The Orange Hokage !: Naruto becomes Hokage

[IzunaUchiha2]

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Naruto: Hey Hinata ! Wake up !

Hinata :Yawn! Im so tired . You dont need to shout

Naruto: Im becoming Hokage . Its so great right ?
-Hinata nods

Naruto goes out of the room .He enters another one . Its his Mansion afterall

There sleeping is Minato . Kushina is awake

-Kushina :Hi son . Today your going to become Hokage . Im so proud . Dattebane!

Minato: Hey son .

Naruto exits the room .

Naruto:Wake up !

Inside there is a little boy sleeping . He is wearing a blue top and blue pants and a blue sandal/shoe ( whatever they wear in narutoverse xd)

Naruto: Kei ! Wake up

The boys name is Kei Uzumaki Namikaze Hyuga . His fave colour is blue . His best friends are Neji's son and Sai's son . Kei is 13 years of age . He is already chuunin a prodigy ( Naruto's son and Minato's grandson ). Neji's son is also a prodigy while sai son is not that strong but he is an ok ninja . He is also sasuke's son friend ( very close) . Them 4 are best of friends
Kei's skill

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Rasengan .
Chidori .
64 palms
Eiight trigams
A skilled tanto user ( Already can use a sword)

Haruki Hyuga Skills

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Eight trigams .
64 palms .
Good taijutsu
Gentle fist

There is no branch family in hyuga anymore . Only main . Neji is leading the main and his branch seal is gone
Shin yamanka ( sai and ino's son )
Shin has yellow light hair like Ino . He is pale like Sai .Haruki has long hair like neji and had byakugan

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Mind transfer jutsu
Good taijutsu

Uchiha Ken . He has sharingan . ( 3 tomeo) . Also a prodigy ( not stronger than Kei

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Chidori
Fire ball jutsu
genjutsu sharingan

5 hours later

-Naruto: Thank you . Guys i am your new Hokage . I will protect my Leaf village with My heart . My right hand men are Shikamru and My dad Minato .My special Jonin is Hinata . Evreyone from Konaha 11 is promoted to Jonin.

My heart is with the village . Look after yourselves and from Villains like madara .
Thank you

End of chapter
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Notes about story

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Thanks for reading . I added more charecters ,i was supposed to do so in Intro im so stupid . Well anways thanks for readind ur awesome and May Allah save you all

 

[Tobinaulak]

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Hi guys this is my new fanfic . For more info go to the link i put

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Naruto: Hey Hinata ! Wake up !

Hinata :Yawn! Im so tired . You dont need to shout

Naruto: Im becoming Hokage . Its so great right ?
-Hinata nods

Naruto goes out of the room .He enters another one . Its his Mansion afterall

There sleeping is Minato . Kushina is awake

-Kushina :Hi son . Today your going to become Hokage . Im so proud . Dattebane!

Minato: Hey son .

Naruto exits the room .

Naruto:Wake up !

Inside there is a little boy sleeping . He is wearing a blue top and blue pants and a blue sandal/shoe ( whatever they wear in narutoverse xd)

Naruto: Kei ! Wake up

The boys name is Kei Uzumaki Namikaze Hyuga . His fave colour is blue . His best friends are Neji's son and Sai's son . Kei is 13 years of age . He is already chuunin a prodigy ( Naruto's son and Minato's grandson ). Neji's son is also a prodigy while sai son is not that strong but he is an ok ninja . He is also sasuke's son friend ( very close) . Them 4 are best of friends
Kei's skill

Spoiler

Rasengan .
Chidori .
64 palms
Eiight trigams
A skilled tanto user ( Already can use a sword)

Haruki Hyuga Skills

Spoiler

Eight trigams .
64 palms .
Good taijutsu
Gentle fist

There is no branch family in hyuga anymore . Only main . Neji is leading the main and his branch seal is gone
Shin yamanka ( sai and ino's son )
Shin has yellow light hair like Ino . He is pale like Sai .Haruki has long hair like neji and had byakugan

Spoiler

Mind transfer jutsu
Good taijutsu

Uchiha Ken . He has sharingan . ( 3 tomeo) . Also a prodigy ( not stronger than Kei

Spoiler

Chidori
Fire ball jutsu
genjutsu sharingan

5 hours later

-Naruto: Thank you . Guys i am your new Hokage . I will protect my Leaf village with My heart . My right hand men are Shikamru and My dad Minato .My special Jonin is Hinata . Evreyone from Konaha 11 is promoted to Jonin.

My heart is with the village . Look after yourselves and from Villains like madara .
Thank you

End of chapter
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Notes about story

Spoiler

Thanks for reading . I added more charecters ,i was supposed to do so in Intro im so stupid . Well anways thanks for readind ur awesome and May Allah save you all

didnt like the konoha11 part only...other than that its gr8
:noc::ice:

 

[sVPunisher]

Dumbest thing I've ever read.

 

[IzunaUchiha2]

didnt like the konoha11 part only...other than that its gr8
:noc::ice:

gud 2 know

Dumbest thing I've ever read.

Why did u read it huh?

 

[venuboppudi]

it's average; spoiled last sentences, as fourth hokage is alive and old naruto will be his right hand man,(like 3rd and 4th); hinata- special jounin is good , hinata wouldn't talk like that to naruto..Never.why did kei have chidori, who are their teachers-- that would be awesome

 

[IzunaUchiha2]

it's average; spoiled last sentences, as fourth hokage is alive and old naruto will be his right hand man,(like 3rd and 4th); hinata- special jounin is good , hinata wouldn't talk like that to naruto..Never.why did kei have chidori, who are their teachers-- that would be awesome

bro u will find out evreything in the upcoming chapters

Thanks rujel for the Thank you

 

[Uxellius]

Nice one +rep

 

[Tsuki]

You've done some good efforts in this chapter and I would like to see more from you.
Only one advice I will give you for now is make the conversation a bit longer
Keep up the good work :ice:

 

[Sophie Ezra]

good try plus rep for effort

 

[EL MAGNIFICO]

Hey very good izuna man !!
i liked it ... +rep

 

[IzunaUchiha2]

Thanks el magnificent

 

[EL MAGNIFICO]

Thanks el magnificent

its magnifico buddy xd

 

[IzunaUchiha2]

its magnifico buddy xd

Sorry

 

[Yuka]

it was a very nice chapter keep up the good work!

 

[Gutsy]

1. Very short
2. It didn't have enough info
3. needs action
4. needs to look more interesting
5. needs a longer and more interesting story
6. spelling and sentence building

- Alright those is what i picked out and you need to work on it to become a great FF writer. also to be honest it sounded good in the beginning but i didn't like it because of the reasons above -

 

[Scooby Doo]

The new characters sound interesting, but why does the story start 13 yrs later? IMO too long. :shrug: So the Konoha 11 should have been promoted to jounin already. But its just my opinion, and its only the very beginning so it doesnt matter. This timeskip is the only thing I can pick as strange, anyways good job. (And i can see that you used coloured letters)