THE STORY UNTOLD Chapter 2

[EL MAGNIFICO]

happy b'day btw its good but its more in play form than a story don't yah think? it was good even though its not my type of story.....great job..:ice:

thank u kiri !!:ice:
yeah its in a play-form ....people hate reading long paragraphs lol !!
i do too !!

 

[Chakra Wizard]

Aside from the fact you made Dan Tsunade's 2nd cousinxd, it was good. Just a couple grammar problems here and there.

 

[basegirl]

awesome wease:

 

[IzunaUchiha2]

Nice
happy bday el magnifectint

 

[uzumaki antonia]

wow that was awsome you guys are such a great team

 

[EL MAGNIFICO]

awesome wease:

Nice
happy bday el magnifectint

wow that was awsome you guys are such a great team

Thank you :T_T:
here eat this :ice::ice::ice:

 

[Netsui]

I liked it! You two are a great team. I even loved the rap, and I usually don't like rap that much, but I loved it. I'm looking forward to reading more of this FanFic. :ice:

Edit: I know it's late, but Happy Birthday, El Magnifico!

 

[EL MAGNIFICO]

I liked it! You two are a great team. I even loved the rap, and I usually don't like rap that much, but I loved it. I'm looking forward to reading more of this FanFic. :ice:

Edit: I know it's late, but Happy Birthday, El Magnifico!

thank u !!

 

[Tsuki]

soz didnt say: happy birthday

This is a very nice fanfic

 

[Billyazzmen985]

awsome +rep