I thought Kaeruzan died already! :|Naruto:*angry* What did you do to Kaeruzan![/B]
Anyways, great job here. I sense the end nearing.. xD
I thought Kaeruzan died already! :|Naruto:*angry* What did you do to Kaeruzan![/B]
Thanks man!I thought Kaeruzan died already! :|
Anyways, great job here. I sense the end nearing.. xD
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Chapter 16
Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Time To Fight
Mysterious Man:*squeezing the toad's neck* Where is the kid?
Fukasaku:*coughing and laughing* Hehe... Go to hell.
A second hand came out of the dust towards his face. It all went black.
Days after, in the training grounds, near the wooden caban, Naruto continued his training, using the scroll that Kaeruzan had left him. Following every step that was written on the scroll, he now was meditating, on top of a rock, the sword of Myobokuzan sticking on the floor next to him. The scroll told him to do this everyday. "A meeting with Nature" as the scroll described. Everyday he sat on the same rock, with his eyes closed, trying to become one with nature. This was of great importance as the scroll stated.
Naruto felt a great difference. The way he felt towards Nature was different now. All the animals, the plants, the rocks. All of them had different roles to play and together formed the world were he lived. He was able to see beyond everything he saw before. All around him it all had changed.
These were the thoughts that crossed his mind while he meditated for so long. Changing, growing. That's what his trip to Myobokuzan had offered him. A way to protect those he loved, without harming them. That seemed impossible before.
Suddenly, all his thoughts were broken to pieces. Naruto fell from the rock were he sat, grabbing his head in pain. The sound of screming and glass shattering seemed to explode inside his mind.
Naruto:*to himself holding is head* Wha... what is this presence...? This... chakra?
All this meditating, listening and feeling the world around him had sharpened his senses. What he felt was out if this world. A type of chakra he had never felt before, as if thousands of knifes stabbed his brain for all eternity. Then it all stopped. Naruto continued lying on the ground breathing heavily wondering what on earth had just happened. As he lifted his head, and opened his eyes slowly, he could see the feet of a man that stood not far away from him. He had black hair that covered his eyes but Naruto understood that he was looking at him. He wore that same black cloak that Naruto had seen so many times. The one with the red cloud pattern.
Naruto: Aka... tsuki?
The man lifted the hair that covered his eyes and that was when Naruto saw them. Two pale, purple eyes that had a ripple pattern that circled around the iris. As the man stared at Naruto in the eye, Naruto began to feel the same feeling as before and images of his body in pain flashed across his mind.
Akatsuki Man: Pain... Have you ever met it before?
Naruto:*in pain* Aaaargh!
Akatsuki Man: Yellow hair... blue eyes... whiskers... Yes, you must be the Nine Tails Jinchuuriki...
The pain in Naruto's head had stopped and he got to his feet. He faced the man, looking back into his eyes.
Naruto:*angry* How did the Akatsuki find me here? No one knows where I am except...
The man took out from inside his cloak the same old looking map that Naruto had, the showed the way to get to Kaeruzan's house. The map bursted into flames in his hand.
Akatsuki Man:*smiling* Let's say... A frog gave me a little help.
Rage began to boil inside Naruto's chest... The monster inside him whispering in his ear, waiting to be unleashed. He got into a fighting stance, grasping tighly his sword, ready to unsheath it. The man glanced at the katana for a second and then back at Naruto.
Naruto:*angry* What did you do to Fukasaku!?
Akatsuki Man: That does not matter anymore. You have two options. Either you come with me right now or I take you by painful means.
Naruto:*enraged* Bring it on!
Akatsuki Man: Are you sure of that? You know what happened to our master the last time I fought him don't you? Jiraiya-sensei?
Naruto:*surprised* What do you mean by "our"?
Akatsuki Man: Well... when I once lived with the name of Nagato, he trained me as a child. How ironic don't you think? The student he once trained, used his training to kill him. Anyway... you can call me Pain now.
Naruto felt the rage inside him explode. His anger consumed him. All the good moments he had spent, all the things he was thought by Jiraiya... This man had stolen them away.
Naruto:*unsheating the sword* I don't give a damn what you want me to call you... I'M GONNA F*CKING KILL YOU!
Nagato:*smiling* Huh? Now now... we don't want to get mad at each other do we?
As the fight seems to be about to begin, what will happen? How strong is Naruto after all his training?
To be continued...
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Wow...!!!!
5/5 stars 10/10 2 giant thumbs up!!!
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Thanks all of you, that really means a lot.Spectacular!!
Thanks man!total awesomeness, sorry for not replying sooner havent been home for 2 days and I left NB on xD
anyways greatness man
I wanna see the fight!!!
Thanks a lot man, that means a lot to me. ^^let me see the fight!!!!
nao!!!! >_<
wow excellent hiruzen you are one of the best writers here if not the best O_O