This is drawn by my 15 year old cousin
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MayonakaUchiha
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looks like his fingers are broken or something..... :|
He needs to practice more on his drawing technique.
He needs to practice more on his drawing technique.
Since no one has truly given any constructive criticism, I might as well make this my first post on narutobase. Though the picture is unproportional, and the body is poorly drawn, your 15 year old cousin has the talent, it is only a matter of refining it. Now to my tips: first of all draw with a #2 pencil, not a lead pencil, furthermore painting with crayon is sloppy, it obscures details; color pencils are the way to go when truly wanting an accurate drawing. My best tip though would be for him to continue practicing, to take out a couple sheets of paper and re-do the drawing/copy paying more attention to the angles of Goku's body, legs, arms, face, muscle tone, and fingers, tell him to take his time and be patient. Once you see he has improved ask him to color it in with color pencils and the drawing should end up sweet. Later he should try thinking up his own ideas for drawings and try portraying them on paper instead of copying. Hope this helps. 
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THIS MAN IS A FRIGGIN GENIUSSince no one has truly given any constructive criticism, I might as well make this my first post on narutobase. Though the picture is unproportional, and the body is poorly drawn, your 15 year old cousin has the talent, it is only a matter of refining it. Now to my tips: first of all draw with a #2 pencil, not a lead pencil, furthermore painting with crayon is sloppy, it obscures details; color pencils are the way to go when truly wanting an accurate drawing. My best tip though would be for him to continue practicing, to take out a couple sheets of paper and re-do the drawing/copy paying more attention to the angles of Goku's body, legs, arms, face, muscle tone, and fingers, tell him to take his time and be patient. Once you see he has improved ask him to color it in with color pencils and the drawing should end up sweet. Later he should try thinking up his own ideas for drawings and try portraying them on paper instead of copying. Hope this helps.
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finally good constructive criticism and welcome to the base...
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Welcome to NB !! Awesome 1st postSince no one has truly given any constructive criticism, I might as well make this my first post on narutobase. Though the picture is unproportional, and the body is poorly drawn, your 15 year old cousin has the talent, it is only a matter of refining it. Now to my tips: first of all draw with a #2 pencil, not a lead pencil, furthermore painting with crayon is sloppy, it obscures details; color pencils are the way to go when truly wanting an accurate drawing. My best tip though would be for him to continue practicing, to take out a couple sheets of paper and re-do the drawing/copy paying more attention to the angles of Goku's body, legs, arms, face, muscle tone, and fingers, tell him to take his time and be patient. Once you see he has improved ask him to color it in with color pencils and the drawing should end up sweet. Later he should try thinking up his own ideas for drawings and try portraying them on paper instead of copying. Hope this helps.
Much better than mine :ghehe:
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He kinda looks deform to me... It needs more work. Also, the picture is not that clear. Goku's face is mashed up and his body structure is a little out of whack. But he did his best