Seiiku - The Village Moves On

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First Chapter -

The blonde woke up, sweating, after his dream last night, He looked around the hospital, only to fall victim to the pangs of guilt...He had actually killed her.....
He fell back on his pillow, sleep overtaking him, when -

" Yo." said a familiar voice from the bed to his left.
He turned around, to see his sensei, mask on, still reading that perverted book of his.
" I see you're finally awake, Naruto".
" Hi Kakashi sensei.." said Uzumaki Naruto, still depressed.
" Hey Naruto, want to hear how I fought Kisame ? " said Kakashi, intent on cheering his only student up.
"...Sure..."

Kakashi cleared his throat and begun..."Ahem, it wont be very interesting if I tell you, hows about I show you?"
" You show me ? " said a puzzled Naruto " How?"
" Just Watch" said the enigmatic copy-nin and revealed his Sharingan Eye.
"Doujutsu - Sarai ! ( Eye Technique - Reviewal ) . Kakashi's sharingan tomoes started spinning rapidly and Naruto felt himself plunging into a bottomless pit....
Just as swore he would never agree to watch Kakashi sensei's matches again, he hit solid ground..no, he was floating above the ground, intangible...
He saw Kakashi Sensei and Tsunade - baachan facing Kisame...in a plain.
" Hey Sensei !" yelled Naruto "Hey Grandma ! Over here ! " He walked over and waved his hand near their face, yet they didnt notice..."Hmmm...I must be invisible too....." As he was wondering whether to use Rasengan on Kisame, he saw the fighting begin...

Kisame faced the two leaf shinobi, grinning and displaying his rows of jagged teeth..." Quite a feast we have here today, dont we, Samehada? The Hokage and the Copy Ninja..Samehada is going to enjoy devouring your chakra..."
" Enough talk Kisame ! " yelled the Godaime, as feisty as ever. " Im going to put an end to your murdering once and for all ! " and Tsunade hit the ground with one finger. A fissure appeared, snaking its way towards Kisame....who promptly leaped into the air and spat out an immense volume of water, covering the whole area in metres of water....and all the ninja started water walking, eyeing their opponent.
"GO get them, sensei" yelled Naruto.
Kisame smiled at Tsunade before plunging his hand into the water, causing hundreds of water sharks to leap out, slashing Tsunade with their razor teeth....
" Hokage-Sama ! Hang On ! " said Kakashi, charging up a Raikiri.
" NO Kakashi...I am the Hokage...and I'll show this blue fishstick what that title means !" came the voice of Tsunade, as she destroyed the sharks, the seal on her forehead glowing and purple lines running all over her body.....

" Sorry, Hokage - SAMA " said Kisame, dripping sarcasm, " But the only thing you are going to show me today is how Hokages die ! " and with surprising speed, appeared next to Tsunade, raising the Samehada to strike.

A burst of fire incinerated him, as Kakashi landed next to the Hokage asking " Fine, Hokage - Sama ?" As Tsunade was about to reply,, he noticed the Kisame he had just burnt was melting into a pool of water...
" A Water clone! We have to - " but before the son of the White Fang could finish his sentence, a leering Kisame rose before Tsunade from the water, and struck her in the forehead with the Samehada, right on the seal.....
Naruto watched, shocked as the seal burst forth streams of purple chakra.....
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Next : Fish Outside Water


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O_O O_O O_O
very very good, and i mean very very good. Congrats!!
please do not hurt Kakashi though :S i wouldn't stand it :(
and u r submitting it to the next contest of course ^^
 

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Thanks Rei !
and no, i wont, all hes getting is a few minor injuries, thats why hes in the hospital with Naruto ^^ ( hes my favorite character too xD )
yeah, i will !!!
when are entry dates opening ?
 
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