Unknowing secrets

[Yuka]

This Poem was inspired by a great poet named edgar allan poe, and i hope you enjoy it as much as i did


Here I sit in my mind my head full of thoughts i'd never had the courage to speak oh yes i am a Secretive person at heart and to those who know very little about me would think i was strange but my evil step father dared not approach me nor utter a word for he was quite unnerved by my strangeness and although he was the bravest of men he was to afraid to step over the threshold and enter into my ominous domain and for words i thought i'd never say remained silent unsaid on this very cold winter day


p.s

the Poem was about a young man who was an antisocial that never spoke much and he'd spend endless nights locked up in his bedroom with his chair facing the window,

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

It's not bad, but might I suggest that you post a serious poem in a font color that doesn't burn the eyes?

 

[Yuka]

It's not bad, but might I suggest that you post a serious poem in a font color that doesn't burn the eyes?

Please try not to be rude in the threads i post, because this poem is for those who truly enjoy reading poetry, thank you very much and i hope you enjoy the rest of your day

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

Please try not to be rude in the threads i post, because this poem is for those who truly enjoy reading poetry, thank you very much and i hope you enjoy the rest of your day

I wasn't trying to be rude. Notice, I didn't say anything negative about the quality of your poem. I was merely suggesting that the bright pink font was difficult to read. If you've taken offense, I'm sorry.

 

[Urda]

Awesome Poem.

 

[Yuka]

I wasn't trying to be rude. Notice, I didn't say anything negative about the quality of your poem. I was merely suggesting that the bright pink font was difficult to read. If you've taken offense, I'm sorry.

Please just enjoy what i worked so hard to write and keep your negative thoughts to yourself instead of displaying them in public,

 

[Yuka]

Awesome Poem.

Now that is what i like to see, a true poetic fan who enjoys the poems i pour my time and effort into You sir Get a Rep for being so supportive

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

Please just enjoy what i worked so hard to write and keep your negative thoughts to yourself instead of displaying them in public,

It was not a negative thought, it was merely an observation. It was more difficult to appreciate your work when I couldn't read it well because of the color. Again, I'm sorry to have offended you, but apparently you're above accepting either apologies or constructive criticism.

 

[Yuka]

It was not a negative thought, it was merely an observation. It was more difficult to appreciate your work when I couldn't read it well because of the color. Again, I'm sorry to have offended you, but apparently you're above accepting either apologies or constructive criticism.

just enjoy what's been offered to you instead of making a big deal out of it.