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It's really nice, although the face looks weird. ^^
UH no they don't but i suppose everyone has their own personal opinions i just don't take negative comments very well because i worked hard on making the picture look perfect, and although the body proportions may be a bit off it's still a beautiful work of art.
 

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I like your work but you are posting on an open thread and then only asking for the positive opinions.. That is absolutely counter productive. I hope you only receive positive feedback but there wll always be a critic
 

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I would really appreciate it if you didn't talk about the flaws and just appreciate the art work you see before you,

thank you :)
Chill! I was just making a constructive critic. Just saying that if you'd work on your proportions your work, not only this but the others you have on DA, would gain a lot.
You clearly have the mood and the lightning figured out so a little of right proportions and some camera/lens studies could help you move up a few steps.

And I say this as an artist myself, although I don't do manga as I prefer more realistic work (mainly scify and fantasy). I can assure you that working on multiple angles especially those you haven't mastered yet play a huge role on the artist development both technical and compositional wise, as being able to draw better and knowing your proportions will enable you to loose your mind and explore more complex approaches.

Hope you take this as what it is, an advise from a fellow artist, and not as a bad critic.
 
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Not bad at all. You could use some practice with tweaking the body proportions to get it perfect. Also, learn to take some constructive criticism. No one has been rude thus far, it's part of the learning process.
 

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I Will Plus Rep You For Effort. Hope I Didnt Come Off As A Critic Because Im An Artist To Soooo :D
What is wrong with all of you and critics?

There are two types of critics:

1st- The sort of critic an idiot or a hater would do, which would be something on the lines of; "it's bad" or "I don't like it" or "quit that and learn how to fish"

2nd- The sort a teacher or a fellow artist or a friend would do, which is;
"It's good, but yo should work on the hands" "next time try to give a little more time to the facial structure". This is a guided advise, a finger pointing in the right direction, it not a bad thing!

Critics are not necessarily a bad thing they are needed in order to improve!
 
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