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*I focus my chakra and concentrate on having it flow through my body. I have the chakra flow vigorously, creating vibrations that begin to transform it into Raiton chakra. However, I slow down the vibrations so it does not turn into electricity, focusing on the light aspect of Lightning, rather than the raw energy. I then perform the hand seals while releasing the chakra all at once, creating a blinding light that can be seen even in long range.*
 

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*I focus my chakra and concentrate on having it flow through my body. I have the chakra flow vigorously, creating vibrations that begin to transform it into Raiton chakra. However, I slow down the vibrations so it does not turn into electricity, focusing on the light aspect of Lightning, rather than the raw energy. I then perform the hand seals while releasing the chakra all at once, creating a blinding light that can be seen even in long range.*

Well done. Now, we have:

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm

Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Another Chidori variant, that follows the same rules I mentioned before.

If Janrai is a precision technique, think of this as a massive, and more potent, Chidori Nagashi.

Upon formation of the Chidori, you'll simply over charge it and direct the chakra outwards, creating a massive lightning storm.

I don't think I need to explain how this one is useful. Give it a shot.
 

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*I gather my chakra and flow it to my right hand. I focus it and build it up. I have it condense on itself a bit, building up pressure. I then form the handseals for Chidori while vibrating the chakra greatly, creating the Chidori. Due to Chidori's free form, the pressure is released. As the pressure is released, I point my hand outwards. The releasing pressure propells the Lightning of the Chidori out. Due to the Chidori having multiple bolts, it sends multiple, large bolts of Lightning out in a barrage, with the shape of the Chidori giving the storm a circular pattern as it is propelled, destroying all in its way.*
 

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*I gather my chakra and flow it to my right hand. I focus it and build it up. I have it condense on itself a bit, building up pressure. I then form the handseals for Chidori while vibrating the chakra greatly, creating the Chidori. Due to Chidori's free form, the pressure is released. As the pressure is released, I point my hand outwards. The releasing pressure propells the Lightning of the Chidori out. Due to the Chidori having multiple bolts, it sends multiple, large bolts of Lightning out in a barrage, with the shape of the Chidori giving the storm a circular pattern as it is propelled, destroying all in its way.*

Excellent. U_U

Now, we have:

(Raiton: Chidori Shinsō) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

This is essential a more powerful version of the Chidori Sharp Spear, but requires physical contact with your opponent first. It could be said less that the Chidori is more powerful, and more that the impact increases the attack strength.

*Creates a Mud clone.*

Give it a shot; do a short three hit combo, ending with the Chidori spear.

After this, we do Shadow Clones, and then Lightning Chain; after that, AACT.
 

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I flow my chakra through my arm and into my right hand. I have the chakra surround my hand and vibrate at a high rate. I then form the seals, creating Chidori. I then rush at the clone. As I approach it, I quickly punch it in the face with my left hand. I then kick it in the stomach and uppercut it. I then plunge the Chidori into the clone. As the Chidori hits the clone, I use shape manipulation to propel the Chidori outward, expanding it into a spear that launches the clone into the air. As the spear drags the clone upwards, I have the end of the spear burst into an explosion of Lightning, electrocuting the clone. As the explosion fades, so does the spear and then the Chidori, causing the clone to fall onto the ground.*
 

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I flow my chakra through my arm and into my right hand. I have the chakra surround my hand and vibrate at a high rate. I then form the seals, creating Chidori. I then rush at the clone. As I approach it, I quickly punch it in the face with my left hand. I then kick it in the stomach and uppercut it. I then plunge the Chidori into the clone. As the Chidori hits the clone, I use shape manipulation to propel the Chidori outward, expanding it into a spear that launches the clone into the air. As the spear drags the clone upwards, I have the end of the spear burst into an explosion of Lightning, electrocuting the clone. As the explosion fades, so does the spear and then the Chidori, causing the clone to fall onto the ground.*

Very nice.

Well, now we need to learn:

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

~.~ I hate this jutsu; I hate clones. xd

But, either way...

The Shadow Clone jutsu has a single, specific seal to it.

Anyway, this jutsu is preformed simply; you'll divide your total chakra into equal masses depending on the number of clones you want to create.

Using shape manipulation, you'll force the chakra to take on your form; the chakra itself, being part of your life energies, will animate the clone, and make it sentient.

Give it a shot, but be detailed in your process.
 

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Ok.

*I take a deep breath and begin gathering my chakra. As I do, I perform the hand seal for Shadow Clone. As I perform the seal, I release my chakra out of my body. As it is released, I mold it together and focus on an image of myself. I shape the chakra into a humanoid figure. I then focus deeper on it, smoothing out the rough edges so it is shaped exactly like me. I then focus on giving it appearance. I focus on how I look and apply every detail, from hair to fingernail, to the clone. I then have the clone materialize into a solid, sentient being, creating a puff of smoke as it is created.*
 

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Ok.

*I take a deep breath and begin gathering my chakra. As I do, I perform the hand seal for Shadow Clone. As I perform the seal, I release my chakra out of my body. As it is released, I mold it together and focus on an image of myself. I shape the chakra into a humanoid figure. I then focus deeper on it, smoothing out the rough edges so it is shaped exactly like me. I then focus on giving it appearance. I focus on how I look and apply every detail, from hair to fingernail, to the clone. I then have the clone materialize into a solid, sentient being, creating a puff of smoke as it is created.*

Very nice. U_U

Alright, so now you and your clone will preform the last Lightning technique before we get to the AACT.

(Raiton: Raiden) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:This technique requires the user to firstly create a shadow clone, each of them then activate the Lightning Cutter on opposite hands to one another. Connecting the two techniques together, forming a chain of sorts, they are then able to use the resulting beam to slice through objects with great ease.
Note: Must first perform the shadow clone technique.


Very similar to the Double Lightning quake; both of you will form a Raikiri and project the chakra in it towards the others's; the result will be a stream of electricity. Simple, but potentially deadly. Give it a go.
 

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Very nice. U_U

Alright, so now you and your clone will preform the last Lightning technique before we get to the AACT.

(Raiton: Raiden) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:This technique requires the user to firstly create a shadow clone, each of them then activate the Lightning Cutter on opposite hands to one another. Connecting the two techniques together, forming a chain of sorts, they are then able to use the resulting beam to slice through objects with great ease.
Note: Must first perform the shadow clone technique.


Very similar to the Double Lightning quake; both of you will form a Raikiri and project the chakra in it towards the others's; the result will be a stream of electricity. Simple, but potentially deadly. Give it a go.

*I take a deep breath and form the hand seal for Shadow Clone. As I do, I start to flow my chakra outwards. I mold the chakra into the shape of a human, then into a precise shape of me, then I give it an appearance that matches mine specifically and I turn it tangible, giving it form and making it sentient. Then, me and the clone stand side by side, with him on my right. We then flow chakra to our hands, I flow to my right and he flows to his left. We mold the chakra to flow around our hands, like loose gloves. We then vibrate the chakra at high speeds and frequencies, creating Raiton. Due to the shape we mold the lightning in, it becomes Raikiri. Then, we begin to stream our individual Raikiri, flowing Lightning from it's free form towards each other. The two streams of Lightning meet and converge, creating a single bolt of Lightning that connects our Raikiri.*

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*I take a deep breath and form the hand seal for Shadow Clone. As I do, I start to flow my chakra outwards. I mold the chakra into the shape of a human, then into a precise shape of me, then I give it an appearance that matches mine specifically and I turn it tangible, giving it form and making it sentient. Then, me and the clone stand side by side, with him on my right. We then flow chakra to our hands, I flow to my right and he flows to his left. We mold the chakra to flow around our hands, like loose gloves. We then vibrate the chakra at high speeds and frequencies, creating Raiton. Due to the shape we mold the lightning in, it becomes Raikiri. Then, we begin to stream our individual Raikiri, flowing Lightning from it's free form towards each other. The two streams of Lightning meet and converge, creating a single bolt of Lightning that connects our Raikiri.*

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Very good. u.u Now on to the AACT's, and thus, some simpler stuff.

(Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s.

This works quite simply. o_o You'll focus chakra around your blade, which will engulf it in lightning, and also allow it to levitate, in a similar manner to Longsword of the Sky.

Then, by using a "Shadow-Clone Shuriken" esc principle, you will create two more swords; and since all three are covered with your chakra, you can direct them as you wish.

Lot going on for a C-rank technique.

xd Anyway, give it a shot; and remember to use detail.
 

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Very good. u.u Now on to the AACT's, and thus, some simpler stuff.

(Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s.

This works quite simply. o_o You'll focus chakra around your blade, which will engulf it in lightning, and also allow it to levitate, in a similar manner to Longsword of the Sky.

Then, by using a "Shadow-Clone Shuriken" esc principle, you will create two more swords; and since all three are covered with your chakra, you can direct them as you wish.

Lot going on for a C-rank technique.

xd Anyway, give it a shot; and remember to use detail.

*I take out a sword and gather up my chakra. I flow chakra down my arm and into the hand holding the sword. I then flow the chakra to the sword and stream the chakra along the sword's likeness. I then have the chakra vibrate greatly. The high rate of vibration turns it into Lightning. Due to the streaming of chakra beforehand, the Lightning flows along the swords likeness. I then manipulate the Lightning, controlling the sword and having it float in front of me. I then, using the same principles as Shadow Shuriken, replicate the sword twice, creating three swords coated with lightning. I then launch them forward, sending them to slice and pierce whatever is in their path.*
 

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*I take out a sword and gather up my chakra. I flow chakra down my arm and into the hand holding the sword. I then flow the chakra to the sword and stream the chakra along the sword's likeness. I then have the chakra vibrate greatly. The high rate of vibration turns it into Lightning. Due to the streaming of chakra beforehand, the Lightning flows along the swords likeness. I then manipulate the Lightning, controlling the sword and having it float in front of me. I then, using the same principles as Shadow Shuriken, replicate the sword twice, creating three swords coated with lightning. I then launch them forward, sending them to slice and pierce whatever is in their path.*


Nicely done.

Now, we have:

(Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid (Short range for the discharge)
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

I think the description of the jutsu pretty well explains what to do. xd It's very similar to Hardliner Gale Chop, from the Fuuton jutsu.
 

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Ah yes, Gale Chop, the one I've never heard of.

*I close my eyes and focus on my chakra flow. I particularly focus on the setion of the chakra network in my dominant arm, my right arm. I have the chakra from the tips of my fingers up to my elbow flow outwards and coat my arm. I then vibrate the chakra greatly, but carefully so I don't damage my own arm. This creates a coating of lightning and electricty around my arm. I then jump up into the air. As I land, I position myself so I land on my knees with my palm on the ground. As my palm hits the ground, I release the lightning, flowing it from off of my hand and controlling its speed so it streams against the ground in the form of a current, rather than bust a hole in it in the form of a lightning bolt. I direct it so it flows out in a circle around me for 5m.*
 

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Ah yes, Gale Chop, the one I've never heard of.

*I close my eyes and focus on my chakra flow. I particularly focus on the setion of the chakra network in my dominant arm, my right arm. I have the chakra from the tips of my fingers up to my elbow flow outwards and coat my arm. I then vibrate the chakra greatly, but carefully so I don't damage my own arm. This creates a coating of lightning and electricty around my arm. I then jump up into the air. As I land, I position myself so I land on my knees with my palm on the ground. As my palm hits the ground, I release the lightning, flowing it from off of my hand and controlling its speed so it streams against the ground in the form of a current, rather than bust a hole in it in the form of a lightning bolt. I direct it so it flows out in a circle around me for 5m.*

Well, you should have. It's very useful.

Anyway, that was nicely done.

Next is:


(Raiton no Heki) – Lightning Release Wall
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and then releases it in front of them whilst holding their hands out and they generate a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver a small electrical shock that can temporarily reduce their physical capabilities.

I have nothing to say about this one. ._. It's very straight forward.

Give it a go.

And...sorry to do this, but if you want to seek out another Sensei (though, I'd still require you drop training with me), I'd understand, as I don't think my response speed is going to increase.
 

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*I take a breath and focus on my chakra. I direct it through my body, down my arms and into my hands. I have the chakra vibrate greatly, building up a high level of frequency. I also have it flow off of my hands in an invisible stream. As it vibrates and transforms into Lightning, I have it materialize and take the form of a shield, giving it visibility and a solid form, allowing it to defend against weaker attacks.*

And no, I don't need to find another one. I don't mind if you reply slowly, I'll only seek a new one if it becomes absolutely necessary. As they say, bird in the hand, two in the bush.
 

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Fair enough. ^_^ My speed should definitely pick up by next Monday, though. I should have a Senpai, and I'll be splitting my students with them. Since I'll have less to reply to personally, I should be able to reply more often.

Anyway, nicely done, and so next we have:

(Raiton: Rakurai Senkou) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.

This is, basically, a short-ranged, handseal-less version of the B-ranked version of Gian. Give it a go.
 

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*I focos on the chakra flow in my right arm and flow it down to my hand. I have the chakra slowly leak out little by little. I control so it doesn't flow off, but stays "attached" to my hand. I then have.the chakra vibrate at a very high frequency. The high frequency and vibration transforms the chakra into Lightning. I then stretch my hand out and have the Lightning surge out in the form of a small, purple bolt.*
 

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Ok, good. I will be taking over your training, as i am keotsus sempai
 

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(Raiton: Purazuma Bōru) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.


Ok, of this technique i would like you to focus your lightning chakra, allowing it to release from your body creating a plasma barrier that will protect you from incoming attacks. Remember that while this technique is active, you can only use lightning based technique(no wind,water, ect.), and you can only use physical attacks while this is active. This technique is very useful. Per say your opponent send spikes of earth towards you , you can then discharge the lightning in the direction of your choice, allowing it to create a wave of energy/ energy barrier allowing you to block the technique.

No template since you're at AACT
 
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