Hokages and the Shinigami Realm(pt12)

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Minato: (This is incredible.)
The sheer beauty of the Heaven Realm distracts him from his goal. Then, the thought of Tobi taking Kushina and Jiraiya from a such wonderful place reminds Minato of what he must do. He looks around and Tobi is nowhere to be seen.
Minato: (Looks like I've wasted crucial time talking to Tobirama. The last time Tobi retreated, he came back with Jiraiya-sensei and Kushina. My best bet would be that he's going to capture more shinobi as reinforcements. It seems all souls in this realm roams in this remarkable village.)
The Fourth Hokage heads for the village. He enters the village and is concerned with what he sees. Billions of villagers walks the streets of the village. With such a vast amount of souls circuiting around, finding someone in specific is a difficult task.
Minato: (Well, it's nice to see that so many people made it to the Heaven Realm instead of whatever awaits those with wicked hearts.)
Minato searches for Tobi. The scene switches to Tobi's point of view. From the rooftops, Tobi seeks out legendary shinobi to aid him in his fight against the Hokages. Tobi finds the mass amount of villagers to be bothersome.
Tobi: (What a nuisance this is. Oh well, I have more than enough time. The Hokages have no choice but to wait in the Shinigami Realm while I run errands to advance in sealing their fates. Hmph, the convenience of space-time and realm traveling.)
Tobi jumps from rooftop to rooftop, searching the streets for shinobi capable of harming the Hokages' morale. Tobi spots Sakumo Hatake down below cheerfully walking the street with his wife.
Tobi: (The legendary White Fang of the Leaf should be of enough assistance. Also, I'm sure Yondaime will not want to bring harm to his soul, being that he is the father of Kakashi.)
Tobi leaps down from the building to capture Sakumo. The scene switches back to Minato's point of view. From seventy-five feet away, Minato sees Tobi as he jumped down from the rooftop.
Minato: (I can't throw a kunai with all these villagers around. Seems like I must lose the element of surprise.)
Minato runs along the side of buildings and straight for Tobi. Tobi is still unaware of Minato's presence in this realm. Tobi lands ten feet behind Sakumo. He then walks right through the crowd, reaches Sakumo, and materializes to grab him. Minato is now twenty-five feet from Tobi and sees the situation.
Minato: (So, he's trying to capture the White Fang. Not while I'm around.)
As Tobi's hand is inches from Sakumo, Minato finally gets close enough to safely throw a kunai. He throws a kunai and it cuts Tobi's hand off. White liquid oozes from Tobi's arm. Tobi finally realizes that Minato followed him.
Tobi: (How is that possible?! I must retreat again.)
Tobi begins to teleport as Minato is just seconds from reaching him.
Sakumo is startled by the hostile occurrence in the middle of such a blissful setting.

Sakumo: Minato Namikaze? What is the meaning of this?
Minato: I'll explain later, I promise.
Before Tobi completely vanishes, Minato throws a FTG kunai at Tobi. Tobi teleports to his new destination and is hit on the shoulder by the kunai. Minato teleports to the kunai and performs his Flying Raijin Level 2, but misses.
Tobi: Don't think you'll get me with that again.
Minato backs up and looks around. There is nothing but wasteland, fire, and lava. Angry and sad souls linger around hopelessly.
Minato: (This must be the Hell Realm.) Tobi! Let's settle this once again, but for good this time. Just me and you.
Tobi: Let's.
 
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Yeahya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lets go part 12! Seriously you're the best member ever!! Time to read :D

Amazed as always. O.O I'll give you +rep when I can!
 
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To all who enjoys this series: Please, please tell all your friends to give it a try. Please spread my story. I put a lot into this and think it deserves more fans. Although, I'm very grateful for the ones I already havexd
 

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To all who enjoys this series: Please, please tell all your friends to give it a try. Please spread my story. I put a lot into this and think it deserves more fans. Although, I'm very grateful for the ones I already havexd
Will do haha. I also think after you are done. You should make a thread with the compilation of all the chapters, easy to advertise, and more enticing haha :p
 

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One more chapter left NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :( please make really really really long & eipc twisted surprise ending PLEASE. It would be so cool if ur stories of Hoakges & The Shinigami Realm became a manga story.
 

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One more chapter left NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :( please make really really really long & eipc twisted surprise ending PLEASE. It would be so cool if ur stories of Hoakges & The Shinigami Realm became a manga story.
I'm not sure about a twisted surprise at the end, man. I've had this specific ending planned out for quite some time now. But, it will still be epicxd
 
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Greaaaat chapter! except im sad its almost over haha ill rep you if i can again!
thanks. don't worry, dude. I'm creating an even better FF after this one:)
oh sh*t good chapter don't bring madara out tho
haha I won't. Madara is doing w/e he's doing in the manga right now. all of this is happening as current as the manga. remember that Zetsu cloned Tobi so that the real Tobi can go fight the Hokages.
 
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