ace show me how to NOT be a noob

[Wakizashi]

cw cj ce kg approved
kais and subs approved
killing and stealing not approved

terrain: training field

bio jinsokuna with a-rank plus kumo lightning.

*practicing my freeform taijutsu against a nearby tree to pass the time*​

 

[Littlefinger.]

LoL! So funny...I'm now Naizen^_^
Shinsuke Takasugi...Come at me brO!!

 

[Wakizashi]

*starting at mid range i emit a powerful electrical energy that positively charges the air, causing the opponent caught in the wave is constantly shocked by lightning. while you are caught and being shocked i follow up with shooting a bolt of lightning at you!*

(Raiton: Hiraishin no Jintai) -Lightning Release: Human Lightning Rod
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (if opponent is within the field)
Description:The user emits a powerful field of electrical energy; anyone caught within it gains a negative charge. The user positively charges the air around him, meaning that if the opponent is within the field he/she is constantly shocked by lightning. Although, raiton jutsu are almost impossible to dodge while within the field, the field only extends 10 meters from the user. This jutsu also does a great job of disrupting electrical jutsu aimed at the user.
(Last 3 Turns)
(Usable only once)

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

 

[Littlefinger.]

I won't attack until things get heated up...Only defending for now^^
_____
As you send the lightning through the field, my 1T
spins and I see everything happen in a somewhat slower pace and I predict the time it would take to reach me. I rapidly perform 6 handseals and slam my palm on the ground. Now, using my already gathered chakra, I tear up the ground you are standing on to where your lightning has reached(short range from me). The ground doesn't open up, but divides and rises so that you fall in the middle(This is the jutsu Yamato used to make a path way between Itachi's Amaterasu when they were looking for him and Sasuke).

Spoiler

(Doton: Doryūkatsu) - Earth
Release: Earth Flow Divide
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the required hand seals
Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse →
Tiger → Snake and then by
flowing concentrated chakra
from one's palms into the Dragon
Veins flowing underground, one can tear the earth apart,
creating large chasms by firstly
raising the earth in the desired
location and then splitting that
peice of earth through the
center. The length, width, direction, and curve of the
chasm are all up to the user.
Manipulating the Dragon Veins
requires fine chakra control, but
if one has such skill, they can
use this technique to divide the space between the enemy and
their own team in two, destroy
enemy camps or defences, and
even to attack.
Note: This does not split the
earth appart directly to cause opponents to fall in the fissure.

 

[Wakizashi]

*after you defend yourself. i then throw little bolts of lightning at you. i then form a shadow clone that then advances around to your left while i throw three kunai heading toward where you stand to your left and to your right tripped with ninja wire to pass my clone and wrap you. when you get wrapped in the wire i then send an electrical current through the wire and shock you.*

Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.[/B]

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

(Raiton: Shingai Nami ) - Lightning Release: Shock wave
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses chakra in a piece of string. When the chakra reaches the string, it should create a shock wave. When the user hits the opponent with it, their skin will set on fire and peel of slowly.

 

[Littlefinger.]

With the aid of my sharingan, I see you emit lightning bolts slowly and create a clone. As he begins run left and you run right and throw 3 kunais, I release a sphere of wind to the both of you. It neutralises the bolts(lightning is weak towards wind) and comes between the both of you and blows you guys farther apart together with the kunais.

Spoiler

(Fūton: Gōkūhō) - Wind
Release: Great Vacuum
Cannon
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The users gathers his Fuuton chakra into the lungs
to blow out a sphere of air at
his target that can blow
backwards the opponent and
small objects around him.

 

[Wakizashi]

With the aid of my sharingan, I see you emit lightning bolts slowly and create a clone. As he begins run left and you run right and throw 3 kunais, I release a sphere of wind to the both of you. It neutralises the bolts(lightning is weak towards wind) and comes between the both of you and blows you guys farther apart together with the kunais.

Spoiler

(Fūton: Gōkūhō) - Wind
Release: Great Vacuum
Cannon
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The users gathers his Fuuton chakra into the lungs
to blow out a sphere of air at
his target that can blow
backwards the opponent and
small objects around him.

-as i am blown away, my clone poofs while i regain balance and composure despite the minor bruises, i then gather chakra into the shape of a ball and i release it at you in high speeds.-

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

 

[Littlefinger.]

Note

• Always continue from your opponent's last attack. I mean instead of saying "I then gather chakra into the
  shape of a ball and i release it at
  you", you could say"As I am blown away with my clone, he poofs out while I regain balance and composure despite the minor bruises I sustained. I then gather chakra into the
  shape of a ball and i release it at you".....It makes it more fun^^
• Also, your clone is short range. Meaning he can only go short range from you and I'm at mid range. So if he passes short range from you, he goes *poof*
• Your clone cannot use a chidori. Why?
  

  (Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning
  Shadow Clone
  Rank: B
  Note: Can only use lightning
  based techniques up to B rank.

Always pay attention to at least every detail if not all details..LoL!xd

 

[Littlefinger.]

Why do you reply so fast?-_-

What first attack? mine or yours?

 

[Wakizashi]

Why do you reply so fast?-_-

What first attack? mine or yours?

yours. in a situation where more than 1 attack is used

 

[Littlefinger.]

-as i am blown away, my clone poofs while i regain balance and composure despite the minor bruises, i then gather chakra into the shape of a ball and i release it at you in high speeds.-

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

As you launch the lightning ball at me, I throw a kunai at you and use wind to push it so that it travels faster towards you while the wind counters your lightning ball.

(Fūton: Reppūshō) - Wind
Release: Gale Palm
Rank: C
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A simple technique that when the users hands are
clapped together, wind is
compressed and transformed
into a powerful gale. This
technique, when used as an
isolated attack has the power to easily knock over a human.
Though the true value comes
from using it together with
projectile weapons like shuriken
or kunai. Their speed, power,
and ability to wound or even kill are all increased several times.

 

[Wakizashi]

As you launch the lightning ball at me, I throw a kunai at you and use wind to push it so that it travels faster towards you while the wind counters your lightning ball.

(Fūton: Reppūshō) - Wind
Release: Gale Palm
Rank: C
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A simple technique that when the users hands are
clapped together, wind is
compressed and transformed
into a powerful gale. This
technique, when used as an
isolated attack has the power to easily knock over a human.
Though the true value comes
from using it together with
projectile weapons like shuriken
or kunai. Their speed, power,
and ability to wound or even kill are all increased several times.

-as your kunai is coming at me at high speed i then create a shadow clone in mid range in front of me that creates a horn like shape which shoots bolts of lightning chakra at your kunai, countering it as i retreat to long range and summon lightning bolts from the sky that explodes in a electric surge covering a wide range-

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

(Raiton: Ame no Kyohaku)- Lightning Element: Rain of the Stars
Type: Attack
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:80
Description: The user summons a storm that rains down of thousands of lightning bolts that explode in an electric surge around the opponent. This attack has a very wide range.

 

[Littlefinger.]

You messed up your clone's range issue again^^ his range is short and cannot be formed mid. So I'll just take it you threw a kunai at my own kunai to deflect it(which is a better counter).
_____
As you jump to long range and summon the lightning bolts, I quickly encase my body with rocks and begin to spit out mud which forms a giant Earth Stone Golem which shields me from the rain of lightning bolts. When it is over, I stand up and drop the rocks that formed the armour.
Pretty good attack, I better start getting serious^.^

(Koka no Jutsu) -
Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/
Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A Description: By utilizing earth-
based chakra, the user creates
armour made of rock that
encases their body. The armour
can also be used to create
extendable weapons to strike a target with.

(Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no
Jutsu) - Earth Release:
Great Stone Golem
Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long (Made short
range of the user with a long
range reach)
Chakra cost: 40 Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a
even larger and stronger
version of Earth Release: Stone
Golem Technique.

 

[Wakizashi]

You messed up your clone's range issue again^^ his range is short and cannot be formed mid. So I'll just take it you threw a kunai at my own kunai to deflect it(which is a better counter).
_____
As you jump to long range and summon the lightning bolts, I quickly encase my body with rocks and begin to spit out mud which forms a giant Earth Stone Golem which shields me from the rain of lightning bolts. When it is over, I stand up and drop the rocks that formed the armour.
Pretty good attack, I better start getting serious^.^

(Koka no Jutsu) -
Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/
Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A Description: By utilizing earth-
based chakra, the user creates
armour made of rock that
encases their body. The armour
can also be used to create
extendable weapons to strike a target with.

(Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no
Jutsu) - Earth Release:
Great Stone Golem
Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long (Made short
range of the user with a long
range reach)
Chakra cost: 40 Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a
even larger and stronger
version of Earth Release: Stone
Golem Technique.

-before you are able to finish your statement my clone then throws 8 shuriken while i perform the ram seal and raise my hand with my chakra manipulating the lightning which triggers the electrical discharge from the sky to shock you.-

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

 

[Littlefinger.]

As you raise you hands and trigger an eletrical discharge, I form a stone golem to shield me from your attack.

(Doton: Iwa no Gōremu) –
Earth Release: Stone Golem
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user expels a large creature composed of
stone from his mouth. The rock
golem has a fair amount of
stamina and brute strength,
being able to bite and tear off
flesh with its mouth and hands respectively. If used from above
the target then the user can
use the earth golem to drop
down onto the opponent like a
bomb and crush them.

I then tap the ground with my feet and the ground behind you drops inwards.

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth
Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive,
Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A Description: The user lowers or
raises the ground in the
surrounding area at high speeds,
allowing them to create giant
holes in the ground or avoid
attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that
it is lowered to is up to the user
and rasing earth can be done up
to 20 meters tall creating a small
cliff or they can create trenches
that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved
below ground relative to the
surrounding surface the terrain
is not altered, plant life and
people retaining their same
positions.

As you are distracted by that, I loosen up the ground infront of me and it flows as a landslide, pushing you into the hole and burying you.

(Doton: Dochūbaku) - Earth
Release: Landslide
Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to
create the earth infront of them
to turn to a lose like quality and
create a landslide that is
directed towards the enemy
target.

 

[Wakizashi]

As you raise you hands and trigger an eletrical discharge, I form a stone golem to shield me from your attack.

(Doton: Iwa no Gōremu) –
Earth Release: Stone Golem
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user expels a large creature composed of
stone from his mouth. The rock
golem has a fair amount of
stamina and brute strength,
being able to bite and tear off
flesh with its mouth and hands respectively. If used from above
the target then the user can
use the earth golem to drop
down onto the opponent like a
bomb and crush them.

I then tap the ground with my feet and the ground behind you drops inwards.

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth
Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive,
Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A Description: The user lowers or
raises the ground in the
surrounding area at high speeds,
allowing them to create giant
holes in the ground or avoid
attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that
it is lowered to is up to the user
and rasing earth can be done up
to 20 meters tall creating a small
cliff or they can create trenches
that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved
below ground relative to the
surrounding surface the terrain
is not altered, plant life and
people retaining their same
positions.

As you are distracted by that, I loosen up the ground infront of me and it flows as a landslide, pushing you into the hole and burying you.

(Doton: Dochūbaku) - Earth
Release: Landslide
Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to
create the earth infront of them
to turn to a lose like quality and
create a landslide that is
directed towards the enemy
target.

-as you tap the ground i then notice the jutsu so i then form a sequence of handseals before placing my hands on the ground and converting my chakra into lightning. i then send an enormous amount of electricity that cuts thru the ground that you begin to manipulate as your landslide begins to travel. while my lightning is traveling towards you i then form a shadow clone that advances close range from me to close range to you traveling faster then my lightning. while advancing he then gets two large shurikens and throw them at you after channeling raiton chakra in them. the shurikens pin you down. my clone maintains a connection thru the raiton cable that delivers a numbing shock leaving you vulnerable to the lightning traveling to you.-

(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

(Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two large shuriken or Windmill Shuriken and channel their raiton chakra into them. They will then throw them at their target to pin them down and maintain a connection with the shuriken through a electrical cable that delivers a numbing shock to paralyse the target and restrict their movements.
Note: Numbing Effect lasts for one turn.

note: the shadow clones is close range from you so you will have little chance to react in time to counter the attack.

 

[Littlefinger.]

As you send the lightning through the ground and your clone advances, I cause a mud river to form and take you guys back, also shocking you guys with your lightning cuz the mud conducts it like water.

(Doton: Doryū Taiga) -
Earth Release: Earth Flow
River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand sealTiger, the user
transforms the ground
underneath their opponent into
a river of mud that throws them
off balance and away from the
user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a
medium for the Earth Release:
Earth Dragon Bullet technique.

Then a large dragon emerges and hits the both of you, causing your clone to poof and making you fall into the pit.

(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth
Release: Earth Dragon
Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River,
the user will then perform the
Ram → Horse → Dragon they can
create a dragon-like head to fire
concentrated mud at an
opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to
shoot lava toward an opponent.

 

[Wakizashi]

As you send the lightning through the ground and your clone advances, I cause a mud river to form and take you guys back, also shocking you guys with your lightning cuz the mud conducts it like water.

(Doton: Doryū Taiga) -
Earth Release: Earth Flow
River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand sealTiger, the user
transforms the ground
underneath their opponent into
a river of mud that throws them
off balance and away from the
user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a
medium for the Earth Release:
Earth Dragon Bullet technique.

Then a large dragon emerges and hits the both of you, causing your clone to poof and making you fall into the pit.

(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth
Release: Earth Dragon
Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River,
the user will then perform the
Ram → Horse → Dragon they can
create a dragon-like head to fire
concentrated mud at an
opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to
shoot lava toward an opponent.

-after gaining our balance from the mud flow my clone jumps in front of me with the lightning running this hands in the shape as sabers before he put them together in the form of an x and throws it toward the earth flow river, pushing it back. i then gather lightning chakra in my mouth and spew it out in the shape of a hawk to reinforce the x slash to force the earth flow river back at you.-

lightening element : double lightening sabers cut (raiton :futae raiton gontuo kire)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40 ( +10 at short range )
Description: by letting your lightning chakra through your hands , and making an lightening saber each one of them you can fuse it together in one X like slash directed at your opponent , or if you hit it directly to your opponent it will be more effective.

Raiton:shuzoku taka) - lightning element: Racing hawk
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:short-mid
chakra cost:30
Damage:60
Descreption:The user counsintrates a big amount of lightning chakra to his mouth and than spits it out at the enemy.Than the user uses his chakra minipulation to form a hawk (only head and wings)
that attacks the enemy at high speed.
*can be used 2 times per battle

 

[Littlefinger.]

As your clone jumps in front of you and forms an X shape with both hands, I predict a lightning attack since he is a lighthning clone. Quickly I tap the ground and raise earth infront of you guys. Your attacks hit the earth and it crumbles both of you.

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth
Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive,
Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A Description: The user lowers or
raises the ground in the
surrounding area at high speeds,
allowing them to create giant
holes in the ground or avoid
attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that
it is lowered to is up to the user
and rasing earth can be done up
to 20 meters tall creating a small
cliff or they can create trenches
that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved
below ground relative to the
surrounding surface the terrain
is not altered, plant life and
people retaining their same
positions.

 

[Wakizashi]

As your clone jumps in front of you and forms an X shape with both hands, I predict a lightning attack since he is a lighthning clone. Quickly I tap the ground and raise earth infront of you guys. Your attacks hit the earth and it crumbles both of you.

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth
Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive,
Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A Description: The user lowers or
raises the ground in the
surrounding area at high speeds,
allowing them to create giant
holes in the ground or avoid
attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that
it is lowered to is up to the user
and rasing earth can be done up
to 20 meters tall creating a small
cliff or they can create trenches
that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved
below ground relative to the
surrounding surface the terrain
is not altered, plant life and
people retaining their same
positions.

-my clone poofs after being fooled to attack the moving ground i then create a surge of lightning on the ground to shock you-

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.