In flight

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

On the bleakest day
And the blackest night
My soul takes flight
When im feeling down
And my hearts left town
My soul flies into the night
Searching for dawns first light.

 

[Scooby Doo]

Not bad but did you see what I wrote a few minutes ago? More metaphors, otherwise its just your thoughts about usual things in rhymes.

 

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

Not bad but did you see what I wrote a few minutes ago? More metaphors, otherwise its just your thoughts about usual things in rhymes.

Thanks but there are different kinds of poetry and some dont have many metaphors but check out my last one When death comes to play i think you might like it.

 

[hans roildy]

Not bad of a poem nice rhytm.xd

 

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

Not bad of a poem nice rhytm.xd

Thank you.