The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter ELEVEN

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The Amazing Adventures of Kotetsu & Izumo

Chapter 11: Missing

[Review on last chapter]
Another battle ensues

Ame uses her most powerful jutsu

Kotetsu disappears

The two Konoha shinobi near the end of their reserves

She is revealed to have escape and Kotetsu is found clinging to life

Katsuyu is summoned and tends to Kotetsu who remains in a comatose-like state

The messenger arrives to Mizukage headquarters and Mei issues her ANBU squad to assassinate Houzuki Ame

Kotetsu wakes up and Izumo suffers from a brief breakdown as a result of his partner’s condition

Note: Supposedly I'd release the newest chapter tomorrow (Tuesday) but I will most likely be too busy this week therefore an early release has been issued xd


Kotetsu: What do you mean me-what did I have to do with it?

Izumo: ...You almost drowned and as a result it left you in a comatose-like state..I thought you were never going to wake-

Kotetsu: But here I am..

Izumo: Then there is the nukenin-I've failed!

Kotetsu: Actually we both failed but we exhausted ourselves in our attempt to capture her and Tsunade will acknowledge that..besides we aren’t ANBU-

Izumo: But I had the chance to act as an ANBU and-

Kotetsu: Well I’m sure she will be brought in eventually-be it by us or not..

Izumo: Lets just prepare for camp..

Narrator: In the chilly night, the pair then took turns sleeping in case she was to reappear though Izumo possessed high doubts of the possibility.

Kotetsu: *Yawning* Izu..Izumo why haven't you woken me up?-

Narrator: He said somewhat surprised by his partner's unfamiliar expression.

Kotetsu: (In thought) No wonder he had that episode-I guess I never realized how important his duties were..

Izumo: I'm dreading our return-

Kotetsu: The nukenin huh?-Don't let that bother you as I've messed up many-

Izumo: Because you're!-

Kotetsu: I know..I'm more laid back but I've learned something from you and that is to never lose hope..

Izumo: ...

Kotetsu: Therefore we're going to return to Godaime's office with our heads held high knowing we gave it everything we had-and hand in the precious items..

Narrator: Having heard those words helped his partner to have a more positive outlook as he looked into the sunny sky.

Izumo: I apologize for my reactions-

Kotetsu: I understand

Izumo: Lets go..Tsunade-sama is waiting for these items..

Kotetsu: Yes! but you know..we never got to greet that grumpy old Kage-

Izumo: I think we're better off

Kotetsu: *Giggle* Oh!

Izumo: What is it?

Kotetsu: Our backpacks are missing!!!

Izumo: What!-Ah they must’ve been swept away by the nukenin’s flooding technique...

Kotetsu: Now what?

Izumo: We were supposed to take a short cut as the way we came is much longer..

Kotetsu: It seems as though we will have to greet the old man..shit!

Izumo: No-maybe we can locate a villager or someone from this land that may know the way!

Kotetsu: Your right!

Narrator: They then begin searching for anyone with directions. Although, due to Izumo remembering where Iwagakure lied from having previously scanned the map they head in that direction in case. Soon they come across what appeared to be a ninja in excessive training.

Ninja: Youton: Kazan Raitoshou!-

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Youton: Kazan Raitoshou (Lava Release: Volcano Light Show)
Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: All ranges
Hand Seal: Bird → Dog → Snake
Description: The user ejects a thin layer of chakra infused lava upwards above the intended target(s) which quickly gathers into a ball before bursting into a rapidly constant shifting spiral-like pattern as it downpours giving off the appearance of a light show.

Ninja: (In thought) Take that outsiders!

Narrator: Was stated in thought at the large mountain they deemed as a practice target.

Izumo: (In thought) Such passionate determination!

Kotetsu: (In thought) That's intense!

Narrator: Much to the pair's amazement, the ninja suddenly senses them from behind and turns their body in mid air as both sides catch glimpse of their respective headband symbols.

Izumo: (In thought) *Sigh* The Tsuchi symbol..

Narrator: The Tsuchi ninja proceeds to direct a jutsu at the two.

Tsuchi Ninja: (Shouting) Youton: Youyuu Kusari!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Youton: Youyuu Kusari (Lava Release: Melting Chain)
Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: Long range
Hand Seal: Ox → Hare
Description: The user expels a molten rock-like chain onto the intended target(s). It can encircle and trap the target and instantly begin to burn and disintegrate due to its 1,200 °C (Celsius) temperature.

Narrator: Steam can be seen trailing from behind the rocky chain that continued to extend out of the Tsuchi ninja’s hand onto the Konoha pair.

Izumo: (In thought) If we hadn't recovered from our fight with the nukenin we may not have been able to defend ourselves-

Izumo: Suiton: Hyoutenka Mizu no Jutsu!

Kotetsu: Suiton: Hyoutenka Mizu no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Suiton: Hyoutenka Mizu no Jutsu (Water Release: Subzero Water Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive, Defensive
Range: All ranges
Hand seals: Ram → Hare
Description: The user shoots a stream of water with a temperature below zero. The water is cold enough to freeze anything it touches.

Narrator: Within seconds the Konoha pair synchronize and use the same jutsu in conjunction to one another in order to counter the swift lava jutsu.

Tsuchi Ninja: (In thought) Suiton jutsu huh?-Not bad...

Narrator: As the attacks collide; a small explosion ensues and smoke proceeds.

Izumo: (Shouting) We’re not a threat!

Tsuchi Ninja: ...

Narrator: The Tsuchi ninja lands back onto the ground and expresses a suspecting glare.

Izumo: We’ve come here on behalf of our Hokage and she had informed your Kage of our visit.

Tsuchi Ninja: That may or may not be true-I’ve been training most of the time and haven’t spoken to him in awhile...just follow me!

Izumo: Thank you

Kotetsu: (In thought) Great-we’re in trouble again..

Tsuchi Ninja: Don’t thank me just yet-I might change my mind..now follow me or I’ll make you!

Kotetsu: (In thought) Scary!

Narrator: In order to avoid another brawl they do as the Tsuchi ninja asks. They then begin leaping from the mountainous area as the land becomes less hill-like and more rocky with narrow streams running across them.

Tsuchi Ninja: (In thought) There he is!-

Tsuchi Ninja: Oto-sama!

Figure: Kurotsuchi!

Kotetsu: (Whispering) I don’t see the resemblance-

*Jab*

Kotetsu: Ouch!

Izumo: Shut up!

Kurotsuchi: Oto-sama..I have a question concerning these two-

Kitsuchi: Oh-they must be the two expected to visit our land..

Kurotsuchi: I see..

Izumo: Thank you for confirming our status

Kitsuchi: Your welcome and did she give you any trouble?

Izumo: Well-

Kurotsuchi: I attacked them!

Kitsuchi: You should know better to assume first than question!

Kurotsuchi: Forgive me oto-sama..

Kitsuchi: Don’t mind my daughter as she is very loyal to our land-our village..so did you two just arrive?-

Kotetsu: (In thought) Easy for you to say-

Izumo: Actually we’ve already located what we came here for and ran into a Kiri nukenin-

Kitsuchi: You two okay?

Izumo: Yes but she escaped and we made sure to get word to the Mizukage

Kitsuchi: I see..to think one so dangerous as a nukenin would be hidden away in this land-I suppose I should thank you for-

Izumo: No your gratitude is not needed as we failed-

Kotetsu: Izumo!

Izumo: My apologies...we were actually on our way out when we noticed that we lost our map and we wanted to take a short cut but we knew without directions we’d lose our way

Kitsuchi: Say no more-Kurotsuchi lead them to the border!-Its the least we could do..

Kurotsuchi: Yes oto-sama!-

Kurotsuchi: (In thought) Dame it!

Izumo: We both thank you

Kitsuchi: Have a safe journey back..

Kotetsu: Thank you and we’ll try-

Kurotsuchi: Lets go..

Narrator: Due to her position she quickly faked her calm attitude even though she felt the opposite.

Kotetsu: (In thought) Shes kind of cute when not acting tough but still I think a little too masculine for my taste unfortunately..

Narrator: As the distance between them and her father increases she then drops her false peformance.

Kurotsuchi: I’am only doing this because he wants me too or else-

Izumo: Well we thank you..

Kurotsuchi: …

Narrator: Her right cheek inflated due to the embarrassment she felt after her father’s scolding.

Kurotsuchi: Here is our border and Kusagakure is in that direction straight ahead..

Izumo: We again thank you..

Kurotsuchi: *Blush* Whatever!

Narrator: She quickly turned her rosy face from the other’s sights before leaping off.

Izumo: Lets push forward!

Kotetsu: Ah!

Narrator: The pair then commence in their journey back to Konohagakure as they proceeded past the Tsuchi border. The landscape began to change lushly green indicating they had begun to step into new territory. Within a few hours later they encounter this country’s village.

Kotetsu: There is Kusagakure!

Izumo: Upon passing through here-we should be able to arrive before nightfall..

Kotetsu: Wow-our adventure will be coming to a close..

Narrator: He initially commented with a cheerful visage as it quickly turned gloomy once he finished.

Izumo: It was interesting to say the least..

Kotetsu: Yes-at the very least *giggle*

Narrator: As they began making their way past the village a group quickly passes them by with the one leading making eye contact with Izumo and suddenly commands his troop to stop.

Figure: (Shouting) Hault!

Izumo: Aren’t you-

To be continued...next chapter entitled "Return"


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hehe still good xd
keep up the good work :)

and yay I'm the 1st one to post :overjoy:
Thanks for the +rep and commenting. I'm also happy to hear that you like the way the story is continuing to progress ^.^

I likeyh...^^
Thank you for the +rep/commenting ;) I was wondering if you've followed my fanfiction from the beginning or not? lol
 
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Coming to an end????? NOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!
awesome jutsu from Kurotsuchi. seems she has a crush on Izumo. Sorry for delay, was writing my new chapter. check it out btw.
 

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Wow that was awsome i can't wait for the next chapter
Thanks for reading! ^.^

Coming to an end????? NOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!
awesome jutsu from Kurotsuchi. seems she has a crush on Izumo. Sorry for delay, was writing my new chapter. check it out btw.
This chapter did seem to route out where it is headed next xd That was an interesting assumption. However, whether her blushing was due to Izumo in an attraction fashion will have to be completely to my reader's opinions lol I will check it out as soon as possible.

Of course I like the way the story is going on, too. Just read it now, because I was busy yesterday. xD
Glad to hear it and thanks for reading ;)
 

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Hurrah for getting lost xd I wonder if that group they ran into in the end was from Kirigakure :) Why didn't any of the two express an immediate attraction to Kurotsuchi? :D What Kotetsu was thinking was not immediate in my standarts :p
 

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Hurrah for getting lost xd I wonder if that group they ran into in the end was from Kirigakure :) Why didn't any of the two express an immediate attraction to Kurotsuchi? :D What Kotetsu was thinking was not immediate in my standarts :p
lol Yes Having gotten lost they have Nice assumption though you will have to stay tuned to see if they are or aren’t Kiri-nin xd Well lets break this apart. The reasoning behind why Kotetsu did not immediately fall for Kurotsuchi was due to not having much feminine characteristics on her visage coupled with her somewhat boisterous persona which reflected how I myself felt about her character and thus incorporated that into his character. As for Izumo, he is attracted to Tsunade though he may find other females attractive; he usually will refrain from admitting to it. Hope that helps :)

Good job! Nice chapter again!
Thank you ^.^

Nice plus rep i really liked the chapter keep up the good work
Thank you for the +rep and for reading! ;)

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Hey My friend ^^

The chapter made me feel like , that there will be some more interactions between Izuma and Kurotsuchi or Kotetsu , like she might come to aid in the next episodes or something , Also I wonder wat would be Tsunades resbonse or Meis.



Well here is some Rep for ya + rep :scorps:
 

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Hey My friend ^^

The chapter made me feel like , that there will be some more interactions between Izuma and Kurotsuchi or Kotetsu , like she might come to aid in the next episodes or something , Also I wonder wat would be Tsunades resbonse or Meis.



Well here is some Rep for ya + rep :scorps:
I love your opinion/prediction ^.^ It is really interesting but you'll have to stay tuned to see if that actually turns out to be true or not xd I'm glad the chapter seems to be intriguing and thank you for the +rep/reading/commenting my friend ;)
 

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Ah, Kotetsu's analysis of Kurotsuchi in comparison to the other female ninja he's encountered soo far had me laughing pretty hard - it was actually extremely accurate, that masculine-tomboyish aura she puts on in the Anime (from what I've noticed) - There wasn't much time to get into depth with her character, but you were still able to nail it with Kotetsu's words, great job. It's also interesting that Kotetsu and Izumo are attacked by pretty much every shinobi they encounter, with little or no warning - it really shows the tension between the villages. All in all, another great chapter. I have to spread around +Rep before I can award it to you again, but I will as soon as I take care of that. Excellent job, dude.
 

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Ah, Kotetsu's analysis of Kurotsuchi in comparison to the other female ninja he's encountered soo far had me laughing pretty hard - it was actually extremely accurate, that masculine-tomboyish aura she puts on in the Anime (from what I've noticed) - There wasn't much time to get into depth with her character, but you were still able to nail it with Kotetsu's words, great job. It's also interesting that Kotetsu and Izumo are attacked by pretty much every shinobi they encounter, with little or no warning - it really shows the tension between the villages. All in all, another great chapter. I have to spread around +Rep before I can award it to you again, but I will as soon as I take care of that. Excellent job, dude.
Thank you for that as you’re the first to positively critique Kotetsu’s opinion over Kurotsuchi xd Just glad that someone liked it ^.^ I know that I’ve developed Kotetsu in the manner that once his eyes catch glimpse over any female he encounters-he is basically instantly in love. However, I decided to depict him being attracted to more feminine appearing females and in my opinion Kurotsuchi doesn’t per say fit that bill. No offense to Kurotsuchi fans as I myself think shes cool but it's simply what I choose. I know it practically seems too melodramatic to have the Konoha comrades run into ninja who either ambush or desire to fight but what may relieve this a little is that this fanfic takes place at some point pre Fourth Ninja World War. Thus before the villagers began to change any revenge/spite against other villages. Thank you for reading/commenting and don’t even worry about the +rep as its the thought that counts my friend ;)
 

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Thank you for that as you’re the first to positively critique Kotetsu’s opinion over Kurotsuchi xd Just glad that someone liked it ^.^ I know that I’ve developed Kotetsu in the manner that once his eyes catch glimpse over any female he encounters-he is basically instantly in love. However, I decided to depict him being attracted to more feminine appearing females and in my opinion Kurotsuchi doesn’t per say fit that bill. No offense to Kurotsuchi fans as I myself think shes cool but it's simply what I choose. I know it practically seems too melodramatic to have the Konoha comrades run into ninja who either ambush or desire to fight but what may relieve this a little is that this fanfic takes place at some point pre Fourth Ninja World War. Thus before the villagers began to change any revenge/spite against other villages. Thank you for reading/commenting and don’t even worry about the +rep as its the thought that counts my friend ;)
Ah, no problem - and I've got nothing against Kurotsuchi, she's a pretty interesting character in my opinion. I had to point out the whole tomboyish-aure she gives off though, that's just what it is, lol. It's no surprise Kotetsu wasn't attracted as he was with Tsunade & Mei. And if this entire event takes place before the Fourth Shinobi War, then everything fits perfectly.
 

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Ah, no problem - and I've got nothing against Kurotsuchi, she's a pretty interesting character in my opinion. I had to point out the whole tomboyish-aure she gives off though, that's just what it is, lol. It's no surprise Kotetsu wasn't attracted as he was with Tsunade & Mei. And if this entire event takes place before the Fourth Shinobi War, then everything fits perfectly.
Nice because we think alike where Kurotsuchi is concerned lol Yes-it takes place before the war-I just never exactly pinpointed at what point in time xd I’m glad that you feel that way as when it comes to FanFics-I always strive to write and include as much sense/logic as possible or else I’d feel like the project was all in all a failure ^.^
 
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