to enter that "intangible" state, which allowed that Hokage to be able to make contact with you. When you die, both of your natural eyes will belong to you once again.
Obito: Hmph, looks like my life ends here...very unexpected...
Obito's father roars with laughter.
Obito: What's so funny?
Mysterious man: Your cluelessness. That pitiful existence in the World of the Living doesn't deserve to be called "life". This so called "afterlife" is truly the beginning. Now, rise, my son.
Obito: Just to make things clear, you are not above me. Never again will I be used, especially by an old man.
Mysterious man: Right. Now take three steps to the left.
Obito listens to his father for now and takes three steps to his left. A boulder from his recently destroyed Chibaku Tensei crushes him flat.
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Chapter 1
Obito shouts in anger, completely infuriated by his second loss to his old sensei, Minato Namikaze. Blood gushes out from his empty eye sockets and left forearm, white ooze flows from his right arm's wrist.
Obito: AAHHH!!
Souls gather around Obito, anxious to see who's causing all the uproar. A man steps out of the crowd to approach the raging Obito. The mysterious soul stands in front of Obito, whom is pathetically kneeling as he wails from the pain of his defeat. The man glares at the other souls, dismissing them. Obviously they fear this person, being that they scrambled off like insects.
Mysterious man: Still a crybaby, huh? You're disgracing your clan and your father.
Being blind and all, Obito is startled by the nearby voice.
Obito: Who the hell are you!?!? What makes you think that you know my father?! You dead fool.
Mysterious man: Because....I am your father.
Obito: !!!! Well, that's of no importance. The last time we've seen each other, I was a child. You're nothing but a distant memory. See yourself out of my presence, now!
Mysterious man: Telling me what to do? Times really have changed...Regardless, I'm attempting to help you, kid. I've been watching you from this loathsome realm ever since I died, so there's no secret of yours that I don't have knowledge of. You can survive without eating, drinking, and what not thanks to that strange white substance, correct?
Obito: .........
Mysterious man: Thought so. Which means that you will rot here for the rest of your natural life unless you accept my assistance, of course.
Obito: ....So be it, old man. What must I do?
Mysterious man: First off....kill yourself.
Obito: ....Shit, seems like that's my best option.
Mysterious man: Trust me, it is. I would've killed your sorry ass myself, but being that you're alive and I'm a soul, I can't touch you. You no longer possess that sharingan of yours to enter that "intangible" state, which allowed that Hokage to be able to make contact with you. When you die, both of your natural eyes will belong to you once again.
Obito: Hmph, looks like my life ends here...very unexpected...
Obito's father roars with laughter.
Obito: What's so funny?
Mysterious man: Your cluelessness. That pitiful existence in the World of the Living doesn't deserve to be called "life". This so called "afterlife" is truly the beginning. Now, rise, my son.
Obito: Just to make things clear, you are not above me. Never again will I be used, especially by an old man.
Mysterious man: Right. Now take three steps to the left.
Obito listens to his father for now and takes three steps to his left. A boulder from his recently destroyed Chibaku Tensei crushes him flat.
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anyway I loved the ending keep it up man
