The Loneliness Of Fu: The Fourth Hokage Arrives

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The Fourth Hokage Arrives​


*As the Fourth Hokage hurry's towards the Taikigakure Village, the barrier the Kage Shibuki left behind to protect the Mysterious Girl start to crumble more and more until the Seven Tailed Is Finally Released from the barrier. What will the Mysterious Girl do now?*

Mysterious Girl- Please Dont Hurt me!!!!

*As The Mysterious Girl finishes saying this the Seven Tailed Beast charge another orb and aim's it towards the girl. But as she tried to run away he fires the orb at the Mysterious Girl. And as it comes towards her, a kunia lands in front of her, and as the beast forms another orb and fired it towards her she's moved somewhere but it was so fast she didnt even notice it*

Fourth Hokage- Are You Ok?

Mysterious Girl- *Cries* I thought i was gonna die.

Fourth Hokage- *Smiles* It's gonna be ok, all get rid of this beast. So dont worry about anything just go hide.


*As Minato tell the girl to hide she quickly runs and find a place to hide while the Fourth Hokage takes care of the beast. But first he called the Taikigakure Anbu to discuss something important.*

Fourth Hokage- Taikigakure Anbu, this is a Tailed Beast. These things are supposed to be reported to all other five nations as to not have a usurp of power in the 5 Nations. So why didnt your Kage report this?

Taikigakure Anbu- That is classified information, can you please just take care of this mess and leave?

Fourth Hokage- This just can't be destroyed it has to be sealed into a human being, and a powerful one as to control the beast. But obtaining a Tailed Beast into your body will make them a Jinchuuriki, a being that is hated and started at with hateful eye's. Are you willing to do that to one of your own villagers?

Taikigakure Anbu- Scarificing is at part of any village!!!!! Anyone citizen should understand that.

*As the Anbu finishes his sentence the Fourth Hokage becomes enraged and punches the Anbu member in the stomach. Making him drop to the ground.*

Fourth Hokage- Do you guys have any love for your Villagers!!!!

Taikigakure Anbu- *Coughing* All members have their goal in life, why mess that up.

Fourth Hokage- You have to learn alot Justu isn't everything it's mostly about a ninja's skill in how to use them that determine's they goal in life. Now I'll show you that!!!!

*As the fourth hokaghe finishes his sentence the throws alot of kunia's around the beast, but as he throws him the beast quickly flaps his wings sending them all around the destroyed building. So he forms a orb in his hand and runs towards the beast and as he gets close the beast flaps his wings blowing the hokage back but as he's flying bakc he throws a kunia to the back of the beast and then he teleport to it but as he gets behind it and once he's behind him he scream rasengan and as he scream the beast uses it's wings and flys up avoiding the attack*

Fourth Hokage- Man your amazeing, to be able to detact me even at my speed but it's time we brought this to a end. But remember you were a tough oppent.

*So the fourth hokage performs a string of 7 handseal and then slams his hands on the ground summoning. summoning a giant toad to his aid.*

Toad- Why did you summon me here Minato!!!!

Fourth Hokage- We got a serious situation here Gamabunta it's a wild tailed beast.

Gamabunta- What one doing all the way out here?

Fourth Hokage- just another desperate try at trying to gain power.

Gamabunta- Humans, I'll never understand you.

Fourth Hokage- Yeah were sure are weird, but lets get going.

Gamabunta- Gotcha

*now with the fourth hokage on top of gamabunata heads, he jumps towards the beast and draws his sword and slices at the beast. But as he slices the monster quickly flaps his wings blowing them back, making gamabunta slice miss, and as he misses minato throws a kunia at the feet of the beast and teleports to it and use Rasengan on the beast's stomach. making it lets out a loud roar and as he roar he gathers a large orb and aims it towards the minato where he throws a kunia by towards gamabunta*

Gamabunta- is that what i think it is?

Fourth Hokage- Yeah it's a tailed beast bomb, we gotta end now or he's gonna destroy this village.


* As they jump towards the beast again the beast fired towards the minato throws a kunia towards the tailed beast bomb and teleports it out of the their way and now they quickly jump towards them and as they get the close the beast try to flap his wings again but Gamabunta quickly stick his swords through the beast wings and continues till his sword is stuck in the ground where the beast forms a quick beast balla nd fired it towards gamabunta sending him flying*

Fourth Hokage- Gamabunta are you ok?

Gamabunta- *Coughing* Yeah just finish this off his wing it stuck in the ground.

*Minato runs towards the beast that wing is stuck, and as he's running he forms a rasengan in both of his hand and once he gets close he jumps into the air and add chakra to both of them increaseing their size and as he comes down the beast forms another Tailed Beast Bomb and fires it quickly at the fourth hokage where he intercepts with the giant resengan in his right hand making them both cancel each other where he keep going as he then aims the one in his left hand towards the best stomach and once it hits the beast stomach it digs him deeper into the gorund knocking the beast out.*


Fourth Hokage- Ok we need to seal this thing into before it wakes up.

Mysterious Girl- I'll take the pain of the beast, since I think I will be the one to finally make him have a happy home and be able to smile without destroying something.

Fourth Hokage- *Smileing* Haaa atleast not all villagers are for themselves, but are you sure?

Mysterious Girl- Yes my fmaily died protecting me, so atleast i can do is live a great life.

Fourth Hokage- Ok, Well lets begin this ritual, just lay down here. Umm what is your name?

Mysterious Girl- My name is Fuu, nice to meet you

Fourth Hokage- Mines is Minato, Im sorry to say but this is gonna hurt alot.

Fuu- It's ok I shall hold all of that monster's pain,sorrow, and grief.

Fourth Hokage- What a strong girl


*As the hokage performs a strong of handseals and slams his hands onto the Fuu stomach, the beast gains come concinuess back and uses his leg to stab the hokage in the stomach. Causeing him to bleed out very fast*

Fuu- Minato!!! What should I do?

Fourth Hokage- Just wait im almost done he's just excited about being sealed again .

*As the hokage slams his hand onto the beast stomach the seal is complete and the beast begins to begin be sucked into Fuu stomach till the Seal is complete*

Fourth Hokage- The Seal is complete, Fuu your life is gonna be alot different just remember that ok.

Fuu- What should I do, you saved my life at least i can do is save yours!!!

Fourth hokage- Just take me to the village, maybe if we make it in time i may live.


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The Fourth Hokage Arrives​


*As the Fourth Hokage hurry's towards the Taikigakure Village, the barrier the Kage Shibuki left behind to protect the Mysterious Girl start to crumble more and more until the Seven Tailed Is Finally Released from the barrier. What will the Mysterious Girl do now?*

Mysterious Girl- Please Dont Hurt me!!!!

*As The Mysterious Girl finishes saying this the Seven Tailed Beast charge another orb and aim's it towards the girl. But as she tried to run away he fires the orb at the Mysterious Girl. And as it comes towards her, a kunia lands in front of her, and as the beast forms another orb and fired it towards her she's moved somewhere but it was so fast she didnt even notice it*

Fourth Hokage- Are You Ok?

Mysterious Girl- *Cries* I thought i was gonna die.

Fourth Hokage- *Smiles* It's gonna be ok, all get rid of this beast. So dont worry about anything just go hide.


*As Minato tell the girl to hide she quickly runs and find a place to hide while the Fourth Hokage takes care of the beast. But first he called the Taikigakure Anbu to discuss something important.*

Fourth Hokage- Taikigakure Anbu, this is a Tailed Beast. These things are supposed to be reported to all other five nations as to not have a usurp of power in the 5 Nations. So why didnt your Kage report this?

Taikigakure Anbu- That is classified information, can you please just take care of this mess and leave?

Fourth Hokage- This just can't be destroyed it has to be sealed into a human being, and a powerful one as to control the beast. But obtaining a Tailed Beast into your body will make them a Jinchuuriki, a being that is hated and started at with hateful eye's. Are you willing to do that to one of your own villagers?

Taikigakure Anbu- Scarificing is at part of any village!!!!! Anyone citizen should understand that.

*As the Anbu finishes his sentence the Fourth Hokage becomes enraged and punches the Anbu member in the stomach. Making him drop to the ground.*

Fourth Hokage- Do you guys have any love for your Villagers!!!!

Taikigakure Anbu- *Coughing* All members have their goal in life, why mess that up.

Fourth Hokage- You have to learn alot Justu isn't everything it's mostly about a ninja's skill in how to use them that determine's they goal in life. Now I'll show you that!!!!

*As the fourth hokaghe finishes his sentence the throws alot of kunia's around the beast, but as he throws him the beast quickly flaps his wings sending them all around the destroyed building. So he forms a orb in his hand and runs towards the beast and as he gets close the beast flaps his wings blowing the hokage back but as he's flying bakc he throws a kunia to the back of the beast and then he teleport to it but as he gets behind it and once he's behind him he scream rasengan and as he scream the beast uses it's wings and flys up avoiding the attack*

Fourth Hokage- Man your amazeing, to be able to detact me even at my speed but it's time we brought this to a end. But remember you were a tough oppent.

*So the fourth hokage performs a string of 7 handseal and then slams his hands on the ground summoning. summoning a giant toad to his aid.*

Toad- Why did you summon me here Minato!!!!

Fourth Hokage- We got a serious situation here Gamabunta it's a wild tailed beast.

Gamabunta- What one doing all the way out here?

Fourth Hokage- just another desperate try at trying to gain power.

Gamabunta- Humans, I'll never understand you.

Fourth Hokage- Yeah were sure are weird, but lets get going.

Gamabunta- Gotcha

*now with the fourth hokage on top of gamabunata heads, he jumps towards the beast and draws his sword and slices at the beast. But as he slices the monster quickly flaps his wings blowing them back, making gamabunta slice miss, and as he misses minato throws a kunia at the feet of the beast and teleports to it and use Rasengan on the beast's stomach. making it lets out a loud roar and as he roar he gathers a large orb and aims it towards the minato where he throws a kunia by towards gamabunta*

Gamabunta- is that what i think it is?

Fourth Hokage- Yeah it's a tailed beast bomb, we gotta end now or he's gonna destroy this village.


* As they jump towards the beast again the beast fired towards the minato throws a kunia towards the tailed beast bomb and teleports it out of the their way and now they quickly jump towards them and as they get the close the beast try to flap his wings again but Gamabunta quickly stick his swords through the beast wings and continues till his sword is stuck in the ground where the beast forms a quick beast balla nd fired it towards gamabunta sending him flying*

Fourth Hokage- Gamabunta are you ok?

Gamabunta- *Coughing* Yeah just finish this off his wing it stuck in the ground.

*Minato runs towards the beast that wing is stuck, and as he's running he forms a rasengan in both of his hand and once he gets close he jumps into the air and add chakra to both of them increaseing their size and as he comes down the beast forms another Tailed Beast Bomb and fires it quickly at the fourth hokage where he intercepts with the giant resengan in his right hand making them both cancel each other where he keep going as he then aims the one in his left hand towards the best stomach and once it hits the beast stomach it digs him deeper into the gorund knocking the beast out.*


Fourth Hokage- Ok we need to seal this thing into before it wakes up.

Mysterious Girl- I'll take the pain of the beast, since I think I will be the one to finally make him have a happy home and be able to smile without destroying something.

Fourth Hokage- *Smileing* Haaa atleast not all villagers are for themselves, but are you sure?

Mysterious Girl- Yes my fmaily died protecting me, so atleast i can do is live a great life.

Fourth Hokage- Ok, Well lets begin this ritual, just lay down here. Umm what is your name?

Mysterious Girl- My name is Fuu, nice to meet you

Fourth Hokage- Mines is Minato, Im sorry to say but this is gonna hurt alot.

Fuu- It's ok I shall hold all of that monster's pain,sorrow, and grief.

Fourth Hokage- What a strong girl


*As the hokage performs a strong of handseals and slams his hands onto the Fuu stomach, the beast gains come concinuess back and uses his leg to stab the hokage in the stomach. Causeing him to bleed out very fast*

Fuu- Minato!!! What should I do?

Fourth Hokage- Just wait im almost done he's just excited about being sealed again .

*As the hokage slams his hand onto the beast stomach the seal is complete and the beast begins to begin be sucked into Fuu stomach till the Seal is complete*

Fourth Hokage- The Seal is complete, Fuu your life is gonna be alot different just remember that ok.

Fuu- What should I do, you saved my life at least i can do is save yours!!!

Fourth hokage- Just take me to the village, maybe if we make it in time i may live.


The Loneliness Of Fu: Fourth Hokage Badly Injured
OMG! So many typo's and grammer fails, Do you guys proof read before you post?
Anyways great job.
 

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I liked it, you depicted the fight quite well, but Minato doesnt know the sealing jutsu for jinchuurikis.But its a fanfic, so its ok. But which chapter is it? Why did Minato go to taikigakure ?
 

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Thank you ^_^

OMG! So many typo's and grammer fails, Do you guys proof read before you post?
Anyways great job.
Lol i'd say this one was one of my longest, and i think when im writting so i have to write fast. And i check some times, but im not the best checker so i learn as i go :p
it was a very nice fanfic
Thank you

I liked it, you depicted the fight quite well, but Minato doesnt know the sealing jutsu for jinchuurikis.But its a fanfic, so its ok. But which chapter is it? Why did Minato go to taikigakure ?
2nd chapter
 
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