Hokages and the Shinigami Realm(pt5)

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Hiruzen pulls out a shuriken and Minato notices.
Minato: (He's going to use his Shadow Shuriken jutsu) Lord Third, it's useless. Tobi can become intangi-
Hiruzen: Shadow Shuriken Jutsu!
Tobi: As the Fourth Hokage said, it's usel-
The shuriken makes contact with Tobi.
Tobi: Impossible!
He then materializes and the shuriken goes right through him. Minato stand there, confused.
Tobi: (I'd better stay on the defensive for now)
Hiruzen: Minato, I've interrupted your sentence, what was it you were going to speak of?
Minato: Well, it's strange. When I fought Tobi that night of my death, he was able to become intangible, thus making my attacks render useless. The only way I got him was with my Flying Raijin Level 2, a technique that requires perfect timing and the element of surprise. But, the jutsu you've just performed lacked the element of surprise and timing, so he should've turned intangible and avoided the attack, but that obviously didn't happen. The shuriken made contact when he became intangible and the shuriken went through him when he materialized. Hmmm....
Hiruzen: What does all of this mean?
Tobi: (I myself would also like to know why my technique is switched around...)
Minato: I've came to the conclusion that because the four of us are souls and Tobi is alive, we cannot touch him. He shouldn't even be able to see us.
Hashirama: It must be another remarkable ability of the Rinnegan to be able to see souls.
Tobirama: It seems so.
Hiruzen: Well that still hasn't broken the surface to how my shuriken hit him when he becomes intangible.
Minato: I'd say it's because his intangible state is very similar to that of a soul's. Living objects cannot touch souls or ghost, nor can they touch Tobi when he's intangible. Souls and Tobi's intangibleness are basically the same kind of form, that is your shuriken made contact with him while he was intangible. Well, intangible to objects of the real world, I should say. His normal state is intangible for is since we are souls.
Tobi: (I see. So, this means I'm going to fight them the opposite of how I would fight someone who's living)
Minato: Remember he must "materalize" to warp someone, so do not let him touch you. Also, it seems his Rinnegan powers gives him extraordinary powers, so extraordinary that he can be even be a threat to beings not of the real world, so be cautious.
Hashirama: We are souls, which means we are only made up of chakra. Tobi is alive, which means he is mostly made up of flesh. Things of nature like medicine, drugs, poison, and pollen have no effect on us, but as for Tobi...
Tobirama: Brother, I understand where you are getting at. Minato, Hiruzen, jump!
Tobirama, Hiruzen, and Minato all jump as high as they can.
Hashirama: Wood Release: Advent of a World of Flowering Trees!
TO BE CONTINUED
 
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I'm SHOCKED that a normal person can write something so good! Such a great, unique idea. You have 1/4th of Kishi's writing abilty. You think 1/4th sounds bad when being compared to Kishi? Hellllll no, it's a compliment!:)
 

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You're a fan of my story? I don't think you've ever posted on one of the chapters before, you should really give me some feedback more:D
i remember i read one of the first parts a while ago, and then i saw the this and i read the others and i really like it! its alot better than the other fanfics IMO
 

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i remember i read one of the first parts a while ago, and then i saw the this and i read the others and i really like it! its alot better than the other fanfics IMO
Wow, my mind is blown! I never thought people would like it that much, thanks a bunch:D
I'm SHOCKED that a normal person can write something so good! Such a great, unique idea. You have 1/4th of Kishi's writing abilty. You think 1/4th sounds bad when being compared to Kishi? Hellllll no, it's a compliment!:)
Of course that's a compliment, only a fool would take that badly. Kishi's a genius!xd
pretty awesome.
i dont think tobirama would call hashi "brother", probably just hashirama... idk why but it bothers me xd
Thanks. And well I try my best with the dialogue. Tobirama has only been shown talking as an Edo against Hiruzen and the speech before naming Hiruzen, Hokage. So there's not much to work with:shrug:
 

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This is pretty good, should go read chapters 1-4 now <_< >_> :D

Thanks dude:D
But sorry, I had to take my time to explain how an alive person can fight souls. I know it was long but I felt it was necessary
Don't be sorry, in my opinion the explanations make the story a lot better than just rambling on about something irrelevant. Good job. xd
 

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This is pretty good, should go read chapters 1-4 now <_< >_> :D



Don't be sorry, in my opinion the explanations make the story a lot better than just rambling on about something irrelevant. Good job. xd
LOL, you probably have no idea what's going because you skipped the first four chapters. And thanks dude! I just apologized because I hate to disappoint, but I can't please everyone:shrug:
 
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