Draenor Chapter 2

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If u haven't read the previous chapter then go read it!!!


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Escape
The Orgols stared at the two boys. Then once again one of them started to charge.

?We can?t take them all on at once,? said Eagan ?we have to get around them.?

?Easier said than done? said Ike with his tears now gone and focused on the problem at hand.

The first Orgol swung his hammer at Ike?s head. He barely dodged the giant mace with a quick back step. Then he slashed the creature with his sword hitting its thick plate armor and making Ike jump back. Then another Orgol suddenly ran behind Eagan with immense and great speed. Then it kicked Eagan right in the head towards the other Orgols. Afterwards one grabbed him while he was flying towards the Orgols. They surrounded him with two outside of the circle still fighting off Araleun and Ike and stopping them from saving Eagan. The beastly creatures continuously punched him, smacked him with their war hammers and nicked him with their double edged axes.
Then it happened. Something surprising happened. A radius of light surrounded Eagan. It knocked back all of the Orgols including the ones outside of the circle. Ike and Araleun just stared at the whole thing. Speechlessly. Standing perfectly still like one would do in a trans. Then if the radius of light wasn?t enough Eagan?s wounds rapidly started to heal, but by then he had already fainted. Now remembering the danger they were in they started to run while they still had a chance. While Ike ran past Eagan he swiftly picked him up. The Orgols also started to get up. The Orgols chased them. Ike jumped in a bush and Araleun hid behind a tree. One Orgol found Araleun?s scent, and it leaped on a branch of the tree right above her. She looked up slowly, and when she saw the Orgol her eyes widened. It jumped off plummeting straight toward her. It struck its hammer down at her. She spun curving around the tree until she was at the complete other side. The Orgol?s hammer made a crater-type ditch in the ground. Then she stepped away from the tree seeing a crack in the Orgol?s armor, she slung a bow from her quiver and shot one aiming at the hole. She missed. The arrow hit the Orgol?s armor. It quickly turned around and gave her a menacing look. Then she ran towards a tree. off. Meanwhile another Orgol heard Ike moving in the bushes. It slashed its axe and it cut right through the bush. Ike swiftly put up his sword in front of him and parried the attack throwing the Orgol off his equilibrium. Then Ike ran off and caught up with Araleun.
The monsters were going to give chase but one, the leader of them all, gave a sign for them to stop.

?Let them go,? said the Orgol, ?Draenor will deal with em?.?

He gestured toward one of the bodies, Darnar, noticing him still breathing.

?Get him... he?s not dead.?


One of them held a confused, finding the guts to speak out he said in the natural fierceful voice that all of his kind had he said, ?Shouldn?t we just kill him... and why not just chase them saving Draenor the time??

The Orgol simply became enraged and did something that the rest were astonished by. He grasped his hammer and recklessly swung at his interrogator?s head, crushing his skull. He then reached out for the spear that was on his back and lunged it into the Orgol. The spear moved so fast and with such vigorous power that it pierced the armor as easily as an axe could cut through an inch of wood. The disgusting scene made some of the monsters retch and those who didn?t looked away with their arms shielding their eyes in revulsion.

?Let this be a warning to the rest of you. I know what I?m doing, stop thinking and do as you?re told! Unless you want to end up like him, a trophy of mine,? he cried out infuriated by being questioned by his squadron.

One Orgol dragged him off they headed off in the exactly opposite direction than Ike and the others, in the mist as Ike looked back he could see something, a castle, with a mark on it? Draenor?s mark.

WHAT AWAITS THE CHILDREN NOW WITH NO GUIDANCE AT ALL? FIND OUT NEXT TIME
 

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well i do like the prologue better but still since ur writing the story now the first chapter is usually not that great but as u get into it it'll get so much better u'd be surprised
 

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well, all books, do have prologue?s, I am gonna try do this and give it to my friends, If you are planning to do something similar do it, a prologue can be something from the future and then the main char can have a flashback or viceversa, he could dream about the future, it doesnt always have to be about the past :D
 

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well, all books, do have prologue?s, I am gonna try do this and give it to my friends, If you are planning to do something similar do it, a prologue can be something from the future and then the main char can have a flashback or viceversa, he could dream about the future, it doesnt always have to be about the past :D
yeah i already have a really good idea about the prologue it's about the past though
 
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