Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Training Begins

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So here's the new chapter, chapter 6! I'm posting this early because i'm finally on VACATIONS. So now I can work on my fanfic in peace.

If you haven't read the previous chapters, go read them!


Chapter 1:

Chapter 2:

Chapter 3:

Chapter 4:

Chapter 5:


Enjoy,



Chapter 6​



Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Training Begins​



Naruto:*shocked* I'm sorry to disturb you sir! Do you know where I can find Kaeruzan?

Kaeruzan: *looking at the sword on Naruto's back* He he, you finally came...

Naruto: What?

Kaeruzan: *looking at Naruto* Nothing. Who are you? What do you want?

Naruto: My name is Uzumaki Naruto and I seek the toad called Kaeruzan.

Kaeruzan: I am Kaeruzan, what brings you to my doorstep? *looks at Naruto's forehead protector* A Gama-Jinteki (note = litteraly: human-toad)?

Naruto: *shows sword* I was given this sword, at Myobokuzan Mountain. They told me to ask you to train me to fight with it, because you are the only person that can do it.

Kaeruzan's eyes opened widely. He looked at the sword as if it was the first time he had seen it. The sword was reflected in his eyes, he put his hand on his long beard, thinking, holding with all his strenght his walking stick. He blinked and looked at Naruto as if he had stopped abruptly his thoughts.

Kaeruzan: I have no business with you Myobokuzan people, bringing your troubles to my doorstep. *turns around and closes door*

Naruto:*banging on door* Hey! Hey! Come back! Open the door! Please take me as your student! I need you to teach me to use this!

Kaeruzan: *opens door* He he... you need me? *holds walking stick close from Naruto's face* Let's make it like this: I see with my own eyes what you can do kid, and decide myself if I'll train you or not.

Naruto:*happily* Alright! I won't disappoint you!

Kaeruzan: We'll see about that... From now on kid you follow my rules and do as i say. Or else I'll send you right back from where you came from. Got it? Follow me kid.

Naruto: *surprised* Ok...

Naruto followed his new master, walking right behind him, not daring to say a single thing, just staring at the old toad's back and wondering what kind of training awaited him. When Kaeruzan finally stopped, Naruto looked around him. They were in a large, grassy valley, with large rocks spread around it.

Kaeruzan:*turning around* Ok kid the rules are simple: attack me with all you got.

Naruto:*shocked* What!? I won't fight you! I don't want to hurt you.

Kaeruzan: I suggest you to come at me as if you were gonna kill me. You can even use that sword of yours. No ninjutsu or genjutsu, just use your katana.

Naruto: What!? What will you fight me with then?

Kaeruzan:*shows walking stick* He he... I'll use my walking stick here.

Naruto: What!?

Kaeruzan: Enough questions! Come at me already, I'm waiting. Or are you afraid of an old toad with a walking stick?

Naruto took out his katana and tried to hold it properly but he couldn't because of it's weight. When he found enough balance he dashed at Kaeruzan that simply stood quietly.

Naruto: *holding sword above him running* Here I come!

When Naruto reached the old toad and swinged his blade at him but it was stopped suddenly by Kaeruzan's walking stick. Not only did his blade not cut through the wooden staff, Naruto was sent flying against a rock behind him, when the weapons made contact.

He couldn't believe it. Naruto just remained on the floor looking at the toad. His sword couldn't cut through that old wooden staff.

Kaeruzan:*smiling* What's wrong kid? Are you giving up already?

Naruto:*to himself* W-What... is he?




What's the secret behind Kaeruzan's walking stick? Why can't the katana cut through it?

To be continued


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So here's the new chapter, chapter 6! I'm posting this early because i'm finally on VACATIONS. So now I can work on my fanfic in peace.

If you haven't read the previous chapters, go read them!


Chapter 1:

Chapter 2:

Chapter 3:

Chapter 4:

Chapter 5:


Enjoy,



Chapter 6​



Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Training Begins​



Naruto:*shocked* I'm sorry to disturb you sir! Do you know where I can find Kaeruzan?

Kaeruzan: *looking at the sword on Naruto's back* He he, you finally came...

Naruto: What?

Kaeruzan: *looking at Naruto* Nothing. Who are you? What do you want?

Naruto: My name is Uzumaki Naruto and I seek the toad called Kaeruzan.

Kaeruzan: I am Kaeruzan, what brings you to my doorstep? *looks at Naruto's forehead protector* A Gama-Jinteki (note = litteraly: human-toad)?

Naruto: *shows sword* I was given this sword, at Myobokuzan Mountain. They told me to ask you to train me to fight with it, because you are the only person that can do it.

Kaeruzan's eyes opened widely. He looked at the sword as if it was the first time he had seen it. The sword was reflected in his eyes, he put his hand on his long beard, thinking, holding with all his strenght his walking stick. He blinked and looked at Naruto as if he had stopped abruptly his thoughts.

Kaeruzan: I have no business with you Myobokuzan people, bringing your troubles to my doorstep. *turns around and closes door*

Naruto:*banging on door* Hey! Hey! Come back! Open the door! Please take me as your student! I need you to teach me to use this!

Kaeruzan: *opens door* He he... you need me? *holds walking stick close from Naruto's face* Let's make it like this: I see with my own eyes what you can do kid, and decide myself if I'll train you or not.

Naruto:*happily* Alright! I won't disappoint you!

Kaeruzan: We'll see about that... From now on kid you follow my rules and do as i say. Or else I'll send you right back from where you came from. Got it? Follow me kid.

Naruto: *surprised* Ok...

Naruto followed his new master, walking right behind him, not daring to say a single thing, just staring at the old toad's back and wondering what kind of training awaited him. When Kaeruzan finally stopped, Naruto looked around him. They were in a large, grassy valley, with large rocks spread around it.

Kaeruzan:*turning around* Ok kid the rules are simple: attack me with all you got.

Naruto:*shocked* What!? I won't fight you! I don't want to hurt you.

Kaeruzan: I suggest you to come at me as if you were gonna kill me. You can even use that sword of yours. No ninjutsu or genjutsu, just use your katana.

Naruto: What!? What will you fight me with then?

Kaeruzan:*shows walking stick* He he... I'll use my walking stick here.

Naruto: What!?

Kaeruzan: Enough questions! Come at me already, I'm waiting. Or are you afraid of an old toad with a walking stick?

Naruto took out his katana and tried to hold it properly but he couldn't because of it's weight. When he found enough balance he dashed at Kaeruzan that simply stood quietly.

Naruto: *holding sword above him running* Here I come!

When Naruto reached the old toad and swinged his blade at him he was stopped suddenly by Kaeruzan's walking stick. Not only did his blade not cut through the wooden staff, Naruto was sent flying against a rock behind him, when the weapons made contact.

He couldn't believe it. Naruto just remained on the floor looking at the toad. His sword couldn't cut through that old wooden staff.

Kaeruzan:*smiling* What's wrong kid? Are you giving up already?

Naruto:*to himself* W-What... is he?




What's the secret behind Kaeruzan's walking stick? Why can't the katana cut through it?

To be continued


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Leave comments and thanks!
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i knew that walking stick would be a B(tch
i love it as usual.

one thing though please let the stick be ordinary
anything other than that would take away from the toads mystic
Which BTW is fu*king off the chain
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I hate it when senseis have that posture and fight you with silly "weapons" when you give your all :mad: my senseid does that too and everytime i get beaten U_U

but that only means your story is realistic in my eyes, so extra points and thanks for that^^
and keep up you need to write 2 chapters per day, i decided it :D
jk^^ but please try *puppy eyes*
 

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I hate it when senseis have that posture and fight you with silly "weapons" when you give your all :mad: my senseid does that too and everytime i get beaten U_U

but that only means your story is realistic in my eyes, so extra points and thanks for that^^
and keep up you need to write 2 chapters per day, i decided it :D
jk^^ but please try *puppy eyes*
argh... must... resist puppy... eyes.
 

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Did I say the last chapter was the best one yet?
That's not right, this one is

I can't wait to see what the secret behind that walking stick is, great job as usual, Zen - kun :D
 
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