Kishimoto is a lazy writer

[Unbiased]

Do you think Kishimoto is a lazy writer? Let me explain myself before you all say no. When I say lazy writer, I speak about a writer who has written things in his story, and then flat out contradicts himself later on. Examples would be chapter 599 for instance. There is definitive proof that obito is the same age as kakashi, yet they are competing in the chuunin exams together when kakashi becomes a chuunin. (Kakashi became jonin at 13, obito died at 13). Same thing with the Hiruzen being the strongest hokage. He has made out Hiruzen to be the absolute best within the first 150 chapters, then 400 chapters later decides to switch it over. That is what I mean by lazy writing. Its understandable to have a few mistakes throughout your story, but consistent mistakes makes me feel as if he is not caring about consistency.

(I don't hate naruto or kishimoto, I'm simply giving my opinion on the situation I have presented.)

This isn't stopping me from reading the series, as i've been reading it since 2004 but i'm just concerned about consistency issues throughout the manga.

 

[-Logic-]

>He's been doing it for 15 years.

Any argument you provide is invalid.

 

[Narutohokage7]

His manga dude.
Also the chapter might be explained.

 

[Lucian]

U are reading it for FREE! U still compla.....

 

[AMIIIT]

How's your manga?

 

[tobitaka]

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[Gooner4life]

No one's perfect, in all of those things he hasn't flat out contradicted himself, although he has made it seem so. They aren't big enough things to make a big deal, they aren't directly affecting the plot so it doesn't matter too much, there are continuity issues in every story, anyone who ever thought Kishi or anyone for that matter is a perfect writer who is above mistakes is a fool, but I don't know about lazy, it has just been a long time.

 

[OnPoint]

Stop taking the databook ages/timeline as absolute.

 

[Arian]

Kishimoto is a ****ing GOD! -.- whoever has ANYTHING to complain about him has NO idea of his genious work,..

 

[Pr0bl3m]

How's your manga?

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[Unbiased]

How's your manga?

I don't see what this has to do with anything. Just because I am reading something for free does not mean I can't display an opinion other then it was good.

 

[immortal sage]

>He's been doing it for 15 years.

Any argument you provide is invalid.

that makes no since it doesnt matter how long he has been doing it for :sy:

His manga dude.
Also the chapter might be explained.

no one said anything about the manga not being his and the guy never insulted the manga or anything he just pointed out that kishi is slopy when it comes to the small details and i agree

 

[Roy]

>He's been doing it for 15 years.

Any argument you provide is invalid.

You're implying that he can make those mistakes because he's been writing for so long? I suppose you don't read One Piece as Oda has doing it even longer and stays true to the characters and things that happened within the first 100 chapters, one example is a character that was introduced in the beginning of One Piece but wasn't shown until 500 chapters later and 100 chapters after that the story that was mentioned in the beginnig was explained.

So, doing it for so long isn't an excuse to get sloppy with what was stated in the beginning, but I suppose more mangakas get sloppy as the story progresses, not only Kishi.

 

[orochimaru]

who cares? its going well so far...and maybe we missed a thing or two ... so it might be no contradictions whatsoever ^_^

 

[King Of Sharingan]

No matter what he does he still makes the story entertaining and fun to watch so therefore He's not lazy

 

[Unbiased]

I'm just saying, he gets sloppy sometimes. I still love naruto, its just the sloppy writing that happens can get old.

 

[Negative Knight]

>He's been doing it for 15 years.

Any argument you provide is invalid.

This

His manga dude.
Also the chapter might be explained.

and this

I see Itachi and Kisame have already put the beatdown on you

 

[immortal sage]

How's your manga?

stfu

U are reading it for FREE! U still compla.....

exacly he is reading the manga wich means he is going to have an opinion on it

Stop taking the databook ages/timeline as absolute.

he isnt that what this thread is about he is saying that they are flawed:sy:

 

[Unbiased]

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I see Itachi and Kisame have already put the beatdown on you

Not really, its still a sloppy story. That can't be denied.

 

[bajram]

U are reading it for FREE! U still compla.....

I hate ppl saying this sh1t about ur watching free, im watching all kinds of films , im playing all kinds of games, im enjoying all kinds of songs for free, what makes a cartoon manga special from all others i said before..almost every fukin thing u can watch fr free, its internet man and naruto shippuden and manga is just a part of it that u can enjoy without buying,there are better things that i watch for free so stop ur stupid argument..


back to topic....well no one is perfect so kishi can make mistakes on his manga too....