Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Turning Point

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Here's the 12th chapter people.


If you haven't read the previous chapters, go read them!


Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:
Chapter 5:
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:
Chapter 9:
Chapter 10:
Chapter 11:



Chapter 12​


Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Turning Point​


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Naruto stared into those emerald-green eyes, that looked at him without moving. He got up to his feet and put the sword on his back.

Naruto: I won't disappoint you!

Myobokuzan put his hand on Naruto's shoulder, and approached him. Naruto had felt a little suspicious about this toad, but now, he feared nothing, as if in those eyes he found peace, and tranquility.

Myobokuzan: I believe in you, boy... The day this sword, first touched your hands I saw that you had it in you. The courage and guts to never give up. That is what makes someone powerful, remember that.

The toad began to disappeared slowly and the scene in front of Naruto's eyes began to darken, the light slowly fading from the sewer where he stood. After complete darkness covered his eyes, a new source of light shined in front of him. He was inside his bedroom in Kaeruzan's caban.

Naruto:*to himself* It was all just a dream.

He tried to remember what had happened in his dream, but it was very hard to recall, and return to the same place again. He remembered he had met Myobokuzan and had talked to him. But the rest remained mysterious to him.

Kaeruzan: Hey kid! When are you gonna wake up?! We've gotta train you know?

Naruto:*sleepy* Yeah, I know...

After he prepared himself for the training, Naruto ran outside where once again his new toad master sat peacefully, waiting for his student.

Kaeruzan: We will continue the training we had begun the last time... Remember, concentrate, forget the sword you're holding... It's just a part of your body. I'll tell you if I notice any improvements.

Naruto: Ok.

He began concentrating, holding his katana in front of him and doing as Kaeruzan had said. He could hear the wind around him sweeping the ground, the leaves flying and shaking, the birds singing above him, the grass softly under his feet... He could feel the Nature around him, and felt like he was a part of it.

Kaeruzan: Good job kid! I'm starting to notice a little amount of Natural Energy flowing around your sword! It's a start...

Naruto:*to himself* It's not enough... I can't disappoint you, Myobokuzan, Sakura, Kakashi-sensei, Ero-sennin, Granny Tsunade... Sasuke! I must get stronger!

Kaeruzan:*to himself* This kid... How could he change so much since yesterday...? The natural chakra around his sword is still low, but what an improvement!

The hours passed... Naruto was sweating even though he was standing still since the beginning. He could feel it... The power of the sword slowly increasing. Kaeruzan jumped from the top of the rock where he sat and finished Naruto's training for the day. They entered the caban and prepared to eat dinner.

Kaeruzan: Hey Naruto! Go get some wood to start a fire so I can cook us dinner!

Naruto:*happily* Sure thing!

Naruto ran outside and cut down some wood. He was jumping happily from tree to tree, gathering on his back a huge pile of wood. He felt at last that his training had begun to lead him somewhere. When he already had enough wood he ran as fast as he could back to the caban. When he opened the door he, he dropped the bunch of wood he had on the floor, in surprise. He couldn't believe it...

Kaeruzan lied on the floor, breathing heavily and struggling to keep his eyes open. Naruto jumped as fast as he could and kneeled next to him holding him around his arms. His eyes were slowly closing, and the toad tried desperatly to keep them open, as if he could never open them again if they ever closed.

Naruto: Ka-Kaeruzan! Kaeruzan!

Kaeruzan:*fading* N-Naruto...



What happened to Kaeruzan? Will he survive and continue Naruto's training?

To be continued...



Hope you liked it!

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OMG no! Don't kill the poor toad, I won't know who to feel more sorry for then - Kaeruzan becasue he's dead or Naruto because he's gotta either get ANOTHER Sensei or train on his own

Oh, great job, by the way; can't wait for the next one :D
 
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OMG this is gettin more and more like the naruto manga O.O
ppl(toads) are dyin randomly right after ppl start liking them more O.O dont kill the old toad... :(

but i aint kiddin....u're gettin better and better at writting with each chapter o.o
 

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poor toad master i cant remember his name but what the hell can kill a toa whos old walking stick could chrush ur head without trying


plus i think he sent naruto out to keep him out of harms way to b honest
 
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