Bobthebuilderswenus88
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This is one of my old creepy pasta's that failed and ended up in crappy pasta, but please read it I worked kinda hard on it. Ignore the Wall of Text just try to Enjoy it
On July 16, 1998 a SWAT team raided a abandoned warehouse by the outskirts of town, for the past 2 years there had been a series of unsolved murder cases all showing similarities and having the same leads. All evidence lead the police to the house, the team of officers walked into a partially lighted room. Hanging on the walls where pictures of people some with red Xs painted crossing out the face, on the floor were newspapers and years books on the floor. There was also some red liquid on the floor the officers couldn’t tell if it was blood or red paint splattered on the wall and floor and in patterns. There was also writing and doodles on the posters and year books, words written like “REVENGE” or “UGLY”. The police burst through the door of a room, before them was a tall man, he was wearing a black suit and tie, he was also wearing a paper bag on his head with two large wholes cut out as eyes and a smile drawn with black marker.
He was standing in side of a bed and appeared to be holding a scalpel in his hand and had a tray beside him with surgical tools lying on it. A man was sitting there with his face being covered; the police yelled “You’re under arrest for the murder of over 20 people!”
The man with the paper bag laughed diabolically, he said in a loud voice to the police “Don’t you see I’ve only begun with my art, I must convert everyone in my own image so that everyone can be beautiful just like ME!” He laughed only the way a madman could, he bolted out a back door the police opened fire on the man, and by the time they reached the door he was gone.
The whole place was searched for evidence and clues, there was at least 12 bodies in the warehouse, the man lying on the table had bandages on him, an officer took the bandages off him. The officers describe his face as the most disturbing thing they had ever seen, it was so grizzly the officer sought out psychological help for themselves. The man’s head was like an empty shell there was nothing inside of him no skull no brains or organs just a hollow head. But worst of all they said his mouth was carved into a huge smile that reached all the way to his forehead and his eyes where cut out into huge holes. His smile had no teeth it was just an empty smile with a just blackness in it, there also were no eyes just two black holes like Jack-o-lanterns. All the other bodies were found the same way.
Patrick was getting ready for school, he groaned repeatedly as his mother put his uniform on. Uniforms where required as he went to a very prestigious private school, Patrick was nervous as he usually had a hard time at school. In Middle school he was repeatedly bullied by kids, because you see Patrick was not a pleasant sight. In fact many would consider him ugly, he wasn’t disfigured or anything but he really wasn’t something you’d want look at. He was always called names like ugly or loser and he often got beat up.
Middle school was miserable for him, his parents decided that private school was better for him as the common belief goes that people there are less rude and have more class. His mother called him down “Honey are you all set for school” Patrick yelled back “coming mom”.
Since there was no bus his mother took him to school, when he arrived he stared at a huge building, it looked like a mansion not a school.
He saw kids in suites standing around the building commiserating with each other. Patrick said “Mom do I really have to do this?” his mother replied “Now now sweetie I want you to make the best out of the school where not wasting all this money for you to come here, you’ll like it in due time.” His mother kissed him goodbye, Patrick began to walk toward the building he heard his mother yell “Try to make some friends dear”. Patrick covered his face in shame and a group of jocks and cheerleaders giggled at him.
The day went pretty smoothly a few people looked at him funny but nothing more than just a few mean glares. The people weren’t that bad. During lunch time though a Jock came up to Patrick he said “hey buddy whats your name?” he asked. Patrick said in a low voice “My name is Pat…Patrick, but you can call me Pat. The Jock said “The names Joey those guys over there are Derek, Jay, Spencer, and Clark, so listen Pat me and these guys are headed to the lake tonight to see we can catch some bait if you know what I mean? Eh” they all began to laugh like hyenas, Patrick began to laugh as well to try to get in on the joke. “You wanna tag along?” he asked. Patrick said “sure” in a reluctant voice. “Sounds cool, we’ll pick you up at 7:00” he said. Patrick gave them his address and went home feeling pretty good. He told his mother that he was going somewhere that night with some friends; she said “I told you it wouldn’t be that bad and I told you would make friends.” Joey and his friends rolled up in the drive way. Patrick came out and got in the car. Their where 3 girls in the car with the guys, Joey said “Welcome aboard, these 3 cuties right here are Samantha, Carly, and Allie. Patrick began to feel shy and out of place. Derek began kissing Samantha and Jay started touching Carly it started to get really awkward for Patrick and he knew what was going on. Patrick started to realize Allie was touching his leg he began to feel really uncomfortable. Allie told him “Your cute.” When they arrived at the lake they started a camp fire, they began roasting some marshmallows. Joey out of nowhere says hey “do you guys here that”? The others said yeah I think I hear that too. Joey said “Patrick man can you go check that out.” Patrick said “Now way in hell”. Allie grabbed Patrick’s arm and said “please I’m so scared; I’ll do anything for a brave man who would go out and see what that is.” Patrick gulped and reluctantly said “alright”. He trotted through the dark forest and headed deeper in to the trees, he was out there for about 5 minutes. When he saw it was nothing but maybe some leaves rustling he decided to return to them. Before he knew it he heard a car starting and the laughter of people. He heard Joey and his friends speeding away. He ran for the road and saw the car speeding away. He ran in the middle of the road screaming “WAIT, WHAT THE HEL ARE YOU GUYS DOING? WAIT PLEASE” he cried frantically. He heard one of the guys in the cars say “what a loser!” Before he could see it a car was a few inches from hitting him. The car hits him face first crushing his skull with the bumper and destroying his face. The car speeds away, Patrick was on the floor laying in a puddle of blood, he hears Joey and his friends reverse the car and also hears someone say “****! Dude we got to call the ambulance” said Derek, Joey said “Are you out of your goddamn mind where going to jail if anyone finds out about this.” “He heard Samantha say “We should at least do something for him, this is all your fault Joey , it was your idea.” Joey said “Listen up you bitch we are all in this”. Derek said “Hey man don’t talk to my girl that way”. They were all arguing, the last thing Patrick heard was them speeding away. When Patrick awoke he was at the hospital, he heard the noise of a heart rate machine. He didn’t remember what happened the previous night. He couldn’t even see, all he could see was black. He heard his mothers and fathers voice “Dear, you had an accident” she said. Your alright, Mom and Dad are here and so is one of your friends. He heard Joey’s voice say “Hey listen man, I didn’t know that would happen to you I swear it was only a joke we were going to come back for you. Patrick looked in the direction he heard Joeys voice. Patrick said “YOU, YOU BASTARD YOU DID THIS TO ME!” in a menacing way. “Now now, Patrick you heard your friend it was a joke”. They all left the room; the nurse came in and said where ready to take the bandages off. She slowly un wrapped the bandages, when they were all unwrapped she gave him a mirror and warned him “Your whole skull and face have been caved in so unfortunately all you have left is your eyes but we replaced the rest of your skull with a titanium plate. Patrick gazed at himself in the mirror, he saw his eyes were wide apart and there was a huge hole in his face. He starred at himself for a minute and began to laugh hysterically “Well look at that, my face is a masterpiece, I love it how did you do this? She replied “ I don’t know, you must ask the surgeons that.” He said again in a warped voice “I want to make everyone in the world like this, this is true beauty! He then gave the nurse a twisted smile, “I’ll start with you” he said to the nurse. He jumped up and kicked the nurse to the floor. Patrick grabbed a Scalpel from a trey next to him and pointed it at the nurse. He laughed diabolically, the nurse screamed and a group of doctors walked in and attempted to restrain Patrick, a doctor tried to sedate him but Patrick stuck the scalpel right in his neck. He got lose and jumped out the window, he jumped 1 floor into the side walk and took off. Later that day a report on the news said “Extremely mentally unstable teenager of the age of 17 is on the loose, he is armed with a surgical scalpel and is believed to be carrying a brown paper bag and a black marker, and his face is also disfigured”. About a week later Joey is getting back from school to his house, he opens the door and calls out “Mom, Dad, I’ m home.” He gets no reply; he walks into the living room to a ghastly sight. He sees both his parents sitting on a sofa both with kitchen knives stuck in their stomachs, bloods is everywhere. Joey screams, but before he knows he feels a small blade glide across his throat. He begins to gag and cough out blood. He falls to the grown with his throat slit. He focuses on what appears to be a figure standing above him, he screams in pain. He sees a man wearing black pants, a suite, and a paper bag with two holes as eyes and a smile drawn on with a black marker. Joey asks “Who the **** are you” in a rage. The man says, “I just dropped by to say thank you for what you did to me, you are truly an artist.” The man reveals a sharp scalpel to Joey. “Now it is my turn to return the favor, don’t worry I’ll make you beautiful.” He drives the Scalpel through Joey’s face and Joey lets out one last scream.
Patrick Makinhue is still at large and is wanted for multiple counts of murder and torture. Joseph Yales was found dead in his home with a massive hole in his face, the head had nothing inside of it and his face had a paper bag on it which had written on it “Courtesy of the Sculptor”, his parents were also found dead at the scene with knifes plunged in their stomachs. Spencer, Allison, Carly, and Clark all were found the same way with hollow heads. This so called “Sculptor” attempted to kill Derek, Samantha, and Clark. Clark states a man wearing a paper bag broke into his home was lunged at him with a knife, and said “I want to make you beautiful”. Clark escaped with multiple stab wounds. Derek and Samantha also escaped and states similar instances. This is the only evidence there is relating Patrick Makinhue to this “Sculptor”. There have also been a series of murders of people who have attended the school Patrick Makinhue attended and reports of attacks from a man who said he wanted to “Make them beautiful”. It was only recently that the man was found in some abandoned house in the outskirts of town but he got away, and no one knows where he is now.
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