Well i will tell you something sometime in the story Neutrino00 will become a important person in the story you will seeLol. I'm so loving Madara's evil laugh. xD
But why did you make Neutrino00 your butler? He's a good guy too.. o.o
Oh, oh!Make him the main antagonist of this whole thing.You know, false conceptions. Like everything that's happening now, it's all part of his plans. xD
Lol thanks it took me a while to post it cause of the colorsI like the storyIt seems you can write pretty well.
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Si perra vas estar y graciasawesome
perra... yo no voy a star no??
warra xD
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Lmao XD!! thanks YaminiI was the starbut Zanji was just jealous. jk lol
Nicely done! I really like the part with the bad guys xD