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Well, here is Chapter 1, if you didn?t read the prologue plz read it, here?s the link
I must accept this is quite long, coz I am actually trying to make a book... I made the chapters shorter for you guys, coz some of you are lazy *cough*-shikamaru-*cough* xD
well Enjoy!
Chapter 1
The Forest of Iellrd?n
Jack was standing in a field and was surrounded by a few people. Jack wore a white shirt and black trousers and held a stick in his right hand, wich he spun often. Jack wasn?t the only one holding a stick, there was a young man holding stick, which was about the same lenght as Jack?s, starring straight at him.
?Go on Jack!` the man shouted, ?Are you going stand like that all day or what?`
Jack sent thrust towards the man?s chest, but he diverted the blow upwards using his own stick. Jack reacted quickly and punched the man on the stomach with his left hand, and then spun around and elbowed the man on the neck making him fall on his knees to the ground and then he lifted his stick, prepared to strike the man?s neck.
?So… Leon` said Jack with a smirk in his face and asked, ?Is that all you got?`
Leon didn?t answer but sent a blow with his stick backwards hitting left Jack?s knee making him flinch and then he quickly rose up, spun around while sending another blow towards Jack’s face which he could,’t dodge making him fall to the ground with a bloody nose.
‘Never`said Leon, ?Never make fun out of you opponent, you never know if he wil strike again`
Jack got up with a smile and his left hand covering his nose, blood dripping from it, ?Leon… you broke my nose`
?Let me see`said Leon and moved Jack?s hand away revealing Jack?s nose which was a bit was a bit curved. Leon closed his eyes and mutter, ?Rhalnd?` a red light came out of Leon?s hand making the bleeding stop and returning Jack?s nose back to normal.
?I thought you said that if we got any injuries during training we were to keep them` said Jack the smile still in his face.
?Well…` said Leon ?The king said that if you were to receive any major injury that I was to heal it inmediatly.`
The smile in Jack?s face dissapeared and his face turned stern, he threw the stick to the ground and withouth another word he started walking away, ?Jack, come back!`shouted out Leon but Jack ignored him and kept on walking towards the grounds of the castle of Iellrd?n. Jack kept on going until he was far from the training grounds and he lay in the grass shutting his eyes.
?Well, you have improved a lot on combat`said a voice and Jack opened his left eye and saw Garth who sat next to him.
Jack opened his other eye and starred at the sky, ?Why doesn?t anyone treat me like a normal person, they all treat me like… a king` said Jack
?Well you are going to become king one day`said Garth and then he looked up to the sky as well, ?And by the way, I do treat you like a normal person, and so does Elrvan and Eoth?ld.`
?Talking about me while I am not here` said another voice.
It came from an elf. The elf had ?pmg blonde hair which covered his pointy ears, his skin was really pale and his eyes were as blue as the sky. He wore a white robe with green stripes and had a sheathed dagger tied to his hip and had a bow on his back.
?Training didn?t go well did it` said the elf.
?Shut up Eoth?ld, you were there` said Jack with a sarcastic smile and he got up and looked towards him, ?Any new interesting spells Elrvan tought you?`asked Jack excited
?Unless you want to learn how to write elfic, there?s nothing to teach you`said Eoth?ld
Jack yawned and then looked towards the forest of Iellrd?n, its trees were visible from whatever place in town. Jack then looked towards his friends and said with a smile, ?Let?s go hunting tomorrow so I can take a day off this royal stuff.`
?Very well…` said Garth and he started walking towards town, ?We?ll meet here at dawn, don’t be late.`
?Being in time isn?t something Jack is very good at` said Eoth?ld while walking with Garth towards town
Jack smiled and headed towards the castle with a smile in his face waiting anxiously for the next day. Jack reached the castle in a few minutes and when he entered he felt a hand touch his left arm so he looked to his left, revealing that the person who touched his hand was a small girl.
?Well look who it is` said the little girl with a big smile in her face, ?it?s my big lazy cousin`
?Alicia, how are you?` said Jack and he crouched down and gave her a hug, ?when did you arrive?`
?About an hour ago` she replied, ?you better watch out, uncle Reldhon look really angry,`
?Don?t worry he?s always like that` said Jack and he got up, ?He?s always stressy.`
?Always stressy am I?`asked a voice and Jack?s smile dissapeared.
Jack turned around and saw a man standing. The man wore golden robes, had two sheathed swords tied to his hip and wore a crown.
?Dad… I am going hutting tomorrow so I better go to sleep` said Jack and he nodded at him and went up the stairs towards his bedroom.
?Next time you walk away from swordmanship lessons, I won?t take it easy` said Jack?s father and he left the castle.
Jack entered his bedroom and collapsed in the bed and instanteniously closed his eyes falling asleep without changing his clothes awaiting the next day.
*
Jack woke up all of a sudden the next morning and he looked threw the window, and then, without need of looking more, he knew it was already an hour or more passed dawn., ?Damn it!`muttered Jack and he got two daggers and tied them to the right his hip, he picked his sword from the floor, sheathed it and tied it at the left side of his hip. He then went towards a his table and took a ring from it. The ring had an oval crystal on the center of it and Jack put it on his index finger and dashed out of the castle.
Jack reached the meeting point in a few minutes and saw that Garth and Leoth?ld were there, both of them had a sword and one dagger, each on one side of their hip ?I am really sorry, I overslept.`
?As expected.`said Garth
?That?s why we came five minutes ago.`said Leothold with a smile.
All three of them headed towards the entrance of the forest in which sat an old pilgrim who had started a fire and was reading a book. Jack approached him and said, ?I am sorry to disturb you Riold, but I wondered if you?d let us enter the forest for hunting today… you told us that we were welcome any day.`
?Yes, yes go in.`said Riold, and all three of them and went in, but just before Jack entered Riold grabbed his leg. ?Take care young one, there is something big today in the forest.`
?We will.`said Jack with a smile and Riold let go of his leg, letting him enter the forest.
After a few step there was a big howl and then some growls from wolves, and then all of a sudden al noise vanished, leaving the forest in silence, with the wonderfull singing of the birds to be heard.
?Well, the old man was right` said Leoth?ld and he unsheathed his sword, ?there is something big in here today.`
What kind of beast resids in the forest?
It will be told in the next chapter
FENRIR
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I must accept this is quite long, coz I am actually trying to make a book... I made the chapters shorter for you guys, coz some of you are lazy *cough*-shikamaru-*cough* xD
well Enjoy!
Chapter 1
The Forest of Iellrd?n
Jack was standing in a field and was surrounded by a few people. Jack wore a white shirt and black trousers and held a stick in his right hand, wich he spun often. Jack wasn?t the only one holding a stick, there was a young man holding stick, which was about the same lenght as Jack?s, starring straight at him.
?Go on Jack!` the man shouted, ?Are you going stand like that all day or what?`
Jack sent thrust towards the man?s chest, but he diverted the blow upwards using his own stick. Jack reacted quickly and punched the man on the stomach with his left hand, and then spun around and elbowed the man on the neck making him fall on his knees to the ground and then he lifted his stick, prepared to strike the man?s neck.
?So… Leon` said Jack with a smirk in his face and asked, ?Is that all you got?`
Leon didn?t answer but sent a blow with his stick backwards hitting left Jack?s knee making him flinch and then he quickly rose up, spun around while sending another blow towards Jack’s face which he could,’t dodge making him fall to the ground with a bloody nose.
‘Never`said Leon, ?Never make fun out of you opponent, you never know if he wil strike again`
Jack got up with a smile and his left hand covering his nose, blood dripping from it, ?Leon… you broke my nose`
?Let me see`said Leon and moved Jack?s hand away revealing Jack?s nose which was a bit was a bit curved. Leon closed his eyes and mutter, ?Rhalnd?` a red light came out of Leon?s hand making the bleeding stop and returning Jack?s nose back to normal.
?I thought you said that if we got any injuries during training we were to keep them` said Jack the smile still in his face.
?Well…` said Leon ?The king said that if you were to receive any major injury that I was to heal it inmediatly.`
The smile in Jack?s face dissapeared and his face turned stern, he threw the stick to the ground and withouth another word he started walking away, ?Jack, come back!`shouted out Leon but Jack ignored him and kept on walking towards the grounds of the castle of Iellrd?n. Jack kept on going until he was far from the training grounds and he lay in the grass shutting his eyes.
?Well, you have improved a lot on combat`said a voice and Jack opened his left eye and saw Garth who sat next to him.
Jack opened his other eye and starred at the sky, ?Why doesn?t anyone treat me like a normal person, they all treat me like… a king` said Jack
?Well you are going to become king one day`said Garth and then he looked up to the sky as well, ?And by the way, I do treat you like a normal person, and so does Elrvan and Eoth?ld.`
?Talking about me while I am not here` said another voice.
It came from an elf. The elf had ?pmg blonde hair which covered his pointy ears, his skin was really pale and his eyes were as blue as the sky. He wore a white robe with green stripes and had a sheathed dagger tied to his hip and had a bow on his back.
?Training didn?t go well did it` said the elf.
?Shut up Eoth?ld, you were there` said Jack with a sarcastic smile and he got up and looked towards him, ?Any new interesting spells Elrvan tought you?`asked Jack excited
?Unless you want to learn how to write elfic, there?s nothing to teach you`said Eoth?ld
Jack yawned and then looked towards the forest of Iellrd?n, its trees were visible from whatever place in town. Jack then looked towards his friends and said with a smile, ?Let?s go hunting tomorrow so I can take a day off this royal stuff.`
?Very well…` said Garth and he started walking towards town, ?We?ll meet here at dawn, don’t be late.`
?Being in time isn?t something Jack is very good at` said Eoth?ld while walking with Garth towards town
Jack smiled and headed towards the castle with a smile in his face waiting anxiously for the next day. Jack reached the castle in a few minutes and when he entered he felt a hand touch his left arm so he looked to his left, revealing that the person who touched his hand was a small girl.
?Well look who it is` said the little girl with a big smile in her face, ?it?s my big lazy cousin`
?Alicia, how are you?` said Jack and he crouched down and gave her a hug, ?when did you arrive?`
?About an hour ago` she replied, ?you better watch out, uncle Reldhon look really angry,`
?Don?t worry he?s always like that` said Jack and he got up, ?He?s always stressy.`
?Always stressy am I?`asked a voice and Jack?s smile dissapeared.
Jack turned around and saw a man standing. The man wore golden robes, had two sheathed swords tied to his hip and wore a crown.
?Dad… I am going hutting tomorrow so I better go to sleep` said Jack and he nodded at him and went up the stairs towards his bedroom.
?Next time you walk away from swordmanship lessons, I won?t take it easy` said Jack?s father and he left the castle.
Jack entered his bedroom and collapsed in the bed and instanteniously closed his eyes falling asleep without changing his clothes awaiting the next day.
*
Jack woke up all of a sudden the next morning and he looked threw the window, and then, without need of looking more, he knew it was already an hour or more passed dawn., ?Damn it!`muttered Jack and he got two daggers and tied them to the right his hip, he picked his sword from the floor, sheathed it and tied it at the left side of his hip. He then went towards a his table and took a ring from it. The ring had an oval crystal on the center of it and Jack put it on his index finger and dashed out of the castle.
Jack reached the meeting point in a few minutes and saw that Garth and Leoth?ld were there, both of them had a sword and one dagger, each on one side of their hip ?I am really sorry, I overslept.`
?As expected.`said Garth
?That?s why we came five minutes ago.`said Leothold with a smile.
All three of them headed towards the entrance of the forest in which sat an old pilgrim who had started a fire and was reading a book. Jack approached him and said, ?I am sorry to disturb you Riold, but I wondered if you?d let us enter the forest for hunting today… you told us that we were welcome any day.`
?Yes, yes go in.`said Riold, and all three of them and went in, but just before Jack entered Riold grabbed his leg. ?Take care young one, there is something big today in the forest.`
?We will.`said Jack with a smile and Riold let go of his leg, letting him enter the forest.
After a few step there was a big howl and then some growls from wolves, and then all of a sudden al noise vanished, leaving the forest in silence, with the wonderfull singing of the birds to be heard.
?Well, the old man was right` said Leoth?ld and he unsheathed his sword, ?there is something big in here today.`
What kind of beast resids in the forest?
It will be told in the next chapter
FENRIR
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